..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF} - Page 19

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi joseph bhai...............😊
very beatiful part..................👏
looking forward for sajan meet................😍
plz cont soon................👍🏼
luv u bhai❤️..................🤗
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part 4
hey joseph
awsome update love this part
i love gunjan shes so cute
and rahul and gunjans friendship is really cute............
i liked samrat and dai ma's talk also
i hope that inocent samrat comes out soon
do continue soon
love
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part 5
hey joseph
awsome part
the whole family seens were very cute
im just waiting for sajan to meet
and to see what happens
so cont soon
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Josephhhh 🤗
ALL The Parts Were Really Gr8 . . . The Concept Is AMAZING & I Mean It !! 😳 You Have Done ALL The Characters Like Grey Types Without Gunjan & That Makes Me Curios To Know What Will Hapen NOW < 3 !! 😍 Soo Pllzz Keep Updating FAST ! && Good Luck With The Story Dear 😳
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Hey joseph atlast i m here to comment on ur updates....frst of all a very big congratulation for writting such a wonderful story ..i m totally loving it ...its amazing........beautiful........superb.......when i was reading it i was totally lost in it ...when r u updating the next part ..plss update soon i m waiting ..n i only have one complain from u ..why do say all the time I know,this part is not up to the mark..
plsss don't say this ...ur each n every update is more than expectations ....keep up ur good work Joseph 👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️
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..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]


Part 6
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NANDA HOUSE
:
The next morning,RAHUL wake-up early.He went to GUNJAN's room.He sees her sleeping peacefully.He didn't want to wake-up her....after seeing her..he was lost in his thought....((Yakeen nahin aata Gunjan...tum mere itne kareeb ho...Itne kareeb jise main khud mein mahsoos kar sakta hoon....Kitni bholi....kitni khoobsurat...ek angle ki tarah...tum sote hue aur bhi zyada innocent lagti ho..ek chhote bachhe si masoom...Tum meri Princess ho...Jise main duniya ki saari khushiyaan dena chahta hoon...Itna Pyar dena chahta hoon ki,Pyar word bhi chota pad jaaye....Tumhaare liye khud ko prove karna chahta hoon...Tum woh ho jo mujhe Hard Labour karne ke liye , mujhe inspired karti ho...Khud se zyada care karta hoon tumhaari...issliye, tumhen JOB karne ke liye permission nahin de sakta....kabhi nahin de sakta...Main nahin chahta ki, tumhen zindagi mein zara bhi takleef ho...koi pareshaani ho...Koi tumhen kuchh bhi kahe...I know,kal raat tum pareshaan thi...kyunki,maine tumhen ignore kiya tumhaari baat nahin suni...mujhe bhi bahot bura laga....bahot bura....So nahin paaya raat bhar...par main kya karoon..?? Tumhen 'NAA' kahna meri liye bhi mushkil hai....Please! mujhe samajhne ki koshish karo.))

"Arre RAHUL
tum utth gaye...?? woh bhi itni subah??" voice of his Mom broke his thoughts of chain.

R -
Oh! Good Morning Mom...

RM -
Good Morning Beta! waise , aaj suraj kidhar se nikla?

R -
Matlab ?
(and he smiles and sits besides her on the Sofa in Hall)

RM -
Matlab..yeh ki...tum aur itni subah..? sab thik toh hai ? Tumhari tabiyat toh thik hai....aur tumhaari aankhen...? Tumhaari aankhen bhi red hain..jaise raat bhar soye nahin ? Kya baat Hai ? Kuchh hua kya?
(She asked all questions with very worried tone)

R -
Mom...Itne saare questions?? Don't worry sab thik hai..woh,actually kaafi raat tak lappy par Official work kar raha tha naa so,aankhen red hain..nothing more.

RM -
Aur,Yeh sab kab tak chalega..?

R -
Kya Mom ?

RM -
Kab se keh rahi hoon.Shaadi kar lo..Shaadi kar lo..par meri sunta kaun hai? Professional life ke saath-saath har ek ki personal life bhi hoti hai...har waqt work..work...yeh sab kya hai ? Kiske liye...?

R -
Mom...!! Aap bhi...

