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lovely update..........superb yaar..........



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..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]


Part 7
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SAMRAT at the Office
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SAMRAT enters in PRATAP SHERGILL's (His Father) cabin with full of anger and said angrily,

S : Mr.Shergill...kya main jaan sakta hoon ye naya drama kya hai..?

SD : Cool Down...! ! because,mujhe bhi apne cabin mein loud voice pasand nahin.

S : Aur mujhe bhi aapke Cabin mein aana pasand nahin....aur naa hi yeh pasand hai ki,koi meri personal life mein interfere kare

SD : Matlab..? Kaisi interference...?

S : Kya yeh sach hai ki,Evening mein hone waali party mein koi surprise planned hai....? aur ye Mr. SAXENA abhi yahaan RICHA ke saath kyun aaye the ?

SD : SAMRAT you are not child....Itna toh tumhen pata hai ki, woh yahaan kyun aaye the... aur jahaan tak "Surprise" ki baat hai,woh sirf others ke liye hai...jinhen hamare rishte ki sachhai pata nahin.

S : Matlab...?

SD : Matlab,ye ki Mr.SAXENA chahte hain ki,aaj ki Party mein tumhaari aur RICHA ki engagement kar di jaaye. Woh, mujhse ye baat karne iss liye yahaan aaye kyunki,Unhen hamare rishte ki haquiqat pata
nahin and I don't think, tumhen iss engagement se koi problem hai...kyunki,hum donon ko hi iss marriage ki importance pata hai.

S : Haan,Mujhe pata hai....iss marriage ki importance meri life mein kya hai....mujhe koi problem nahin hai.Party mein milte hain....Mr.Shergill.

And he left the cabin but,he was thinking...
((Ye marriage mere liye important hai...iss se mujhe woh milega jiska maine hamesha se sapna dekha tha... "SHERGILL Group of Indus." mein authority...jab 55% ki ownership mere paas hogi....saare major decision mere haath mein honge.Aaj engagement karte hi,main apni manzil ke aur kareeb aa jaaoonga...sab kuchh toh Right ho raha hai...just Perfect....bilkul,waisa jaisa,maine socha tha...waise hi...Phir?? Phir main khush kyun nahin hoon? kya ye sab jald ho raha hai iss liye?? Nahin....Nahin SAMRAT...tum khush ho...tum bahot khush ho...aisa kuchh bhi toh nahin jiske liye main khushi mahsoos na karoon.....))

SAMRAT enters in his Cabin...with his deep thought...((Kya main kuchh wrong kar raha hoon ? Nahin,....iss mein wrong kya hai? RICHA apni marzi se mujhse marriage kar rahi hai...maine usse force nahin kiya. Phir,after marriage main uss woh sab kuchh doonga jo, woh deserve karti hai..Name,Status n Security..sabhi kuchh to hoga uske paas...)) just then his cell ring...the cell ring broke his thought of chain..


S : Mr. Sharma,main aapko hi call karne waala tha....Party mein jo Project related papers sign hone waale hain kya woh ready hain?

Mr.Sharma : Yes Sir! woh saare papers ready hain...but,

S : But..? Aap jaante hain,Mujhe yeh word pasand nahin...(he said angrily)

Mr.Sharma : Ji Sir! par woh R&D deptt. se 1 important report ki requirement hai jo papers ke saath File mein attach rahegi. Woh Report ab tak nahin aayi hai.

S : WHAT ?? aur ye aap mujhe bata rahe hain ? Kya aapko nahin pata ki, aapko kya karna chahiye ? Agar nahin pata toh retirement le lo...waise bhi aapki kaafi age ho gayi hai...aur Retirement lene se pahle R&D deptt. ko call karein aur unse kahiye ki, next 1hrs. mein woh REPORT mere table par honi chahiye... Understand?? (He yelled)

Mr.Sharma : Yes Sir! main...main...abhi unhen call karta hoon....sorry Sir! phir aisi mistake nahin hogi...

SAMRAT cuts the call with full of anger

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[B]


RAHUL at the Office
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RAHUL was busy in completed his work at his cabin. Just,he saws the Table Clock....((Oh! Now only 30min. bache hain...phir mujhe nikalna hoga...thank God! saara pending work complete ho gaya hai...bas woh REPORT ki final copy Printing Deptt. se aa jaaye toh usse,PROJECT FILE mein attach kar doonga. GUNJAN mera wait kar rahi hogi,aaj pahli baar woh mere saath Party mein aayegi (He smiled n blushed). I am really so excited.)) suddenly, JOY comes in his cabin....he was very hurried...said,"RAHUL wo...woh.."PURITY MINERAL WATER" Project report tumne hi banai hai naa...?

