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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME SARA... ur ff is becoming better and better than Bandini 1... Mar gayi re... plzzz post the next part ASAP
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww sara loved this one happy to sere DM SOFT TO SANTU N LOVING MMM 👏 👏 👏 😳 😳 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
awww guys that best words ever been written to me
i was sick and busy for last days for all of u i hide awsome parts and hope it be super as u want as there also gife wait for me
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Posted: 14 years ago

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The gift

dm come lie so close to her closing his eyes without touching her ………….santo feeling that her life will never be the same ever …..Ever

she lie there looking at him with her eyes edge ….tears come to her eyes there is something in her chest making her just totally bursting in silent stormy tears just like the falling rain outside ……….. He means a lot to me …santo to her ….oh malik u touched my inside u make me yours without even any try……..oh malik I can't believe u near me I just ………ahhhummm

santo raise her hand in so slowly so scary toward his face……his silent sleepy face….just to remove running away tresses from his forehead ……she bit her lower lip as she want more she want to move her fingers on his skin but how …….he maybe will wake up he maybe will get anger if she wake him up he maybe….

Santo just listen to her heart to her wish ………..I WANT TO FEEL HIM CLOSER LIKE SOME HOUR BACK I WANT TO FEEL HIS SKIN UNDER MY HAND I WANT TO BE HIM TOTALLY BUT THINGS SEEM TAKE TIME……….KHODRI AMMA THANKS A LOT TOMAKE ME HERE LIYING NEAR MY LIFE ……..NEAR MY MALIK

Suddenly santo remembered something ………..and

She gets up from bed in so quite way so her malik not be disturb and getting up from his sleep

Hours went ……..there are few drops of falling rain fall on the window as a lighter cold wind come in the room

Dm hugs himself for warm as he feel suddenly cold wind hitting his body

He move his hand on other said along his eyes closing searching for his warmth for santori but all what his hand touch is cold sheet

Dm opened his eyes and sits in sudden looking near him looking around ……no one here at all room just so silent

Dm looks at clock it is 4 am

He slept for 4 hours only

Dm get up from bed and start searching for santo and when he was about to call her ………he notice light come from the terrace ….in this cold weather

Dm just goes there

He sees this

Santo sit on the cold floor ……..her back to him she shack in so notice way more than that nothing there is small candle covered with some plate to not allowed water to reach the light

Dm in so strong voice

DM: what u doing here at this time?

She scared shacking more as hearing his steps come closer to her

Dm: I asked u question?

There is pain in his voice as stone also he just can't understand what she doing here

And he refused to think negative thoughts

She half turn in so almost blue face

S: malik me me me

Dm: omg u so cold

He just in second be there next to her when she raise something as saying

S: malik I was making this for u

Dm here took her face between his hands moving his hand hardly on her cheeks as well as softly too to make some warm in her

S: malik I made this for u

He looks down to see this

A beautiful sewing ever of his every detail of his only

Dm: u made this for me ……….his voice is emotional so much emotional

He turns facing her and hugging her in so stronger way ever she feel him feel his warm ohhh she was wishing to be here

And he touched by her gift …...she mean a lot to him a lot ……….she mean what his life is now ………

Dm carries her between his arms as she holding his gift in her arms to their room

He makes her lie on bed and hug her moving his hand on her back to warm her

She lost in his warmth ………it just like the first fall of rain on a dry land …….that much of happiness is inside her only ………her gift was been putting on the chair

And finally santo eyes shut down as she in warm and safe ………….and between her malik arms

Suddenly santo heard a strong anger voice

U CHOKRI GET UP NOW

GET UP FROM THIS BED

Santo just wake up in scared looking up to see non other then motiben ………malik sister

TBC

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Posted: 14 years ago
great part sara very emotional 👏
i'm very curious what will happen next...😊
so continue soon 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hbuy

wonderful update...


cont soon...

🤗happy u loved
i am writing next hope it not take long me will post soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi10

great part sara very emotional 👏

i'm very curious what will happen next...😊
so continue soon 😉

mimi me writing next soon u wll see what there ;p
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww sara awesome loved there closeness ❤️ but now why this moti again come there 😭 😡...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

awww sara awesome loved there closeness ❤️ but now why this moti again come there 😭 😡...

lee wait na don't be anger ...lol😆😆😆😆😆
ALL WILL BE WELL
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part...waiting for the next one...continue soon 😃

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