RM -
(She cut him) Bas ab bahot hua...ab tumhaari ek nahin sunoongi aur, jald hi tumhaari shaadi kar doongi.Agar tumhen koi pasand hai..? toh mujhe batao naa...main tumhaare Dad se baat karoongi..woh mana nahin karenge...

R -
Mom! Aap bhi subah-subah Dad ki tarah kya ussi topic ko.....?Aap sab toh meri marriage ko lekar aise pareshaan hain jaise,Parents apni betiyon ki marriage ke liye pareshaan hote hain...waise Dad kahaan hain? woh dikh nahin rahe..?

RM - Woh abhi morning walk se laute nahin hain , aur tum topic change mat karo...batao naa..koi pasand hai kya...? 1 minute kahin tum...

R -
((Please Mom! Guess karo....Please...Please...1 baar to GUNJAN kaho....Main kal hi shaadi kar loonga.... Please.. Please...Please...Mom...)) "Kahin main Kya??"
He asked this question with very high expectation.

RM :
Kahin tum...Woh kya naam hai uska..arre woh...haan TINA ...! Kahin tum TINA....

R :
WHAT ? TINA ??
(he was shocked...and said shockingly) You mean... TINA aur main ??

RM :
Arre woh jo tumhaari colleague hai...jo hamesha tumhen Phone bhi karti rahti hai....TINA hi naam hai naa uska..? kahin tum donon ek dusre ko pasand toh nahin karte..? waise woh mujhe koi khaas nahin lagti par, agar tumhen pasand hai toh mujhe manzoor hai...

R :
Mom ! lagta hai raat aap soyi nahin..tab hi aisi baseless baatein kar rahin hain...Main aur TINA?? Yeh aapne soch bhi kaise liya Mom..? kahaan main..aur kahaan woh TINA.."KAPDE BACHAO MISSION" ki President..??

RM :
Ab ye "KAPDE BACHAO MISSION" kya hai...?

R :
Mom ! Agar aapne usse thik se dekha hota toh yeh nahin poochti....Aapne uske kapde dekhe hain? woh itne chhote hote hote hain ki...lagta hai Pure INDIA mein ek wohi hai jo Kapdon ki saving ko lekar serious hai...Aapki 1 Saari se woh apne liye 100 Dresses banwa sakti hai....uske baad bhi kuchh kapde bach hi jaayenge...(He chuckled)
"Kiske Dresses banawane ki baat ho rahi hai ? Kya maine kuchh miss kiya?" A sweet,soft voice cut their convo. she was GUNJAN.

R :
Oh ! Good Morning....

G :
Good Morning...Good Morning Aunty....

RM :
Good Morning Beta...Neend toh thik se aayi naa....

G :
jii, But,RAHUL batao na kiski Dresses...?

R :
wo...woh...kisi ki nahin...Hum to bas waise hi baatein kar rahe the...Hai naa MoM..?
(He winked his eyes)

RM :
Haan...waise hi par...?

R :
Common Mom..! Aap bhi kitni baatein karti hain..? Kab se Morning Tea ka wait kar raha hoon...par aap hain ki,baatoon mein lagi hain...He changed the topic

RM :
Oh! Main to bhul hi gayi...abhi laati hoon..

G :
Aap rahne den Aunty...main laati hoon.

RM :
Arre! Nahin tum ruko main abhi jaati hoon....

G :
Aunty ! mere rahte aap laayengi? Its not possible , aap yahin rahiye main bas abhi laayi.....
and she left the Hall.

RM :
(To RAHUL) Kya baat hai...Tum kuchh tensed ho? Aur tumne GUNJAN ko hamari puri baat kyun nahin batai....

R :
No Mom,Tensed nahin hoon.aur woh baat ka koi matlab hi nahin tha so, batana zaroori nahin samjha. waise Mom aapko kuchh batana tha...

RM :
..Kya kuchh important hai...?

R :
..Wo...Woh...Mom,GUNJAN job karna chahti hai...

RM :
KYA? par kyun...? abhi abhi toh aayi hai...Usne tumse kuchh kaha kya..?

R :
Kal raat woh mujhse baat karna chahti thi..iss matter par...par maine ignore kar diya...

RM :
Par tumhen pata hai..woh,aisa kyun chahti hai...ye usne...

