The stranger.MaanGeet : Pg28 finished

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The Stranger.MG

Character Sketch

Geet Handa A doctor at Sanjeevani

Arohi and Arjun.. Geet's friends and also doctors

Maan Singh Khurana.. The stranger.. (more to be revealed as the story goes on)

Prologue

'Yes Arohi I am nearly home. God its raining so much I can hardly drive in this weather' Geet said driving home from her night duty at the hospital. It was raining a lot.

'Geet man, be careful'

'Arohi I'll talk to you later let me concentrate on driving'

Geet put the phone down. She was finding it difficult to drive, the wipers on her car was not enough. She finally turned into her street and was about to park up when a man came out of no where infront of her car. Geet braked suddenly. She quickly went outside and saw the man uncouncious. She saw that he was in a wounded state. His arm was broken and it looked like someone had stabbed him in the stomach.

'Omg Can you hear me, Hello hello I'm doctor Geet' Geet helped the man up. He pointed to his bag. Geet picked his bag up and held it.

'No let me carry it. Your wounded. Lets go inside. I'll take care of your wounds'

Geet grabbed her bag from the car and helped the man in. She didn't know who he was or where he came from. She took him to the guest bedroom. He fainted. Geet saw blood oozing out. She knew she had no time to get him to the hospital and it was a police case and the doctors regulations will make him loose his life even if she did.

She quickly brought her doctors bag and gave him an anaesthesia and stitched his wounds. She looked at him as she undressed his top. She still had Arjun's clothes lying around from when he and Arohi stayed over. Geet was mesmerised by his features his muscles. But she realised that he is her patient and she is his doctor. Nothing more nothing less. She undressed him out of his cold clothes and put Arjun's kurta and a pair of tracks on. She bandaged his wounds and checked him again. His wounds were fine. She then gave him an injection as he had a fever. She quickly went outside and parked her car properly before she gets another ticket as she had 3 left to pay. She got changed and slept on the sofa in the guest room incase the man needed something. She knew nothing about this man nor who he was but she helped him. Why was he stabbed? What had happened? These questions arised in Geet's mind as she realised that she had given shelter to a stranger.

PART 1

He awoke the next day unaware of what happened. The last thing he remembered was the showdown that he had last night with his enemy and then getting stabbed and running infront of a car. He awoke to see himself in unknown surroundings. He tried to get up.

'Morning. I wouldn't do that if I were you. Just stay lying down' Geet said as she walked in with a tray of breakfast.

'where am i?' the stranger asked.

'Oh this is my house. Actually my apartment. Anyways last night it was raining and I didn't see you and you came in front of my car. So'

'Who changed my clothes ?' the stranger asked.

'How many questions does this guy ask. Let me finish then you will get your answers. He sounds like such a khadoos' Geet mumbled. The stranger heard her. He then looked at her properly and saw her in her white salwaar kameez with radiant beauty. Her long straight hair. He had been smitten by her beauty. He looked at her lips as she opened them to speak. He had never seen such a pure innocent beautiful soul before.

'And I was saying that I dressed cleaned and dressed your wounds. I stitched your stab wound so don't put pressure there' Geet walked up to him and checked his forehead with her hand. The strangers body felt goosebumps as she touched him. He grabbed her hand tight and moved it from his head. Geet looked at him in horror and pain as he had grasped it tightly. He saw the pain in her eyes and let go.

'Sorry' he said

'Its okay. Anyways I was checking your fever seems to have gone down. I would suggest you rest here a few days. By the way I'm Doctor Geet Handa. Hence that's how I sorted you out Mr''

'hmm'

'your name?' Geet asked

'Oh I'm Sorry Maan'

'Maan or do you have a surname to' Geet asked.

'why do you wish to know my surname?'

'Fine you don't need to tell me.' Maan then realised his bag was with him.

'Miss Handa'

'Call me Geet' Geet said as she took out some medicines and poured a glass of water.

'Where is my bag?'

'Oh Sorry its right here next to the bed. Don't worry I'm not nosy I didn't look inside' Geet said cheerfully and smiled. Maan smiled back weakly.