R : Haan...but,kya hua...aur tum itni jaldi mein kyun ho? Kahin aag lagi hai kya? Dude...woh "Minral Water" ki report hai...minral water nahin jo tum usse aag bujhane mein use kar sako...(He chuckled)

J : Very Funny ! But,meri puri baat sunoge toh tumhaare saare FUN , Run ho jaayenge....

R : Oh! Aisa kya ho gaya hai Yaar ! Jo RAHUL ko worried kar de?

J : H.O. se call thi,Mr. Sharma ki, SAMRAT sir ne abhi woh Report call ki hai...next 1 hrs. mein

R : Toh...main kya karoon? (he said a carefree tone)

J : Main kya karoon? what do you mean,Main kya karoon? tumhen abhi H.O. jaana hoga,woh Report submit karne aur unke saamne some important points explain karne,...jis se ki,agar Party mein kisi Media person ne unse kuchh questions kiye toh woh proper answer de sakein.

R : Hello! Main kahin nahin jaa raha...mera work Report preparation ka tha,woh maine kar diya.Uss Khadoos ko zyada knowledge chahiye toh,woh Report study kar sakta hai...aur waise bhi main koi Peon or Postmen nahin hoon jo,Report yahaan se wahaan le jaaoon.

J : Oh! Par tum aaj itna over react kyun kar rahe ho? Its a simple Office work.woh Boss hain aur woh report explain karne ko keh sakte hain.Tujhe Report explain karne mein kya problem hai?

R : Report explain karne mein problem nahin hai Yaar! Bas,timming mein problem hai.

J : Means?

R : I mean,Mujhe abhi jaana hai...maine Half day se Off liya hua hai...

J : Par kyun? kya tumhen nahin pata ki, new working rule ke according agar hum working Hours ke 1hrs. pahle bhi office left karte hain toh Full Day ka Off record ho jaayega aur 1 day ki payment cut ho jaayegi?

R : (He smiled) Dude! Mujhe pata hai...But,agar woh aaj ke liye meri full month ki salary bhi cut kar len....in fact, agar job se bhi nikal den toh mujhe manzoor hai...

J : Tumhen aisa kaun sa urgent work hai jiske liye jaana itna zaroori hai? Jiske liye tum apni Job par bhi risk lene ko ready ho...?

R : Buddy! Mujhe jaana hai.....Shopping ke liye......"Woh" mera wait kar rahi hogi..... maine uss se promise kiya hai.Apni princess se promise kiya hai...aur main...uss se kiya Promise todne ki soch bhi nahin sakta...

J : Oh toh Problem kya hai? Tum pahle apni Report H.O. jaa kar SAMRAT sir ko submit kar do phir wahin se direct MALL chale jaana ,Shopping ke liye.

R : (He smiled n said) Mr. Joy D'souza..woh kya hai naa ki,aap apni valuable advise apne paas hi rakhen...warna aaj toh pakka mere haathon se aapka khoon ho jaayega...(said with fake anger)

J : Kyun sahi toh keh raha hoon....thodi der...

R : Haan..Haan...Jaise uss din kaha tha,sirf tumhaari wajah se uss din meri princess ko pure 1hrs....Full 1 hrs. tak mera wait karna pada...woh bhi station par...(said with fake anger and sadness)

J : Par usne tumhaara wait toh kiya naa....

R : (said with smile) Dude! woh kya hai ki,meri Mom meri marriage ko lekar kaafi tensed hain..aur main bhi apni marriage ko lekar kaafi serious hoon....aur,agar main aapke aise stupid ideas follow karta raha naa...toh woh zindagi bhar mera intezaar hi karti rah jaayegi...aur main apni Mom ki hone waali bahu aur meri hone waali lovable wife ko wait karne ke mood mein nahin hoon...so,main chala...bye... He was about to go...

J : (He smiled) Itna pyar karta hai....ki,apni job bhi...chood sakta hai....?? tumhen SAMRAT sir se darr bhi nahin lagta...?