R :
Mujhe pata hai Mom...! Woh ye apne Self-Respect ke liye karna chahti hai....par main nahin chahta ki.... but,he couldn't complete his sentence because......

G :
Lo..main le aayi..very Hot Tea...ab batao kaisi bani hai...? She came with A trey and asked in very curious tone.

R :
OfCourse,Tumne banai hai...achhi toh hogi hi....

RM :
OK. tum donon baatein karo...main Tumhaare Dad ke liye Breakfast banati hoon...aate hi College jaane ke liye ready hone lagenge..

G :
Aap rahne den Aunty,main abhi bana deti hoon....

RM :
Nahin Beta...Main bana deti hoon...tum Chai lo...mujhe bhi to kuchh karne do...warna meri aadat bigad jaayegi...(she said n smiled )

R :
Mom thik keh rahi hain....Tum apni Chai lo..
(thereafter,Mom left the Hall)

G :
RAHUL....tumne Aunty se baat ki kya...?

R :
Which matter?

G :
Woh meri Job waali...? maine raat mein tumse kaha toh tha naa...!

R :
GUNJAN...abhi toh tum aayi ho....Hum iss matter par baad mein bhi baat kar sakte hain....

G :
Par main kahaan keh rahi hoon ki,mujhe aaj hi Job karni hai...main toh sirf permission...

R :
Tumhen Mom-Dad ki permission chahiye..tum unse khud hi baat kar sakti ho...main permission nahin dene waala ,

GUNJAN was sad after hearing RAHUL's sentense...she said nothing.RAHUL was feeling bad for her....((GUNJAN ! Kaise bataoon ki, main tumhen aise nahin dekh sakta...Kya ye zaroori hai...? Tumhara udaas chehra..mujhe tod dega..))
he said,
"OK.tell me Kya karna chahti ho??"

She felt little bit relax..and said...
"Woh jo meri qualification ke according mujhe suit karta ho...woh.."

R :
GUNJAN.....but,tumhen ye karne ki zaroorat nahin hai......

G :
Main jaanti hoon Mujhe zaroorat nahin...par main pure din akeli ghar par kya karoongi...?

R :
GUNJAN tum samajhti kyun nahin...ye MUMBAI hai , DEHRADOON nahin...Tumhen pata nahin ki,Yeh jagah ladkiyoon ke liye kitni unsafe hai...aur

G :
Toh kya yahaan ladkiyaan work nahin karti...?

R :
Karti hain...par...

G :
Par..?

R :
Par Woh tum jaisi nahin hain...

G :
What do you mean...? Woh mere jaisi nahin hain ??

R :
Matlab woh tum jaisi Nazuk,Innocent aur Sensitive nahin hain....Kisi ki loud voice sun kar toh tum nurvous ho jaati ho..kisi ne daant diya toh ro padti ho.....tum kaise kahin Job kar paaogi?

G :
Par agar main koi galti nahin karoongi toh koi mujhe kyun daantega ?
Aur main toh kisi se argument bhi nahin karti toh koi mujhse kyun loudly baat karega...? she asked very innocently...

R :
He was speechless after seeing her innocence... GUNJAN...tum kuchh nahin samajhti...

G :
Wohi toh samajhna chahti hoon RAHUL...mujhe kuchh nahin pata...main sikhna chahti hoon...Jaan na chahti hoon ki,work kaise hota hai...working condition kya hoti hai..? Kya tum nahin chahte...ki,main ye sab...sikhoon?
(she asked very innocently)

R :
((Main chahta hoon ...GUNJAN...aur Jaanta hoon ki tum Right ho...Aur saath mein ye bhi jaanta hoon ki,Tumhen naa kehna kitna mushkil hai...mere liye aur bhi zyada....tum meri kamzori ho....But...?)) OK..thik hai,agar tum Job karna chahti ho...toh...kar sakti ho...

G :
Oh! I knew it...Tum mujhe permission de doge...tumhen nahin pata main kitni khush hoon (She said very excitedly)

RAHUL
was happy after seeing her heart-stolar smile....n he said...

R :
Wait....wait...Itni excited hone ki zaroorat nahin...abhi meri baat khatam nahin hui...