'Anyways I need to leave now Maan. I will see you after 2pm. My shift ends then. You can stay here for as long as you want and until you are fine. I am a doctor and you are my patient.'

'But Geet you don't know me and helped me. And letting me stay in your home. How can you trust me?'

'I can't but something about you tells me that you're a good person' Geet said.

'By the way have your breakfast. I made cheese omleete and toast. I don't know if you drink tea or coffee but I drink coffee I need it for the hectic tiring days at the hospital. So I made you coffee is that fine'

'yeah that's fine Geet thank you for helping me.'

'Your welcome Maan. anyways make sure you take those medicines there. And there stuff in the fridge if you get more hungry. And please don't open the balcony door from the living room because sometimes it never closes and I get scared that someone might jump in. This is the second floor Anyone might jump in. If u want fresh air go through the kitchen exit. The Lounge is right outside this room and the kitchen is on the left of the lounge. Bye see you soon'

'Bye Geet' Maan smiled.

As soon as Geet left, he had his breakfast and medicines. He then picked up his bag and made sure everything was in there. He emptied his bag and from his bag he had 3 different guns. Some money. Some wireless devices and money and papers. He found what he was looking for. He was glad that Geet didn't open his bag otherwise things would be hard to handle.

He picked up his phone.

'Hello'

'Hello Boss where are you? Are you okay. I heard that you managed to kill Rashid last night. Police are still unaware of who did it or of our gang.'

'I know. I lead them to that trail. Don't worry. Mission accomplished. Now Listen all of you. Dissapear for a few days. I will contact you soon for the new plan'

Maan put the phone down. He smiled that his work was going fine. He smiled that for the meanwhile he was hidden from everyone. Everyone knew that there were killings going on. People who were enemies of Maan Singh Khurana. People who betrayed him. People who questioned and deterred him. No one knew the face of Maan, that he was the new underworld leader. No one had seen his face not even his accomplices. No one knew what he looked like who he was. Except one person GEET. But Geet didn't know him as a underworld leader. Just a normal human being but his one constant fear was if Geet knew the truth then he might have to kill her another innocent human being .

PRECAP: Maan stood near the bedroom door with a gun in his hand.

The police inspector asked Geet who was confused 'Maam did you see or hear anything last night suspicious. There was a killing last night. We think it is the same underworld leader. We understand that he might be around here somewhere. Did you see or hear anyone? Or anyone who was''

Maan got his gun ready knowing he might have to kill Geet if she opens her mouth.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW
Awesomee FF
Love the concept
Gunda maan? chi chi..lolz😆
Continue soon
Thank u

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awesome update wow Maan underworld that for change pls cont soonnnnnnn
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awesome ff.............

maan underworld don 😲😲😲

cant wait for the next update.............ofcourse he wont kill geet............but wat will geet do and wats in store for them..............

pl ad me to ur pm list thnks
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wow loved it yaar and part 1 was awesomeeeeee
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Great concept...pls add me to your PM list...
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Maan singh khurana a ganster oh man its gonna be interesting.
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this is so interesting.........................please continue.....................

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quite interesting...do add me in ur PM list!!
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Part 2...Well i havent got a good enough response to the opening chapter.. so please comment... i will send u pms for alllllll updates 2mw

Geet entered the hospital and went to the childrens ward. She smiled and checked all the children. Her favourite child wasRohan. She loved him a lot. Partly becausehe had no mother nor father just a grandmother. She played with the kids at the same time checking there reports and giving them medicines.

She met up with Arohi and Arjunfor a coffee break.

'Hi guys whats up'

'Nothing. Geet can you please pass me the salt?' said Arohi

Its right next to Arjun why don;t you ask him' repliedGeet,

'Oh who?' asked Arohi
Geet we're not talking' said Arjun

'why'
'Because of Arjun. Its been so godamn long. And he has not taken me out once for a date. Forget date not even a proposal' Arohi said annoyed and waked off
'What Arjun why are you doing this'

'Geet, I've got a suprised planned for Arohi. Just make sure at 1pm you send her upstairs'
Geet smiled and understood. She left the cafeteria and went as she had a surgery today. She was a cardiac doctor.

