..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF} - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashizin

hey joseph loved this part loved gunjan's bonding with rahul and his family can't wait for next part do continue soon it will be treat to watch to different ppl fall in love and how samrat and gunjan will be sajan and thanks for pm



Thanks Aashizin,for your Comment.I read your post on Forum,you are amazing writer.Your reply is very good feed-back for me.😳 Please,wait very soon you will get some exiting scenes.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

its really nice update.............😛😛..........

still waiting for Sajan's meeting and hope so in the next part we'll get that.....



Thanks Gunurlove (what is your name?). Please,wait very soon you will get that.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ekta_monaya

it's just fabulous yaar.........ur FF is getting better & rocking day by day......

the update was just soooooo good as it showed samrat's feeling, gunjans bonding with rahul & his family & a new entry richa as well......its not a triangle but a love rectangle now.......but i will say richa is sumwat a show-off......maybe like sheena.....🤢....i just hate 2 take her name.....thnk god its not sheeeeenaaaaaa whuz playing richa's part......😕....i cudn't hav takn it den........

i really like longgggg update so no need 2 say sorry 4 it.........in fact i shud b sayin thnk u 4 it.......so thnxxx 4 the long update & plzzz wenevr u hav the time give long updates plzzzzz.......

gunjan wants 2 do a job then wat prblm does rahul have? ok i understnd he wants 2 giv gunjan all the happiness by himself but if gunjan's happiness lies with doing a job then wat prblm does he have? if he really loves gunjan then he shud b supportive of her decision & not reluctnt.....
i hope gunjan convinces him 2 let her work warna SAJAN kaisi milenge.....plzzzz rahul maanja......😉.....

i thnk my assumption is correct......gunjan hi samrat ki PA ka job krne waali h.....OMG! mtlb samrat, gunjan & rahul 1 saath 1 hi office me........hey bhagwan pata nai kya hone wala h.....

i thnk gunjan only likes rahul & doesn't luv him.....matlab gunjan k samrat k pyaar hone ke chances bright h.....hmmmm.....vry happy😛.....

samrat ki life change hone wali h gr8...... & ya ur rite rahul is a sweet guy but the reason that i dnt lyk him is coz mujhe nahi lagta k jab usko pata chalega k gunjan samrat se pyaar krne lagi h, vo sweetness bhi khatm ho jyegi...... & then he'll b the biggest obstacle between SAJAN & i wont b able 2 take it........w8in eagerly 4 the next update & more eagerly 4 the 7th update........SAJAN meet scene......damn excited 4 it.....dunno hw it will turn out.....good or bad.....hoping 4 the best.....definetly not luv @ 1st sight, at least not 4rm samrat's side.....dats not possible in ur FF.....😆.....but i hope evn nt hatrd......*FINGERS CROSSED*.......😕......

ur making me more & more addicted 2 ur FF by ur gr8 update yaar......nw i feel like having a fresh update 4rm u evryday......its lyk m watchin MJHT 3 with SAJAN & a kabab-me-haddi i.e rahul with them xcluding MAYUR.......u r a fantastic writer yaar but 2 humble 2 accept it......but dat wnt stop me 4rm saying this again & again......i wonder if ur 1st try @ an FF is soooo good then wat abt the upcoming 1's??? m sure sum producer will surely hire u 2 write a script 4 dem after reading ur FF'S.......all the best 4 ur future updates......pls keep writing such wonderful FF'S.......👍🏼👏......

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GT 2 PM ME......😊......

THNX 4 THE WONDERFUL UPDATE & PLZZZ UPDATE SOON.....😊....



Hello Ekta,First i want to say,Thanks for this sweet Reply.and don't feel bed, you are not second, every Comment is very-very important for me.I loved to read readers feed-back because,before posting each n every part......I feel very nervous.

whuz playing richa's part......😕....i cudn't hav takn it den... - She is Sreejeeta Dey(ASH of MJHT-2)

Ok,I w'll try for long updates,If others bore feel na kare.😉 Rahul is extra protective for Gunjan ,He cares to her a lot. Let's see,woh maanta hai yaa nahin? Hey You hate Rahul naa??😉

What is first reaction of Samrat....after seeing GUNJAN?? Please wait for this spl. part. Sajan 1st meet scene Part-8 mein bhi ho sakta hai😳.I want to move story step by step,everything situation ke according honi chahiye,jo story mein suit kare.

Thanks again for your biggest compliment but,still i am trying to improve myself.I never thought or expect this type of positive response.😳 Thank you so much. and I like your replies too.