G :
Ok...toh jald kaho naa....

R :
Permission toh milegi but,uske liye meri some Conditions hain jo tumhen maanni hogi....

G :
Oh ! Conditions...well,Mujhe tumhaari saari conditions accept hain.

R :
Soch lo...! bina jaane YES kehna safe nahin hai...

G :
Don't worry ! main tumhen jaanti hoon...so,mujhe koi problem nahin..

R :
Ok.Toh Promise..?

G :
Pakka wala Promise...(and Both smiled)

R :
Ok...Ok...Condition sun toh lo...

G :
Sun rahi hoon...tell me.

R :
First,ye ki...Tum kahaan work karogi yaa nahin karogi...ye main decide karoonga. I mean , woh company tumhaare liye suitable hai yaa nahin...yeh main decide karoonga.

G :
Ok...aur,

R :
Aise kisi bhi Job ko Yes nahin kahogi,jiske working period raat 8 baje ke baad tak ke ho.means,aapko 8 baje tak ghar aa jana hai.

G :
Huummmmm! Ok,manzoor...aur kuchh?

R :
Haan...1 last...tumhen aaj evening mein mere saath Party mein chalna hoga...Mere Office ki Party hai...

G :
PARTY?? main aur Party...? No....No..way..RAHUL yeh kaisi condition hai ? Kya tum mujhe Black-Mail kar rahe ho? (she asked softly)

R :
Tum jo chaho samajh sakti ho...but,soch lo tumne mujhe YES kaha hai,aur tum apna Promise break nahin kar sakti...

G :
Par RAHUL,main Wahaan Party mein kya karoongi....main toh wahaan kisi ko jaanti bhi nahin...(her tone was very tensed)

R :
Party mein wohi karna jo sab karte hain...ENJOY..aur tum mujhe jaanti ho,ye tumhaare liye kaafi hai...(He winked his eyes ,naughitly)

G :
Good joke...but, main..main kyun..?

R :
Actually,M
ain jis project par work kar raha hoon..uski Official announcement hai..aur main chahta hoon ki tum iss Party mein mere saath raho...((Haan GUNJAN main chahta hoon ki, tum sirf aaj hi nahin...hamesha meri har khushi mein mere saath raho...ye sab tumhaare liye hai...Main chahta hoon ki,tum mujh par proud feel karo...Tumhen nahin pata ki,ye project hamare Future ke liye kitna zaroori hai...Dekhna,Yeh Project 1 din hamari zindagi badal dega...)) he was lost in his dream...suddenly,GUNJAN's voice broke his thoughts of chain

G :
Phir kahaan kho gaye...? RAHUL I understand but, main....main Party mein kaise ja sakti hoon...?

R :
Kyun nahin ja sakti...main hoon naa..!

G :
Woh baat nahin..actually...wo....woh..

R :
Kaho naa..problem kya hai...?

G :
Wo mere paas PARTY ke liye koi suitable dress nahin hai...Yeh suit kaise lagenge? Itni badi Company ki Party..aur main inn suits mein...sab hasenge...!
(she said very innocently)

R
:
(He smiled cutely...He liked her innocence more) Koi nahin hansega...Kisi ki itni himmat nahin jo tum par hanse... waise,tum kuchh bhi pahno,woh tum par suit karta hai...Tum dress ki wajah se nahin , Dress tumhaari wajah se attractive lagti hai..

G :
(she smiled) Thanks for compliment...but,...

R :
Agar
DRESS nahin hai...ye toh aur bhi achha hai...hum aaj hi jaayenge, Shopping karne...ek achhi si Party Dress lene.

G :
Kya ? Iski koi zaroorat nahin RAHUL..really mujhe nahin jaana...

R :
Hello ! Main tum se pooch nahin raha...tumhen bata raha hoon....(He said with his fake anger n a little bit possessiveness)

G :
But...Rahul...!