R : Dude! Jis dil mein pyaar ho wahaan darr nahin reh sakta...Aur jahaan tak tumhaare SAMRAT sir aur unki Job ki baat hai...toh main apni princess ke liye aise 1000 job kurbaan kar sakta hoon......Yaar! I am not millionaire....ek dil aur pyar hi hai jo usse de sakta hoon....usse dena chahta hoon....haan , Darta hoon...kahin ye pyaar bhi kum pad gaya toh......
His tone was serious....Joy was feeling a pain in his voice...one different type of seriousness....jo usne kabhi RAHUL mein nahin dekhi thi....he changed the topic....and said to RAHUL,"Ok.phir tum niklo...but,agar call aayi toh main kya kahoonga?"


R : (He smiled n back to his normal funny tone) Toh keh dena...RAHUL chala gaya hai...Report lekar...waise, 1copy main Peon ke through bhej deta hoon..agar time mila toh jaakar Report's point explain kar doonga....toh main chaloon...?

J : Ok...toh tum jaao....and all the best....he said with a smile

RAHUL smiled back and left the cabin..

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[C]

At the MALL
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SAMRAT n RICHA enters in a big Designer Clothes Shop-

R : Do you know SAMRAT..? Generally,main INDIA mein shopping karna prefer nahin karti,par Dad bhi naa..itni short notice par hamari Engagement announce kar rahe hain ki,koi option hi nahin hai..and mere "New York Collection" ko bhi aane mein 8-10 days lag jaayenge Uffff,kitni problem hai....you know...

S : I know,Tum dekho...shayad kuchh pasand aa jaaye...(He was getting bore)

R : Ok.Par tum bhi dekho naa....aaj main tumhaari choice ka kuchh lena chahti hoon...

S : Meri pasand ka?? Par mujhe ladies fashion ki knowledge nahin...tum khud hi dekh lo...

R : Arre! Kuchh toh dekho...shayad kuchh aisa dikh jaaye jo,tumhen pasand ho....

S : Ok..I try....

After some times he saw a very beautiful "ANARKARI SUIT"....a sober green,red colors combination suit....totally traditional Indian look.....It was fabulous....He called to RICHA n said, "Look...yeh kaisa rahega....kitna nice color hai...I think tum par suit karega...yeh different hai...I mean,maine kabhi tumhen aise dresses mein nahin dekha...Kya ye tumhen pasand hai?"

She saw that suit....with very nasty look...n said with irritating tone,"Don't mind SAMRAT but,nothing special in this suit...aur phir tumne iski Price tag dekhi...? Only Rs.18,000...! How cheap..!
Sab kya kahenge? SAXENA empire ki owner...SAMRAT SHERGILL ki, 'would be' wife aur itne low cost ke suit mein...woh bhi apni engagement party mein...? aakhir mujhe hamari Status ko bhi toh maintain karna hai...aur waise bhi itne bhaari-bhaari suits mujhse carry nahin honge...actually,maine soch liya hai..hamari Engagement per main kuchh western carry karoongi..kuchh aisa jo hamare Status ko suit kare....what do you say?

S : Ok...as you like it....waise bhi mujhe ladies fashion n trends ka koi idea nahin...tum select karo..main yahin hoon...

R : Thanks...how sweet....hey! jab tak tum bhi apne liye kuchh select kar lo....Gents Suit section wahaan left side mein hai (pointing towards her left side)

S : Ok...main dekhta hoon...please,carry on... and he left



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RAHUL n GUNJAN enters in MALL.....GUNJAN was so tensed.....((Oh God! Itna bada mall hai....yahaan toh sab Kuchh expensive hoga....pata nahin RAHUL kaun si shop mein jaayega....GUNJAN tere paas toh sirf Rs.9,350 hi hain...God! Please uss shop mein iss price ki koi dress mil jaaye....Please..Please..Please..!))

She was praying....with very low volume...

R : Gunjan...! Tumne kuchh kaha kya?

G : Maine...nahin...nahin toh...kuchh bhi toh nahin...

R : Ok...but, tum kuchh tensed lag rahi ho....maine toh Bike bhi slow speed mein laayi hai...aur yahaan tum akeli nahin ho,main tumhaare saath hoon so, relaxed...and chalo pahle Dress select karte hain...phir.

G : Phir...? (She asked with very curious n tensed voice...)

R : Phir, Sandle...Purse... aur...aur...

G : aur...??

R : Arre wohi toh main tumse pooch raha hoon...aur kya ? mujhe ladies accessories ke baare mein kuchh nahin pata.