Geet took Arohi to the terrace of the hospital and left her there. It was all decorated with flowers and banners
'Miss Arohi Aluwalia, Will you marry me?' Arjun asked on one knee. Arohi was really happy and accepted.
Arjun texted Geet who just walked in her apartment Mission accomplished. Geet who was to busy smiling and looking at the phone tripped over the rug and was about to fall when two strong hands held her from the waist stopping her from falling. Geet who had closed her eyes in fear was breathing heavily. Maan stared at her. It was like he could seep through her innocent soul. He saw her innocent face her eyes of fear, her lips slightly opened. Her body being felt through his hand as he held her. He had another kind of feeling. Geet opened her eyes and store back into Maan's eyes. She didn't know why but she could not stop staring at him. It was like she was trying to read him. Maan saw her confusion and he realised what he was doing. He pulled her up
'Geet your a doctor you should see where you are going. What was so important in your phone that you were so clumsy'
'oh Maan i'm always like this. I've had a fair few falls but everytime i fall i pick myself up again. Its how life works. If you don't fall then how will you be stronger'
'But Geet you could have hurt yourself'
'Physical pains Maan they heal with time. But emotional ones don't' Geet said and realising she had said a bit too much. She quickly smiled and changed the topic
'Maan I'm so happy today. I successfully completed my 5th Surgery' Geet said smiling putting her bag and a few others on the dining table.
'Well done Geet, I knew you were a good doctor you fixed me up well'
'Off Course. It was my dream. A dream that i worked hard for and A dream that i fulfilled on my own. By the way Maan its a little late i know its nearly 3 but i brought us a late lunch. You do like chinese don't you, if not i'll quickly make you something' Geet said
'no chinese is fine. Lets eat'

Geet and Maan ate lunch at the dining table. Geet spoke about her life to him as Maan listened as she told him about her life at the hospital her two stupid arguing friends. Her talkative nature her bubbly lifestyle was making him smile.
'Geet i want to give you something' he said. He brought out an envelope. Geet opened the envelope and frowned. It had money inside
'What is this for?' Geet asked
'Geet i'm unwell and your taking care of me. Being my doctor as well and letting me stay here so....
'Maan listen to me your my friend. And friends don't do favours do they so take this money back right now'
'Friends?'
'Friend off course' Geet smiled as she picked up the plates to clear the table.
'But Geet you don't even know me, or where i come from? And your first letting me stay with you. alone in this apartment with a guy who don't even know. Your trusting me?'
'Maan I have a good judgement of people. If i didn't then my life would not be as it is now. I know i cant trust you not to harm me. And if you wanted to you could have right now. There is no one here. So take this money back and we are friends now okay'
'Okay Geet. So if i'm a friend then i will help you with the dishes'
'Noooooo, Maan shut up your still not well enough. Don't worry please I'll do it. Actually to be honest. I never wash the dishes. The dishwasher does that for me' Maan laughed and so did Geet as they cleared the table. They both went to the shops downstairs but seperate as Geet knew everyon and everyone knew her in the colony. Maan understood as he brought some clothes for himself and went back up. Geet did some grocery shopping. She smiled and talked to everyone.
At Night
'Maan Maan' Geet knocked on his door.

He opened the door. He had been working on his files inside.

'Yes Geet'

'Maan I just wanted to ask you if you need anything'
'No Geet I'm fine you sleep'
'Okay Goodnight Maan' Rain and thunder started. Geet gripped Maan's arm just as she was about to leave. Maan looked at her.

'sorry. I just get scared sometimes of thunder'

'its okay Geet'


Following Morning
Maan awoke to find Geet sitting in the lounge in front of the table.
'Morning Geet arent you at work today?'

'No its my day off. I need a break. The day i met you i finished worked that day from 6am till 2am the following day and yesterday i had a 7am start. Thank god today is my day off otherwise i myself will need to be admitted to the hospital for exhausation.'
'Geet your a doctor. Life does get hectic'

'Anyways Maan I'm not in the mood to make breakfast. I've ordered a traditional english breakfast from outside. Don't you dare talk about money. I earn more than enough. I have a lot of money. Not like I'm earning for anyone else or will ever for any family'
'What do you mean family?'

