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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part sara...please continue sooon...why dont u continue like before i mean after 1 or 2 days woh kya hai na i cant wait for sooo long 😳 so please continue as soon as possible 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part sara as always👏...keep up the good job 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh hahahha
@hina was busy in life will continue it ,...:D u so sweet
and @ mimi awww haaapy u loved
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Posted: 14 years ago

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The kiss…………….

As santo pull khemi with her she just take quick look at her man her world …….she raise her eyes catch quick look of dm eyes the eyes that she sink in since the first time she saw them …………and she said in so low shyness voice

S: malik u wants something before u leave?

Dm smile as he stand to go he replyed

Dm: ha I want my green file it is up in our room on the table

S: I will bring it

Then she turns to khemi saying

S: khemi u go to terrace……I will come ok

Khemi nod her head in yes and go out to terrace

Moti keep saying unclear words as santo running on the stairs …………….dm notice nothing except the movement of santo hair the shining of her smile the wish in his heart to feel her between his arms before he go to his work………..she is his water in this dryness world

Dm was about to follow her when suddenly she turn from up look at him

He stands there opining his mouth looking up to the innocent beauty …….to her childish killing smile

And again she continue her way to their room …………dm start to walk step by step to up

Baa noticed his lost …………his lost in his new life

And subdrah come to her mind

Flash back……….

Baa look from opening door to subdrah talking in phone with someone else …………other scene subdrah meeting someone outside the house in the garden as baa see her from window…………othere scene ………….dm holding a letter shouting on subdrah face…………..

Flash back end

Baa had tears ………dm need happiness and santo eyes see no one other then dm ………..

Flash back ………again………..

Subdrah between someone arms laughing ………

Flash back end

And baa tears falling down as dm walking toward santo

Baa walking away to mander folding her hand and pray

……..GOD GIVES HIM MY SON HAPPINES ……….GOD PLZZZ MAKE ME FORGET THAT GIRL WHO I GIVE BIRTH TOO LET ME FORGET HER……….

In mean time

Dm reach the room standing near the opening door watching his sunshine moving in the room searching for that file

Her movement her fragrance her beauty he wants the things come slowly but there pain in him ……….the needing of love in him .for her love………….

He walks in ……….closing door behind him

Calling her

Dm: santo

She turns in surprised

S: malik…. I can't found the file I searched everywhere i……………

Dm put his finger on her lips as he so near to her

Dm: shhh I know that bec no file here

Santo opened her eyes widely

Dm: I need to say good bye ………..in properly to u ……..santo

And slowly she feels his arms going around her waist ………bring her close and close to him

Until her body and his be like one

And dm bring his face closer to her

Dm: give me my good bye na

Santo so shy so confessed so tension

She bit her lower lip looking in down and to up again she sooo shy

Dm comes closer to her ………….there inches between her lips and his lips ……………

S: malikkk………………and her voice vanish with his lip melting on her ………..as sweet music playing on the sound of love

His lips move sooo slowly on her wanting to feel her

And she just melt more and more in him her legs become week her heart beat in so fast she feel like she is in dream in other world …………….

And

TBC

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Posted: 14 years ago
omg noting can be batter than dis its out of the world ❤️ ❤️ but what wit subhi??????? 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Santo and ………….lost

DM lips move sooo slowly on her lips wanting to feel her …….want to believe that she is here between his arms only that all his dreams come true …..It is true here between his arms only near his heart ……….and in mostly he loved this good bye seem he will do it every day…….every moment

And she just melt more and more in him her legs become week her heart beat in so fast she feel like she is in dream in other world …………….there some tears come in her closing eyes as her arms start move around him ………making him closer to her……making him just so melting in her like the waves hugging the sand as the light moon reflect on them

His hand raise to sink in her silky long hair ………….his fingers lost in her tresses lost in her fragrance in her innocent

At that lost moment someone was watching throw open window with big happy smile ……she is no one else except khemi who have tears of happiness and a big smile of joy

Her sis living her life finally and here khemi left with a smile ……….she tell some servant to inform her malkin that she left and will come later to see her ………..

In the place where khemi was standing there is a person who stands in dark hiding ………he keep shacking because of anger of disappointing …………….in so paining voice along his eyes catch that view of kiss

I WILL NEVER LEFT U LIVE THIS HAPPINES NEVER EVER ……………….DM ………….THIS GIRL JUST FOR ME ONLY ME SHE IS MY LOVE MY ONLY LOVE

And here sanraj hear a sound of something broken santo back off with a low screaming as DM opened his eyes in sudden he look at santo for mint then turn look around him …………looking around in the room

He hear some talk outside

And he look throw window …………….to see some Potted plant

Broken down on floor he smile and santo be nerves

S: malikk u late?!! U need to go

Dm turn see santo run there and there to pick his staff ………..she hold his bag his key and walked toward him to give him his staff

Hummm his dream end …….dm to him self

And quickly he kissed her cheek ………

Dm: good bye ……….santori

And he left santo sooo happy put her hand on her cheek with big smile ……………awww she a life she a life with his love

In sometime she goes down where no one there ……….santo here felt secure when suddenly Some servant come and tell santo that khemi went as she will come later ……..now santo feel empty nervous and she just don't know what she should do

She start goes around in house ……the so quite house

Santo felt like the people in this house just disappear when suddenly she hear a noise ………santo walked toward the noise to see

Kitchen only …………many people working there making lunch moving around

She smile and was about to go in when she noticed motiben

Santo smile fade away as she walking back to her room only

She sits wandering ………..lost

S: what I should do? Can't sit like that for whole day hummm

She her Decided to do something ……….and she did

Santo start clean her and dm room remove the sheets from the bed and put new one as cleaning the place prepare dm clothes with big smile on her face

She feel his kurta under her hands feel his dota his watch his things

And near the door of room someone sit look at her lost in her

And

TBC

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Posted: 14 years ago
    • AWESOME BLOW SOME PART SARA ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
      BUT WHO IS THAT IDIOT TRYING TO COME BTW SANRAJ ? 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing FFs Sara...wasn't able to comment earlier but hoping if Bandini is revived the story line is similar as your FF so love the idea of DM falling in love with Santu first😳... missing😭 Bandini, SanRaj - RR as DM and Aasiya as Santu😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww thanks alot alll of u
and sooon next part coming
tooo
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Sara I hav just read ur ffs no. 19 to 22 at one go...I felt like reading a ROMANTIC NOVEL ... U hav written sooo well... I was visualizing our SanRaj again in a better way than Bandini. Thanx a lot to give me pleasure of reading... Keep up ur good work.

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