G : ((OMG! yeh sab bhi....GUNJAN..ab kya hoga? Itne bade mall mein,9350 ki 1 dress aa jaaye yeh bahoot hai...aur yeh sab kaise purchase karegi....RAHUL ko bata doon....Nahin..nahin..woh kya sochega?? Ok...kuchh toh kehna padega))

she said....But,RAHUL tumne toh kaha tha sirf Dress leni hai....phir ye sab..?

R : Haan kaha tha Baba..but, yeh sab ussi dress ke matching ke hisab se hi le lena...simple...Ok. don't waste the time...Pahle Dress final karte hain....wahaan uss shop mein chalte hain...(Pointing towards to a shop)
she says nothing....she didn't know where they were going....
They go to same Designers Cloths Shop....

R : GUNJAN tum udhar dekho..jab tak main apne liye kuchh shirts dekh leta hoon...aur haan achhi tarah se dekh lena...jo pasand aayega wohi lenge.....Ok. tum dekho ,main abhi aaya....

after some times...

G : ((Oh God....Yahaan toh koi bhi dress 10,000 se kum ki hai hi nahin....Par yeh bhi toh ho sakta hai....Yeh Tags Before,Discount ke hon...aur inn par discount ho....ok, mujhe kisi se confirm karna hoga....))

She asked to a sales girl.... "Please! Kya aap batayengi..ki, kya inn dress par Discount bhi hai?

Sales Girl : No Mam....yahaan Discount nahin diya jaata...Tag Price is Fixed Price....Sorry!

GUNJAN smiles after hearing her words.....((Ok...ab toh koi doubt bhi nahin raha....RAHUL aata hoga....kya kahoongi usse...? ok, keh doongi,kuchh bhi pasand nahin aaya...Yaa, yeh thik rahega..par RAHUL se jhooth kehna...?))

"Kuchh pasand aaya ?" RAHUL voice broke her thought's chain.

G : "No....no...yahaan kuchh pasand nahin aa raha...tumne shirt le li....chalo phir ghar chalte hain...." and she was about to go...RAHUL held her hand...GUNJAN turned to him....

R : Wait...Maine shirt nahin li hai....sirf select ki hai...Please batao naa mujh par kaun si zyada suit karegi..?

G : Ok...chalo choose karte hain....phir ghar chalenge....

R : Nahin...abhi nahin...Yahaan aur bhi shops hain...pahle hum wahaan chal kar tumhaare liye dress select karenge phir, shirts choose karenge...

GUNJAN was silent...she said nothing....a tear dropped from her eyes.....RAHUL saw this.....and said very soft n lovable voice "..Ok...pahle aao mere saath...mujhe tumse kuchh baat karni hai...." they reached to a Resturent...RAHUL sat beside her.. held her hand tightly....n said...."Tell me GUNJAN....Kya hua..? kisi ne kuchh kaha....? aur tum itni tensed kyun ho...? main kaafi der se notice kar raha hoon...kya Mujhe bhi nahin bataogi...?

G : Wo....Woh.... RAHUL (her eyes was numbed)

R : GUNJAN...please tell me kya hua? tum jaanti ho main tumhaari aankhon mein aansoo nahin dekh sakta...aur iss tarah se toh bilkul nahin..

G : RAHUL...wo...woh mere paas itne paise nahin hain....aur wahaan saare dresses kaafi expensive hain....woh meri budget mein nahin aayenge....she said very innocently....her voice is soft and eyes ?....eyes was still numbed....
RAHUL.....? He was shocked...after hearing her words...(( Oh God ! Sirf itni si baat ke liye yeh itni tensed thi....aur yeh aansoo sirf itni si wajah se....RAHUL...its your fault..Its totally your fault.Tune usse 1 baar bhi nahin kaha ki, woh Bill ki,payment ki tension na le...Tu kaise bhool gaya ki, she is GUNJAN...Your GUNJAN......woh kabhi kuchh nahin maang sakti....uska self-respect uske liye sab kuchh hai....Tu uske bill payment karne waala tha...par tujhe yeh baat usse batani toh chahiye thi...woh khud se kaise assume kar legi...? RAHUL...you are disgusting....you are stupid....!! Teri ek mistake ne usse rula diya....woh kisi se kuchh kehti nahin,par tujhe toh usse samajhna chahiye....Oh God! mujhse itni badi galti kaise ho gayi?)) he wiped her tears....n said a very caring n soft voice..."GUNJAN.....kya yeh itni badi baat hai jis ke liye tum apne valuable pearls waste kar do....?