R :
But..wut...kuchh nahin,Main aa raha hoon afternoon mein tumhen pick-up karne,aur phir hum saath mein chalenge SHOPPING ke liye..aur phir evening mein PARTY..programme Final ! Ok,Now...main chalta hoon...mujhe office ke liye ready hona hai...tum afternoon mein mera wait karna... and he was about to go.....then,

G :
RAHUL......! He turned,smiled only and left the room.....and,GUNJAN..? she was lost in her deep thaught..((GUNJAN ! Rahul ne keh diya..means ab toh tujhe jaana padega...woh kuchh nahin sunega....Par..Shopping? mere paas toh itne paise bhi nahin hain...mujhe to ye bhi pata nahin ki,Dress kitne ki hogi..? Suna hai Mumbai mein maximum designer Dresses milti hain aur woh kaafi expensive hoti hain...aur..main...total saving bhi le gayi toh woh bhi 8,000-10,000 se zyada nahin hongi....ufff ! kya karoon main.. ? Pata nahin kitni badi Party hogi..? sirf itna pata hai,RAHUL kisi bahot badi Company mein hai....kitne bade-bade log honge...Party mein..aur main wahaan..kya karoongi? aur phir ye Dress ki problem?..Oh GOD! iss Party ko bhi aaj hi hona tha ?? GUNJAN aaj tera kuchh nahin ho sakta...tu toh aaj gayi...))


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SAMRAT at The OFFICE
:

SAMRAT
was busy in his some Official Work...suddenly, a voice broke his concentration ...

"Oh kabhi inn Files ki jagah mujhe bhi dekh liya karo....aakhir inn files mein aisa kya hai..?..jo mujhme nahin...?
She was...

S : RICHA !!...tum yahaan....? He was shocked becauz,he didn't expect her


R : Haan,Main....Aana pada kyunki,tum toh mere paas aane se rahe....Do you know SAMRAT...tum bilkul,bhi nahin badle...College mein Books aur Office mein yeh Files....Kuchh bhi nahin badla..

S : Jaise Tum ! jaisi kal thi aaj bhi waisi hi ho...

R : Haan...Kyunki,I know....Life yahi hai....Parties,Fun n Friends...that's it.

S : I know,you and your funda of life....tell me yahaan kaise..? Kuchh Important work tha...?

R : What a Joke SAMRAT...!! Main aur woh bhi KAAM..? aur woh bhi iss Office mein..no way....Main toh bas yun hi Dad ke saath chali aayi... socha, Tumse mil loon..aur...?

S : Aur....? He asked with little curiousity

R : Evening event ke liye tumhen Congratulate bhi kar loon.....aur hey tum evening mein kis desginer ke suits wear karoge...? Please! Kisi achhe Desginer ke suit hi carry karna...I know,itne short notice par thoda difficult hai par,tum adjust kar sakte ho...

S : Means? main samjh nahin... Aisa kya special hai uss Party mein? woh as usual ek small Party hai...Only 1 Official announcement karni hai...Project se related

R : Oh God ! It's mean tumhen nahin pata...?

S : What?

R : May be,Uncle tumhen surprise dena chahte ho...toh main kyun unka surprise spoil karoon...

S : Kaisa surprise....tell me RICHA kuchh special hai kya ..? I mean Dad ne kuchh spl. plan kiya hai kya..? (He was in anger...But,he is controlling himself)

R : Main kyun bataoon..? Tum khud hi pooch lo....woh abhi Dad se hi baatein kar rahe hain...

S : Woh to main pooch hi loonga...any way,thoda busy hoon...evening Party mein milte hain....

R : No way...ab ye sab nahin chalega....tum mujhe ab aur zyada ignore nahin kar sakte....main Uncle se tumhaari shikayat kar doongi...

S : Ok...kar dena but,mujhe abhi kaam hai...so,excuse me. (He said in irritating tone)

R : Ok...jaaoongi..but,1 Condition par...

S : Condition..? kaisi Condition...?

R : Tum aaj mujhe Shopping par le ja rahe ho...Evening Party ke liye dress choose karne...

S : Sorry! But, mere paas itna time nahin....

R : Oh but,maine tumse kab poocha ki,tumhaare paas time hai yaa nahin...maine kaha,tum mujhe Shopping par le ja rahe ho (She said it in very relax n cool tone)

S : RICHA..! I am not joking....so,please band karo yeh childish behaviour.

