Love's Acid Test - A 2-Part Short Story (updated)

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

oh that was so emotional...................only if Geet had heard the poora convo............................nice part dear.......................thanks for the pm.........cont soon......................

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: spvd
oh that was so emotional...................only if Geet had heard the poora convo............................nice part dear.......................thanks for the pm.........cont soon......................

Thanks. Yes, Geet should have heard the full conversations and not made her own conclusions.

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

so emotional...

Pls continue the II part

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Zahra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

amazing part.......bt so sad..plz continue soon...

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: zaara2212
so emotional...

Pls continue the II part

Will do when I'm done with it.

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

It was heart-wrenching!😭

Geet in physical and emotional pain and Maan in emotional pain and guilt.

Major problem with Geet-Maan in their relationship is lack of proper communication. And its been proved in the show too from time to time-be it when Maan bailed out Dev on Dadi's plea, the decision of choosing between baby and Geet after the washroom fiasco or the latest one of not having physical relations with each other!

I didn't want the baby to die. Hope they don't show such thing in show. I want the baby to be born!!!

Sameera track, if the CV's ever plan to show it, which I highly doubt now,shouldn't affect the baby.

Update the second part soon. Hope you'l be ending the second and the last part on a positive note.

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: shivangi783
It was heart-wrenching!😭
Geet in physical and emotional pain and Maan in emotional pain and guilt.

Major problem with Geet-Maan in their relationship is lack of proper communication. And its been proved in the show too from time to time-be it when Maan bailed out Dev on Dadi's plea, the decision of choosing between baby and Geet after the washroom fiasco or the latest one of not having physical relations with each other!

I didn't want the baby to die. Hope they don't show such thing in show. I want the baby to be born!!!

Sameera track, if the CV's ever plan to show it, which I highly doubt now,shouldn't affect the baby.

Update the second part soon. Hope you'l be ending the second and the last part on a positive note.

I don't want to see this in this show either. All my fics so far have always had the baby in picture. This is just to explore Maaneet relationship if such a misfortune were to occur. There is a reason why I made Sam the reason for what happened. Indirectly Maan ends up being resonsible for the loss of the baby. Now that is a big deal for Geet. Will she blame him or will she look at the larger picture? That's why I titled this, the acid test for their love. As you pointed our lack of proper communication has always been a problme with Maaneet. Will they address this after this tragic incident? You'll have to wait and see.

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Durga

@mrk-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

wow !! nice shot yaar..loved it ..waiting for the next part ,,,

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kuttikann

@kuttikann

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Opti

Thanks Viji. You sounded like Caesar when he said "You too Brutus". I am all for a baby track. You know how much I had written about it in my various fics. But you will never know with the CVs. They made Geet travel in a truck in her condition, especially when they say that her health is at risk so much so that even consummation is not possible. So I am gritting myself to an MC/abortion track if they decide to take that route, while still hoping that they dont.

Coming back to this one, I wanted to explore the strength of their relationship if such a tragedy strikes.

I completely agree with your views Opti, I was also not much pleased with the truck travelling issue. Being so rich, couldnt Maan think of hiring a cab? If at all they wanted to show how down to earth he becomes if it is for geet, there are ways and means by which they could have shown that. And I am also not happy the way Geet has happily forgotten about the atrocities that happened to her and not taking any initiative to fight for women who have suffered like her like how you have described in your fanfic. If they have track for future then well and good.

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: kuttikann
I completely agree with your views Opti, I was also not much pleased with the truck travelling issue. Being so rich, couldnt Maan think of hiring a cab? If at all they wanted to show how down to earth he becomes if it is for geet, there are ways and means by which they could have shown that. And I am also not happy the way Geet has happily forgotten about the atrocities that happened to her and not taking any initiative to fight for women who have suffered like her like how you have described in your fanfic. If they have track for future then well and good.

Oops I didnt realize I was posting my reply from my dads account. Sorry for the confusion. By the way his account name is my son's pet name in my parents place.

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