G : matlab...

R : Matlab yeh ki, You are fool...n stupid. Jab tum mere saath,mere kehne par shopping par aayi ho...toh Bill bhi toh main hi doonga naa...! ! Aur, tumne uss thode se bill amount ki wajah se apne valuable pearls jaise tears waste kar diye... (His voice tone is very soft n caring)

G : Tum kyun doge bill....? (she asked innocently)

R : Kyun ki,main dena chahta hoon....Kyunki,tum meri sabse achhi dost ho... kyunki....

G : Kyunki.....?

R : Kyunki, You are part of 'My family'.......kya hum 'family' nahin hain GUNJAN...? (His voice tone was serious)

G : Woh hai RAHUL..... par woh really kaafi expensive hain.....

R : Aur meri salary bhi kaafi zyada hai....aur saving bhi.....Yaar! thode toh kharch karaya karo....warna main Kanjoos ban jaaoonga....He said naughitly... GUNJAN was smiling.....


G : Woh thik hai..par main itne kharch nahin kara sakti.....

R : Ok...koi baat nahin...phir inhen apna Gift or Present samajh kar rakh lo....

G : Kaisa Gift...?

R : Yaad hai...jab tum school mein Top karti thi toh main tumhen 1 Box deta tha jisme
Chocolates n Candies hote the....

G : Haan ! Yaad hai.....aur main uss Box ka hamesha wait karti thi....(She smiled...)

R : Aur aaj tumne University mein top kiya hai.....aur meri Income bhi kaafi zyada hai toh ab Woh Box bhi kuchh bada hona chahiye naa....? what's say...so,GUNJAN aaj ki shopping...aapke liye present hai...meri taraf se...now,smile...Ab toh smile kar do...!

GUNJAN was smilled........she knew that....((RAHUL se argument nahin kar sakti....woh bura maan jaayega....Unkle ke account se amount withdrawal na karne ki wajah se bhi woh mujh se naraaz ho gaya tha.....agar abhi mana kar diya toh...woh hurt hoga.....main usse hurt nahin kar sakti....kabhi nahin....))

R : Ab kya soch rahi ho...? Chalein ? abhi kaafi kuchh select karna hai..Puri shopping hi bachi hui hai , aur ghar jakar ready bhi toh hona hai....Party aaj shaam mein hai,yaad hai naa...? maine suna hai girlz kaafi time lagati hain ,ready hone mein...? agar yahin der ho gayi toh Party mein kab jaayenge...? (He was trying to cheer-up her mood with his normal funny lines)

G : Ok...chalte hain...waise main zyada time nahin leti,Ready hone mein....

R : I know (He winked his eyes) Kyunki,Natural beauty ko kisi artificial touch-up ki zaroorat hi nahin hoti...

G : RAHUL...!

R : GUNJAN...! (He said with a repeat tone n smiled)

They again go to same shop.and RAHUL saw same dress (That ANARKALI suit)
((Wow! Its so beautiful...out of the world...yeh dress sirf GUNJAN ke liye hai...jaise sirf ussike liye banai gayi ho....woh iss dress mein bahot khoobsurat lagegi...ussise poochta hoon...)) and he said,"GUNJAN tumne ye dress dekhi...? How's it? Tum par kaafi achhi lagegi....Yeh le loon?"

GUNJAN was exiceted...it was really beautiful Dress.She just sees the Dress Price Tag.....((Oh God! Rs.18,000'Only'.woh bhi sirf 1 Dress ke...? "ONLY"..? ab itni expensive Dress lene ke baad banda kuchh aur le paayega kya...?)) No RAHUL...itni bhi achhi nahin hai...Kitni heavy lag rahi hai.Party se zyada kisi ke Engagement ka suit lag raha hai...kuchh aur dekhte hain naa...

R : I am not blind Pinki !....mujhe pata hai Yeh dress kyun 'achhi' nahin hai...! Maine tumhen Price Tag dekhte hue dekh liya tha so,yeh reason toh acceptable nahin.....Mujhe yeh dress pasand hai...aur,Hum yehi dress le rahe hain...

G : Par RAHUL...?

R : Par...war kuchh nahin...maine keh diya toh keh diya...Hum ye Dress le rahe hain...toh le rahe hain.....Ok.now,tum iske matching sandels try karo....main bas abhi aaya....