R : SAMRAT...main bhi joke ke mood mein nahin hoon....aur tum mujh se aise baat nahin kar sakte.....Humaari marriage hone waali hai.....Tumhen mere liye time nikalna hi hoga....

S : ((Oh God ! Kitni irritating hai yeh.....But,SAMRAT..she is part of your "Ambitious" Project.Tu isse naraaz nahin kar sakta...Yeh Marriage mujhe New Status degi...aur SHERGILL GROUP ki ownership bhi....Shopping na sahi.. Business meeting samajh kar tujhe shedule adjust karna hoga..))

R : Ab soch kya rahe ho...? Chalo naa...abhi chalte hain...

S : Abhi nahin...I mean abhi really,very important work hai...aisa karte hain....tum direct Mall aa jaao,Main tumhen wahin milta hoon.

R : Ok.No problem...because I know,tum apna Promise kabhi nahin break karoge...I trust you.(n she smiled)

S : Toh Mall mein milte hain...kya ab main apna work complete kar sakta hoon...?

R : Oh sure...Chalti hoon...and she walked away..leaving SAMRAT behind with his anger..and thought...((Kya kar raha hoon main...Shopping woh bhi ek ladki ke liye...? Its enough....!! SAMRAT..control yourself....abhi ek bhi wrong decision tumhaare liye harmful ho sakta hai... ....aur yeh naya Drama kya hai?? Evening Party mein surprise...woh bhi meri knowledge ke bina....unki himmat kaise hui....bina meri permission ke meri Party mein kuchh bhi plan karne ki...yeh nahin ho sakta....aur aisa kaun sa Surprise hoga..jise Mr. SAXENA , Mr.Shergill se discuss karne ke liye khud Office aaye hain.....Kahin wo...meri aur.. OK...agar aisa hai to........ mujhe unse abhi confirm karna hoga...))

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*Friends,hope you like it.Sorry for Longest Update(Sorry! If you get bore).This part is very important for some future scenes establishment. I Hope you enjoyed it. I try my best , thank you for bearing me.Sorry Friends ! if u disappoint 😳 I am still trying to improve. Please,Point-Out my mistakes.*

[JOSEPH]



Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago
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OMG!! Wow!! What a fantabulous , marvellous, rocking, Stupendous, Excellent and amazing update..........Superb work joseph👍🏼👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..............................Loved reading the update a lottt...bahut mazza aaya read n Imagine karkey😍........completely Awesome story line...very well written ..presentation is very very good......👍🏼.......Loved each n every scene ........Dialogues were Amazing and fantastic...........Whole update was Fabulous .........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..............I am speechless I have no words to say ...The update was so so good that I am falling short of words...........BAHUT Mazza aaya reading each scene n dialogue................😍.........😊.............

Loved Rahul and rahuls mom conversation..........a very natural conversation between mom n son.......Dialogues were so natural ....In real life also every parent has this type of conversation with their children.................Gunjans entry when Rahul n his mom was talking was perfect.....

I love Gunjans character a lottttttt........The conversation Gunjan had with Rahul each n every dialogue described properly Gunjans character That Gunjan is a very very sweet, Innocent , caring, charming and self respecting girl.....Thru these dialogues when Gunjan said to rahul ------------
Par agar main koi galti nahin karoongi toh koi mujhe kyun daantega ? Aur main toh kisi se argument bhi nahin karti toh koi mujhse kyun loudly baat karega...? she asked very innocently... This dialogue clearly described Gunjan is very innocent girl...............I really love Gunjans character.........

When rahul wanted 2 take gunjan to the party and thought 2 himself DEKHNA YEH Project humarii zindagii badal dega....I was thinking Yes yeh project Tumharii zindagii badal dega 100% bec Gunjan will meet samrat and may be marry samrat ..................

Rahuls character is developing really well..............And Samrat character is shaping well also....👍🏼...

I think richa loves Shopping a lott 😉Abhi Dresses ka collection buy kiya full and now one more dress.....usko shopping ka bahana chahiyee.......😉.....I feel party mein Samrat n richa ki Marriage or engagement announce hogii.

Richa n samrat are going shopping So is Gunjan n rahul ..........Can it be possible that I think May be Samrat will see gunjan 4 the first time in the Mall...😉😍...............Sajan 1st meeting kya mall mein hogi?😍............I am drooling already.........😍.............But whether I am right or wrong only Joseph knows😊...........