'Well Maan I plan never to get married'

'Why is that'

'Because its a long story. but my life being controlled by a husband tellin me what to do.. NO way its never happening'

'Geet your too much anyways i'm off to get ready'


Meanwhile as Maan entered his room he got a disturbing text from his accomplice
'Boss Rashid recorded a statement on his phone that The underworld leader was stabbed and had hurt his arm. The police have found the recording and the body of Rashid. They are questioning everyone who lives near the building'

Maan got worried because if the police came and asked Geet then Geet will find out the truth and he would have no other option than to kill her. Geet was merely a pawn in his game and life. He just needed her to hide from his enemies as they think that the underworld leader is lying dead somewhere as he has not turned up. It was a tactic to kill the others who think he is incapacitated.

Meanwhile Geet got ready and opened the door for the breakfast. Maan stood at the bedroom door listening

'Maan breakfast is here' Geet shouted. 'How much bhayya?' Geet smiled at the delivery boy. He left. Maan sighed in relief. He was about to walk out when the door bell rang again.

'Offo These people can't let me eat in peace'
Maan stood near the bedroom door with a gun in his hand.

'Morning Madam'
'Good morning Police you here'
'yes Maam we need to ask a few questions'

'Look if its about that incident about the break in last week, then didn't you say you caught the guy'

'No Maam its regarding something else'

'huh there nothing i know Sir'
The police inspector asked Geet who was confused 'Maam did you see or hear anything last night suspicious. There was a killing last night. We think it is the same underworld leader. We understand that he might be around here somewhere. Did you see or hear anyone? Or anyone who was''
Maan got his gun ready knowing he might have to kill Geet if she opens her mouth.

BEEP BEEEP BEEEEP
Geet told the police to wait as she retrieved her pager. Maan aimed his gun at Geet from the bedroom door which was directly infront of the front door.

'Omg. Sir please i have to go'

'but Maam'

'Listen, I am a doctor and my patient is in danger could you please move'
'But the murder'

what murder. I don't know anything. and why are you bothering me? Go and find the murderer. You police are stupid. Harrasing us poor citizens. We don't do your job. Your a police do your work and go and find the rapist murderers and other idiots roaming on the streets'

BEEEEEEEEP BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP

'But Maam'

'Move or if my patient dies it will be your fault.' Geet left the building closing the apartment door behind her.

The police were left baffled. They understood that Geet didn't know anything and she was too innocent to know anything.


Maan put his gun down. Fate had saved Geet today. If her pager had not beeped then Maan would have killed her.


Geet came home after 4 hours. She entered the lounge and was physically exhausted. Maan came and saw her. She was crying. He sat next to her and Geet saw him and hugged him. Maan was shocked and confused and didn't know what to do. He hugged her back.

'Geet what happened?'

'Maan, I nearly lost him'

'Lost who Geet'

'Rohan. He my 8 year old patient. because of the stupid police i was late. I was so scared that i would lose him. But'

'He is fine now isnt he. You saved him'

'yes i saved him. I think because i am too emotionally attached to him thats why maybe i shivered'

'Geet you said yourself what doenst break you makes you stronger'
He brought Geet out of the hug and wiped her tears.

'Thanks Maan'
They both stared at eachother.
LATER

'Maan' Geet called him from the room.

'Yes Geet'
'Maan this is the spare key for the apartment. And yeh and the new phone number. This is my mobile number. and this is my spare car key if you need it. But make sure you fill the petrol in if you use it' Geet said Maan smiled.


PRECAP:


It was the middle of the night. Maan crept into Geet's room and saw her sleeping soundly under the midnight breeze the moonlight. Geet felt presence in the room. She looked up and saw Maan
'Maan'

'I'm Sorry Geet I have to do this' Geet looked confused. He pulled out his gun and aimed it at her. Geet was shocked.

BANG
Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago

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