Love's Acid Test - A 2-Part Short Story (updated)

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: YusLiz
OMG please continue soon ... so sad and i can feel the pain coming from both Maan and Geet.

Thanks. Yes, both are in pain, one is in emotional pain and the other is right now in physical pain. One knows the loss and the other is yet to know it.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: amminii
@Opti... It was really heart breaking...😭 loved the way you brought out the pain..👏 The one bad thing both maan and geet share is their jumping into conclusion without proper communication.. and today they had to pay a very big price for the same... Waiting for part 2

Thanks Ammini and sorry for breaking your heart. You nailed it. Maaneet are yet to learn the art of proper communication. Geet should have stayed on and listened to the full conversation instead of jumping to her own conclusions. anyway they are learning the lesson the hard way.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: shaaranya
Awww its soo sad!!!
Plzzz upd8 soon

Thanks shaaranya. Will update later today or tommorow.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Viji79
You too opti, on the MC way? Anyways, it was awesome as usual.

Thanks Viji. You sounded like Caesar when he said "You too Brutus". I am all for a baby track. You know how much I had written about it in my various fics. But you will never know with the CVs. They made Geet travel in a truck in her condition, especially when they say that her health is at risk so much so that even consummation is not possible. So I am gritting myself to an MC/abortion track if they decide to take that route, while still hoping that they dont.

Coming back to this one, I wanted to explore the strength of their relationship if such a tragedy strikes.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Opti

Sorry to break your heart but then wanted to explore Maaneet's relationship from all angles.

Lolz...sorry..had forgotten to add that I loved it nevertheless...👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -sofiya-
OH MY GOD OPTI
that was really sad update

Poor Geet and Maan😔

i like this part one but feeling sad Too

waiting for the next one:)

Thanks sophiya. Yes, this is a sad fic on Maaneet. The next part will be even sadder before ending on a positive note.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: rsroopali
thts soooooo sad yaar geet should hv listened 2 d whole thing
n nw they lost their baby alsooo
sooooooooo saddddddddd

Yes, Geet should have listened to everything but we know how impatient she sometimes gets, don't we? They lost their baby too. I admit it is sad. Hope they recover from this loss.

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Maddy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

indeed sad...!!!😭😭😭😭😭

but as ur title says, acid test, i expected it...!!! ans i knw they will pass this test..........😆

updated...:😉

luved it....:) it was nice...:)

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Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Lolz...sorry..had forgotten to add that I loved it nevertheless...👏

Thank you Dhara.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: mdmsk
indeed sad...!!!😭😭😭😭😭

but as ur title says, acid test, i expected it...!!! ans i knw they will pass this test..........😆

Thanks. Yes, it is an acid test for both Maan and Geet. Lets see how they cope.