So Dear Plss Update Soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn........😊 And Thanks 4 pm🤗.......

Completely Outstanding Update n Mindblowing FF................👍🏼............Story is really Superb👍🏼................Good work Joseph👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..

Love Gunjan😊😊.........................
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Joseph it was really fantastic update...👏Rahul's thoughts & his conversation with his Mom was so nice & natrual !! Gunjan is my favorite .🤗She is so sweet innocent & naive..Sammy & Richa's meeting really showed the discomfort & the uneasiness in their relationship..Can't wait to see SaJan meeting....😍Are they meeeting in the MALL or PARTY???Can't wait to read the next part..Plzzzzzzzzzz update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

OMG!! Wow!! What a fantabulous , marvellous, rocking, Stupendous, Excellent and amazing update..........Superb work joseph👏..............................Loved reading the update a lottt...bahut mazza aaya read n Imagine karkey😍........completely Awesome story line...very well written ..presentation is very very good......👍🏼.......Loved each n every scene ........Dialogues were Amazing and fantastic...........Whole update was Fabulous .........👏..............I am speechless I have no words to say ...The update was so so good that I am falling short of words...........BAHUT Mazza aaya reading each scene n dialogue................😍.........😊.............

Loved Rahul and rahuls mom conversation..........a very natural conversation between mom n son.......Dialogues were so natural ....In real life also every parent has this type of conversation with their children.................Gunjans entry when Rahul n his mom was talking was perfect.....

I love Gunjans character a lottttttt........The conversation Gunjan had with Rahul each n every dialogue described properly Gunjans character That Gunjan is a very very sweet, Innocent , caring, charming and self respecting girl.....Thru these dialogues when Gunjan said to rahul ------------
Par agar main koi galti nahin karoongi toh koi mujhe kyun daantega ? Aur main toh kisi se argument bhi nahin karti toh koi mujhse kyun loudly baat karega...? she asked very innocently... This dialogue clearly described Gunjan is very innocent girl...............I really love Gunjans character.........

When rahul wanted 2 take gunjan to the party and thought 2 himself DEKHNA YEH Project humarii zindagii badal dega....I was thinking Yes yeh project Tumharii zindagii badal dega 100% bec Gunjan will meet samrat and may be marry samrat ..................

Rahuls character is developing really well..............And Samrat character is shaping well also....👍🏼...

I think richa loves Shopping a lott 😉Abhi Dresses ka collection buy kiya full and now one more dress.....usko shopping ka bahana chahiyee.......😉.....I feel party mein Samrat n richa ki Marriage or engagement announce hogii.

Richa n samrat are going shopping So is Gunjan n rahul ..........Can it be possible that I think May be Samrat will see gunjan 4 the first time in the Mall...😉😍...............Sajan 1st meeting kya mall mein hogi?😍............I am drooling already.........😍.............But whether I am right or wrong only Joseph knows😊...........

So Dear Plss Update Soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn........😊 And Thanks 4 pm🤗.......

Completely Outstanding Update n Mindblowing FF................👍🏼............Story is really Superb👍🏼................Good work Joseph👏..

Love Gunjan😊😊.........................



Thanks Gunjan for your appreciation n PM. I loved to read your feed-back Its just like Review for me.I try always to input a very simple words in convo. part because,in real life... language is not Filmy. and about SaJan meet...Please wait till Part-8...Sorry!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali_12

Joseph it was really fantastic update...👏Rahul's thoughts & his conversation with his Mom was so nice & natrual !! Gunjan is my favorite .🤗She is so sweet innocent & naive..Sammy & Richa's meeting really showed the discomfort & the uneasiness in their relationship..Can't wait to see SaJan meeting....😍Are they meeeting in the MALL or PARTY???Can't wait to read the next part..Plzzzzzzzzzz update soon..



Thanks a lot Anjali for your sweet Reply. I personally believe conversation is only1 n very strong part of express your feelings. so,It should be simple. Every character is very close to my heart but,Gunjan's character little bit more 😉. SaJan meeting is very important turn is Samrat's life 😉so,please wait till Part-8....

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