Originally posted by: gnaneswari
Sorry for late comment! Wow joseph what an amazing update! From the begging i liked rahul's charector but now after reading this part i fell in love with gunjan, she is sooooo innocent and sweet. How can anyone be so innocent! Day by day i'm eddicting to this ff. U r writing so well that i can feel that i'm actually seeing scenes but not reading. In this update u have clarified that rahul's charector may grey but he is so sweet and caring to gunjan. He is madly in love with her! This made me confuse that who r correct for gunjan, i know this is a sajan ff and they r made for each other but here the charector of samrat is totally different, that's why this question arised. But i'm sure u will justify the charectors, and will make samrat well to deserve gunjan. Ur conversations are simple and realistic not too dramatic or dull. I have to say ur dialougues and presenting style of emotions are jaan for ur ff. These two things make ur ff so lovable. Not only words, but u have created the mood of conversation very well, i have realised that u have used same dialouges regarding shopping with both rahul-gunjan and richa-samrat, but mood of both conversations are totally different. Rahul told that dialouge with love and affection, where as richa told with authority. I don't know that we can play with words for this extent. 'Hats off' to u. Ur writing skills are really awesome. And keep giving long updates i like it. I'm sure that sajans' meeting worth waiting. But i can't wait i'm very impatient. So plz cont as soon as possible. Thanks for pm
Thanks Gnaneswari for your appreciation n long reply.I loved to read it. RAHUL's character is very Cute character....sample of innocent love.Very sweet and caring type person.GUNJAN is everything for him. and GUNJAN....she lost her parents in childhood....totally no Complain no demand type girl,she is very simple n innocent person. NANDA family is everything for her.She wants to maintain her self-respect.She wants to do Job but,with Family permission.
And who is better for GUNJAN is really difficult question for me also. and believe me marriage seq. ke baad hi yeh clear hoga. and,I am really impressed with your point-out Same dialogue things. Yaa,you are right that was same dio. but,feeling is changed....emotions is changed and reaction is changed. Gunjan knows Rahul and respect his feelings but, second side Samrat didn't like her Authority attitude but,he is silent because his motto is different.
and,Here this 'CLASS' difference is main reason of turn n twists.
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