..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF} - Page 20

Hey dear so glad dat u updt.
awsm yar,mindblwing.
d part ws vry vry nice.
RAHUL IS SO SWEET .
excellent job dear.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika

Thanks for awesome update .👍🏼

I love the way you portrait Rahuls character . He is so in love . The way he spoke and thought about Gunjan is so lovable . I told you , dude you are leading me to fall for him .

In this update cant find anything special about Samrat so cant comment on it . But one thing i definately want from you , please make him more rude , arrogant etc. So that when he fall for Gunjan he go mad to any extent .

Gunjan is soooooo innocent . Seriously dear any man can fall for her . Make her more januable .

Waiting for their meeting . And also wondering why they cant meet in 7 ? Will they meet in mall ?

MOST IMPORTANT , never consider your long update boring . We loved it . When i was reading this update i dont want to end my reading . 😡Even that time i was hating you for ending it . SORRY😭 .
Please update fast .
Luv u

Sorry for late comment! Wow joseph what an amazing update! From the begging i liked rahul's charector but now after reading this part i fell in love with gunjan, she is sooooo innocent and sweet. How can anyone be so innocent! Day by day i'm eddicting to this ff. U r writing so well that i can feel that i'm actually seeing scenes but not reading. In this update u have clarified that rahul's charector may grey but he is so sweet and caring to gunjan. He is madly in love with her! This made me confuse that who r correct for gunjan, i know this is a sajan ff and they r made for each other but here the charector of samrat is totally different, that's why this question arised. But i'm sure u will justify the charectors, and will make samrat well to deserve gunjan. Ur conversations are simple and realistic not too dramatic or dull. I have to say ur dialougues and presenting style of emotions are jaan for ur ff. These two things make ur ff so lovable. Not only words, but u have created the mood of conversation very well, i have realised that u have used same dialouges regarding shopping with both rahul-gunjan and richa-samrat, but mood of both conversations are totally different. Rahul told that dialouge with love and affection, where as richa told with authority. I don't know that we can play with words for this extent. 'Hats off' to u. Ur writing skills are really awesome. And keep giving long updates i like it. I'm sure that sajans' meeting worth waiting. But i can't wait i'm very impatient. So plz cont as soon as possible. Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Swaatii

Thanks for awesome update .👍🏼

I love the way you portrait Rahuls character . He is so in love . The way he spoke and thought about Gunjan is so lovable . I told you , dude you are leading me to fall for him .

In this update cant find anything special about Samrat so cant comment on it . But one thing i definately want from you , please make him more rude , arrogant etc. So that when he fall for Gunjan he go mad to any extent .

Gunjan is soooooo innocent . Seriously dear any man can fall for her . Make her more januable .

Waiting for their meeting . And also wondering why they cant meet in 7 ? Will they meet in mall ?

MOST IMPORTANT , never consider your long update boring . We loved it . When i was reading this update i dont want to end my reading . 😡Even that time i was hating you for ending it . SORRY😭 .
Please update fast .
Luv u

Thanks Swatii for your very sweet reply. In this story every characters are totally different from each other. RAHUL n SAMRAT is portray 2 different personality . GUNJAN's character itna sweet hona chahiye ki,kisi ko bhi uss se LOVE ho jaaye and woh usse Paane ke liye kuchh bhi karne ko ready ho so,I am trying very hard to maintain her sweetness n innocence.

I agree in this part,SAMRAT is sidelined but,in Next part , he will get more space and attention.
Part-7 is very important for a particular scene so,I changed my decision.Now,Part-8 situation is more suitable for SaJan meeting scene. Sorry! for wait. But,believe me this late is very good for Story shaping.

and,I promise you, my next part is longest part ever.😳 Thanks again for your detail reply,I really loved to read this type of review.

joseph it was indeed wonderful update seriously enjoyed it ur updates and stories r getting in to gear seriously loving this update 👏👏 now can't wait for party and also mall's visit i guess sajan will be bumped here 😆 can't wait for next part and thanks for pm do continue soon

awesome part