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gnaneswari

Awesome update. This update helped me to understand more about the charectors. Rahul is really very nice. His and gunjan's bonding is well described. He can read gunjan's eyes, but this reminds me of samrat. I don't know why but when i read rahul and gunjan's scenes it reminds me of sajan friendship in the show. U have potrayed relation btw gunjan and rahul's family very well. And i liked the dinner scene most. Relationships are very sensitive and complicate issues to understand or to potray. But u have done a great job. U r ff is my favourite and i'm literally edicted to it i love ur ff so much. And i felt relief after reading samrat's pov. He may pretend that he doesn't want to change. But i felt that some where in the corner of his heart he wants a change and he is waiting for a change. U have described samrat and richa's relation very clearly. Waiting for sajan's meeting. A personal request please make it sajan-ish if possible and suited for storyline. I think gunjan is gonna samrat's PA. Ur story is shaping well.Waiting for ur next update eagerly do cont soon. Thanks for long update and pm i haven't felt bored. But i'm sure u have bored with my long comment sorry!



Thanks Gnaneswari for your lovely compliment😳 I am so touched. You are right,Rahul is little similar to Samrat's character.My story based on relationship....more then Love RAHUL n SAMRAT is right in their place. But, what about Gunjan??Selection is easy between Good n Bad but, 2 Good persons mein kisi 1 ko choose karna ho toh.....?? In my story both male leads are 'GREY'...and this is the main point of this story.

I always say,in this story SAMRAT character is big surprise for all , he is totally unexpected personality.and his personality is the turning twist of this story.

I note every suggestions of readers so,definitely consider your request.now,I am working more hard on SaJan scenes.Thanks for suggestions.

And,I really like to readers 'LONG' feed-back.its very important for story development... so,please...please...please...wright more long Comments i loved to read.

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Posted: 14 years ago
WAT AN AMAZING UPDT DEAR!!!!!
Totaly rcking,its vry beautifuly writen.
dis part ws outstanding,superb.
awsm yar,realy realy realy realy luv dis part.
CANT W8 FOR D SAJANS MEET ND RAHUL REACTION.
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ CNT WID NXT PART AS SOON AS POSSIBLE,PLZ .
FOR D NXT PART CANT W8,U DUNT HAVE ANY IDEA HW DESPERATELY M W8ING FOR D NXT PART.
SO PLZ PLZ CNT SOON.
LUV U
VRITIKA
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part.Loved it.Your ff is getting better day by day.Continue soon n thx 4 the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

Hey Joseph Wow!! What an Update 👏👏👏......Totally Brilliant piece of work.....👍🏼👍🏼Superb Story ..Awesome n amazing Dialogues, and good presentation.....Everything was just Stupendous..........Rocking👏...................

I loved reading your update and imagining the scenes a lotttttttttttt.........😍.........Samrat and richa conversation , nanda family Conversation, Rahul thoughts, Gunjan n rahul conversation everything was Excellent...........👍🏼...........

When Samrat n Richa were talking on the Phone and Richa Said that she is giving the party because She has bought the whole range of dresses from New york fashion show I was Shocked😲and Said 2 myself What.....😲She is giving the party because she bought clothes OMG!! 😲😉😆.........

BUT I must say Joseph U presented Richa character Really well ......👏Thru these Dialogues U showed that Richa is a type of girl who is fashion consicious and loves 2 shop and she is a spoilt Brat and spendthrift.....and she loves to Party a Lott and 2 party she doesnt need any reason ......And She doesnt love Samrat .....But AS Samrat is rich n handsome So she is obsessed with Him n Wants 2 Own Him But She Doesnot love Him ..........But She loves Life .........and lives it fully and enjoys life...and She can go 2 any lengths 2 get samrat in her life But like things Samrat is also just a possession n crush 4 her....And like a spoilt child wants TOy she also is like a spoilt child Who wants Samrat ...But Samrat is not her true love...and I feel Richa has little Less Mind Like RIA 😉.........But richa can turn evil also........Ur presenting Richa character was excellent👏👏..........I am totally impressed with your Story and U expressed Each n every character really well.........👍🏼.........

As When Richa said these words----
R : Ok. No problem ,ek baar shaadi to ho jaane do ,tumhen to main pura badal doongi. I said 2 myself High hopes richa Shaadi Hogi toh badlogii na....and Samrat ko sirf ek special girl hii change kar saktii hai..RIGHt joseph😉😊

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(SAMRAT kabhi nahin badlega RICHA .....kabhi nahin...kisi ke liye. When Samrat said these words I thought Samrat Jaroor badlega Once gunjan comes into his life 😉Aur,SAMRAT aisa kuchh nahin karega..jisse uske Business ko loss ho...Well I wanted 2 say We will see Samrat 😉....Once gunjan comes into your life Then U will leave everything 4 her....

and This dialogue of yours Joseph Samrat thinking while trying 2 sleep----

He was trying to sleep with his emptiness.without Dream, without Hope......Hope ki...ek din sab kuchh badal jaayega.....He knew that, kal phir subah hogi......same Routine...same Office...and same Life.....Kuchh nahin change hone wala .Yaa phir kuchh change hoga ??..when I read these words I was emotional also....I could feel his pain 😭Samrat trying 2 sleep with his emptiness without dreams and hopes😭
OMG!!What an emotional Dialogue😭
very well written👍🏼..These words showed Samrats deep pain and loss...that he has lost all dreams n hopes and his life is empty...
and Yes Only a special girl can change Samrat and fill his empty life and give him dreams and hopes and Give him happiness ....And that Girl will be Gunjan😊.....