G : Ok...par jaldi aana....

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[D]

SAMRAT in '
NAKSHATRA'(A Diamond Jewellery Shop) :

S : ((Mujhe ek achhi si Engagement ring leni hogi.....RICHA ke liye..but,mujhe idea nahin hai,usse kaun si ring pasand aayegi....ussi ko kehta hoon...choose kar le...)) He made a call to RICHA....

S : Hello! RICHA....tumne Dress select kar li...? agar kar li ho toh...main "NAKSHATRA" Show Room mein hoon....yahaan aa jaao....Mujhe tumhaare liye ring leni hai...tumhen jo pasand ho...

R : (with irritating voice) SAMRAT....main abhi tak Dress select nahin kar paa rahi....kitni shop dekh li..yahaan kuchh bhi Exclusive nahin hai...I am totally fade-up with this...Please! tum Ring khud hi decide kar lo naa.....agar mujhe pasand nahin aayi toh main baad mein dusri le loongi...1 ring hi toh hai...Kya farq padta hai...? Please Honey ! Try to understand.. (She trying to cover-up her rudeness)

S : Ok...main dekhta hoon...and he cut the call.((Ab toh khud hi kuchh select karna hoga...Uff kahan phans gaya main....? Pata nahin Girlz itni complicated kyun hoti hain...aur inki shopping kitni irritating hoti hai...Kuchh pasand hi nahin aata inhen...kitni pyaari Dress thi...par nahin...woh nahin leni...and I am sure...RING bhi pasand nahin aayegi....Go to hell...main woh Ring loonga jo mujhe pasand hogi...agar usse pasand nahin aayi toh kahoonga jaao dusri le lo..))

He was lost in his thought...suddenly,he saw a Ring..a Diamond Ring....It was very beautiful...Simply Superb piece....he said to shop-keeper...

S : Excuse me....Kya mujhe woh Ring dikhayenge.....

S.K. : Sorry Sir ! But,woh sold ho chuki hai...

S : Par,agar sold ho chuki hai toh woh Display Window(Show Case) mein kyun hai?

S.K. : Actually,'woh' Credit Card ke through payment karna chahte the... but,unfortunately that time machine mein kuchh error aa gaya tha....woh abhi kuchh aur lene gaye hain...aate hi honge...Unhone RING book kar di hai...

S : (He said angrily) Usne RING book ki hai....Purchase toh nahin ki...mujhe same Ring chahiye...abhi issi waqt...

S.K. : Sorry Sir! But,Its not possible...woh 1 hi piece hai...woh New "Exclusive collection" ka part hai...jo very Exclusive hain....Pure India mein only 10 pieces ki hi supply ki gayi hai...Hum usse Order de kar bhi nahin manga sakte....

S : Aap meri baat samajh nahin rahe.....woh kaisa bhi collection ho....mujhe woh chahiye...

S.K. : Sir! Aap bhi meri baat nahin samajh rahe....hum woh nahin de sakte... par agar aap unse baat karen jinhone isse book kiya hai toh....I think problem solved ho sakti hai.

S : How dare you...? Tumhen pata hai..main kaun hoon....Main SAMRAT SHERGILL....owner of SHERGILL EMPIRE...1 ring ke liye kisi aur se request karoonga...? Where is your Boss ? where is Shop Owner..? (He yelled) Dekhta hoon ab tum iss Shop mein kitni der tak rehte ho...? (He said very angrily) Tumhen shayad nahin pata...SAMRAT SHERGILL ko 'naa' sunne ki aadat nahin .

S.K. : (He was scared after hearing his name) Sorry Sir! But, mera woh matlab nahin tha.....I am Sorry! Main aapko jaanta nahin tha..issliye galti ho gayi.... Aap Please meri shikayat na karein...Main woh Ring aapko deta hoon....Main 'unhen' kuchh aur de doonga....

S : Its better for you....and your Shop.

He saw this Ring again....((Its so beautiful....Exclusive piece for SAMRAT..agar yeh RICHA ko pasand nahin bhi aayi...toh bhi main isse return nahin karoonga...
But,I am sure woh isse zaroor pasand karegi....par,usse abhi nahin..direct PARTY mein hi dikhaoonga...))


After payment....he left the shop.He was happy.....a happiness of Victory....


after few minutes,

A Guy came to Shop Keepar...and said...."I hope ab aapki Machine error problem solved ho gayi hogi....Now,meri Ring toh mujhe de sakte hain....Please thoda jaldi kijiye...koi wait kar raha hai..."