And Joseph Conversation between Nanda family was Awesome 👍🏼loved it Completely...Nanda family loves gunjan very much and Gunjan also loves them totally..........What a sweet converstion 👏👏.......................

Rahuls thoughts were Portrayed well...........His feelings is one-sided and he knows Gunjan doesnt love him now...But he has hopes that she will never say No 2 Him and will be his...........and he is not even thinking she may never love him like that...she may love him just as a friend with whom she has been raised......Yes Gunjan May never refuse His parents Bec they have raised her...........BUT I feel Gunjan will never love Rahul ...............I think 4 gunjan rahul is a very very good friend.....................she is emotionally attached 2 Him n his family.n loves them totally..But she has not fallen in love with rahul....But What if she falls 4 someone else Will RAHUL be able 2 take it?????

Just loved rahul and Gunjans Conversation very much when Gunjan came 2 his room 2 talk 2 him ....👏👏

Rahul loves and deeply cares 3 Gunjan and Gunjan also Cares 4 rahul deeply And Rahul Wants 2 do everything for her thats why he doesnt want her 2 work. this is one Reason....

But I think that is not the only reason...When Rahul said this
I don't know....why? kyun nahin chahta ki, tum work karo? I felt that Rahul Is afraid and he doesnt know it yet But In his heart he Knows Gunjan Loves Him only as a friend and thats why he is hesitating 2 propose 2 her and he is afraid also WHAT If Gunjan falls in love with someone else and he looses her?? ..I think this is one of the reasons also.....He is afraid of loosing her he hasnt realised this fact But his heart knows That....As his love is one-sided so this feeling is natural................

Altogether MY dear friend joseph U have MADE NO Absolutely No mistakes...I am not lying ...Ur Whole Update was Just MINDBLOWING and Fantabulous...........Rocking.................I loved it Completely............Well done dear👏............

My Full Marks 2 Ur update n ur FF👍🏼................

Love Gunjan😊😊......................



Thanks a lot Gunjan for your Lovely Comment.Its really a lot for me.😳 Richa character is also spl. part of this story.She is not negative but,she is possessive for Samrat. Who is bride of Samrat? Its a very imp. question,this answer is turning point of this story also so,please wait.this is not right time for discuss it.

Gunjan bonding with Nanda Family is very imp. part of Gunjan's life.They are Family.Thanks for appreciating that convo.😳 I am very glad after reading your Review. I loved to read all detail feed back.Thank you so much for taking my effort,seriously.




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: karantakiar

WAT AN AMAZING UPDT DEAR!!!!!
Totaly rcking,its vry beautifuly writen.
dis part ws outstanding,superb.
awsm yar,realy realy realy realy luv dis part.
CANT W8 FOR D SAJANS MEET ND RAHUL REACTION.
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ CNT WID NXT PART AS SOON AS POSSIBLE,PLZ .
FOR D NXT PART CANT W8,U DUNT HAVE ANY IDEA HW DESPERATELY M W8ING FOR D NXT PART.
SO PLZ PLZ CNT SOON.
LUV U
VRITIKA



Thanks Vritika for your appreciation.Its really a lot for me.I am doing a really hard work on upcoming part but,I am not hurry....I want to show, every thing step by step.all scenes should be attached with last scene and part of story too.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever

OMGGG 🤪🤪
SaJan Story & No One Told Me :( 😆 Anyways I Have To Complete Reading This FF First SOO I Can Comment !! 😳 But Have To Say That The Concept Is Amazingg & Pllzz Keep Updating && PM Me Yaar 🤗



Thanks Sana for your Comment and appreciation of Concept.Ok,I am waiting for your feed back (After reading all parts)😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE Bro👏👏👏 .Its Fantastic actually. Sorry 4 my very late Reply😳. Ok,Now come to the your Update...U proved again..your simple Dio. is heart of this FF .All dio. was so pure n heart touchy.👏

*SAM-RICHA
short convo is enough for establish RICHA characters very well👏

*NANDA family scene and convo is Superb...perfect Family bonding presentation.I can feel these characters in my front....It was so real.👏

*RaJan scenes was amazing....all parts ... RAHUL's thought about proposal things😳 RAHUL-GUNJAN simple convo.,Gifts and his Permission....every thing was Fantastic.👏. I M speechless.Please,Do Continue soon...Buddy!

-S O H A M.

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