S.K. - Sorry Mr.Nanda ! Par Hum aapko woh Ring nahin de sakte....!

Mr.Nanda....!! He was RAHUL...... RAHUL NANDA...

R : Nahin de sakte matlab...maine abhi thodi der pahle usse book kiya tha... main payment de raha tha but, aapki machine mein error tha....maine booking charges bhi diye the...phir aap kyun nahin de sakte....(He said angrily)

S.K. - Wo...Woh...actually usme manufacturing defect tha....aur jab Company se information aayi toh hamein usse return karna pada....Woh Goodwill matter tha...Hum coustomer ko defective piece supply nahin kar sakte...

R : You are lying. Usmen koi defect nahin tha....I'll sue you and your shop in Consumer Forum....you cheated me....He shouted

S.K. - Sorry Sir! for trouble....but, main aapko usse bhi better n Best pieces dikhata hoon...I am sure woh bhi aapko pasand aayega....

R : Just shut-Up....tum rakho apne Best pieces apne paas....MUMBAI mein aur bhi shops hain..... and he left the Shop with full of anger.....((Oh ! Mujhe woh Ring chahiye thi....Main GUNJAN ko ussi ring se purpose karna chahta tha... woh ring sirf meri GUNJAN ke liye thi...Yeh kya ho raha hai.....GOD ! Yeh aap mere saath kya kar rahe ho...Pahle office mein suddenly Uss SAMRAT
ki urgent call....phir GUNJAN ke aansoo....aur now,ye Ring.....?? Dude! maine tumse ye sab toh nahin maanga tha....Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki,aap mujhe meri GUNJAN ke paas jaane se rok rahe ho......Please...Yaar! support nahin kar sakte toh at least,Obstacle toh mat bano...aap toh sab jaante ho...kitna pyar karta hoon uss se...Mom-Dad aur GUNJAN....Yehi toh life hain meri.... aur, GUNJAN...1 rose petals si nazuk hai woh...kya hai koi tumhaari nazar mein jo uska mujh se better khyal rakh sake...uski itni care kar sake....? usse har khushi de sake...? Impossible...hai naa.....toh phir...kyun hum donon ko takleef de rahe ho..? RAHUL...tujhe kuchh extra effort karni hogi...'Yeh'[GOD] tujhe support nahin kar rahe toh kya...tujhe khud par bharosa rakhna hoga...apne pyar par bharosa rakhna hoga...GUNJAN par bharosa rakhna hoga....))


RAHUL was upset...deeply upset....Upset with GOD...upset with himself... But,his thought....why was he thinking....."Aaj ab tak jo hua....kya wo sirf 1 coincidense hai ??...Yaa...phir...?"

[>>>>>>>]

⭐️*Friends,hope you like it.Sorry for Longest Update (Sorry! If you get bore). I Hope you enjoyed it. I am trying my best , thank you for bearing me.Sorry Friends ! if you disappoint 😳Next part is SaJan 1st meeting Part. I am still trying to improve. Please,Point-Out my mistakes.*

[JOSEPH]








Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago
Swaatii thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Please wait for comment . I wil update it after some time .
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow, dude.......amazing............such flawless writing and presentation.......it really is a treat to read the updates.........awesome update............ do continue soon.......

Swati.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaNia_2

Wow, dude.......amazing............such flawless writing and presentation.......it really is a treat to read the updates.........awesome update............ do continue soon.......


Swati.



Thanks Swati for your Comment n appreciation. It really means a lot to me. and yes Thanks for support also.😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum update.........just luvd it.........😃

wow it was rocking.........gunjan purchased same dress wich samrat had 1st selected........awesum.......m sure samrat wud b shocked to see her in that dress........😲....... & m just wondering k samrat & rahul ko same cheeze kyu pasand h.......1st samrat lykd that dress & den rahul 2 liked it only then rahul selected that ring & samrat ko bhi voi psand ayi & i thnk gunjan k saath bhi kuch aisa hi hone wala h........rahul already loves her & now samrat 2........in dono ka chakkar kya h.......?!😆

luvd the ring sequence.........god samrat me attitude kut-kut k bhara h....... & the shop-keeper was hell-scared.......😲......bechara.......i know k vo ring gunjan ki hi hone waali h but the biggest question is kon pahenayega usse vo ring? SAMRAT ya RAHUL........ JOSEPH only knows & plzzzz let us also knw.........😆

GOSH! richa has sooooooo much of attitude..........she doesn't even cares 4 her fiancee's feelings......she is only concerned about her so-called "STATUS".........shez sooooo SELF-CENTERED..........🤢

& now m really feeling sad 4 rahul..........bechara.......ab to GOD bhi uski help nai kar rahe 'USKI' gunjan usko wapas dilaane me..........i thnk even god doesn't want SaJan 2 b seperate........😉

MATCH MADE IN HEAVEN..........

dnt worry rahul....... JOSEPH will find u an another girl, right JOSEPH?😉.........poor boy!

the update was just MIND-BLOWING............truly ROCKING...........totally luvd it........i luv long updates so plzzzzz continue giving long updates......... & m eagerly w8ing 4 the next update.......SaJan meet......... dnt make us wait 4 long.......plzzzzzzz update fast..........i hope i dnt bore u with my long comments........if i do, plzzzzz tell me........i'l rply short then.......😳

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GT 2 PM ME...........

W8ing eagerly 4 ur next update.........do cont soon.........😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Another Rocking Part Bro.👏 👏 👏 Fabulous.I really liked it. All scenes was Awesome and I like your Presentation Style, more...👍🏼Its Outstanding,Very eye-catchy.😍👏 SAM , RAHUL office scene was good but, Whole Mall scenes was Fantastic.Dress n Ring shop seq. was amazing😍 very well established scenes👏

I loved their convo., most. Long Update is treat for me...I don't know about others Opinion.Thank you so much for PM. Please,Yaar ! Update fast.....

-S O H A M.

Edited by SHAMSHIR-MJHT - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you for update .

Tomorrow is my chemistry final practical . And i was totally bore of studying . Dont know why but today really missing mjht very much . Thank you for giving a change in this boring day .

Ok coming to updates .

As usual still falling for Rohan . Owwwww kash koi hame bhi aise pyar karta . But afsos , i am not gunjan . Anyway , he is ready to propose her that shows he is so much eager to have her , for her protection , to have right on her . As he know she is very delicate and have a tag of HANDLE WITH CARE . He is soooooo much in luv .

Richa is so arrogant . I thought she really luv Samrat but she love STATUS .

Choosing a ring and a dress that too for a girl shows Samrats positive side . Thank you for that . But really he knows how to use name and power . Now i really want to know that does he will really luv Gunjan and respect her decision or only want her by hook or trook.

Loved Gunjan innocence . In this ff she is really a sweet heart . And not forget to mention her self respect . That is very important for a female lead (LOL) .

REQUEST
Please whenever you pm , please write the heading . I am still not able to link it . So when ever i get your pm , i use to in to your post for the link . It is very necessary for me as whenever you will start other story i should have to know that this is not previous one .
Please try to show the dresses they will be wearing in party .

Thank you
luv u
Edited by Swaatii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update. It had presented lots of inner feelings of charectors. And rahul is sooo sweet. I think i'm falling for him. Don't worry my first love will always be ur ff (lol). And that rahul's dialogue '' Agar woh pyaar bhi kam pad gaya toh, '' that was awesome, i liked this dialogue most, it is simple but it had depicted so many feelings. It had showed rahul's sinciarity, insecurities, love and affection towards gunjan perfectly. U have done an awesome work. And gunjan is so januable. We all knew that samrat is not happy with richa, he wants something than money and power, he wants love, and i think some where in his heart, he also feel it. But he is not ready to accept it. No worries when gunjan comes in his life, his life will fill with happiness and love. Rahul and samrat have same tastes but they both r very different to each other. Loved that ring and dress part. I have guessed that gunjan will buy that dress. Regarding the ring it will come to gunjan but its not from rahul its from samrat. I'm sure that he'll give that ring to gunjan not now but one day he'll because i feel that ring belongs to gunjan. Samrat had became so hyper just for a ring, what will be his reaction when it comes to gunjan? I'm very scared because in this update it was cleared that samrat will go to any extent to get what he wants. And i have the same doubts which rahul had! Will samrat be able to give the happiness and love which gunjan deserves? But i'm sure you'll shape it well. Waiting eagerly for sajans first meeting, i'm really excited to see what will be their first impressions to each other. Do cont soon. I can't wait now. Sorry for late and long reply. Thanks for pm and long update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear amazing part.
vry vry nicely writen.
luv d part.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika

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