Originally posted by: gunurlove
Hey Swania n Soham and Joseph'..Congratulation for completing your first thread
Update was as usual Superb Fabulouse and fantastic'.👍🏼.👍🏼👍🏼
as always every feature totally based on reality ...from starting to end each n every point was written sooo carefully according to everyone's feelings n emotions'..i really like this thing in your SS'⭐️..You give a huge space to every character'.not only to main lead..but veryyy beautifully and deeply you explained in details'thoughts condition and feelings of HADDIAN too'👏👏..actually guys..i know all of them are somehow lead of this Story'.but for me they are still HADDIAN and will always be Haddiyan'😡..no matter how much nice they are by Heart'..i know this'but I could not stop myself to call them by this name ''so plzz allow me to call them this..😉
Richa is Super HADDI'Rahul "Medium HADDI" and Mohnis is small Haddi'actually I m little bit confuse in the ranking of Rahul n Mohnish'but jst according to Gunjan's Pov I wrote this'''😉😉
Anyways come to the point'..
Nanda house family Scene was wriiten so nicely'Gunjan is really very lucky to have a soo nice and loving family'😳😳..Rahul helped Gunjan in making a report'..this scene was written very nicely'.thier friendship and care abt each other'.everything was just Superbly written'⭐️⭐️⭐️
then Monish Entry''..
His second..but purposely first meeting with Gunjan''n before this..his Excitement'.nervouse feelings'.were so natural'and then his Good luck..that Gunjan opened the door for him'😳..n he was just lost in her beauty n simplicity'..no doubt..anyone can be'.afterall shez the epitome of Innocency and Beauty''.😳😳
Their 2nd meeting was also written in veryyy detail'..and Beautifully'.then Nanda's reaction to see Monish in their House'.including Rahul'.oh God''what a scene'Monish n Rahul'two compititors confrontation'both met eachother first time..both were feeling too much Jealousy n uncomfortable to one another''.
This situation was really funny for me''actually both were absolutely right at their own spot'both loved Gunjan n want to marry her''so Monish was that's why got suspeciouse to heard Rahul name'.and Rahul was absolutely got angry to see Monish behavioure and attitude towards Gunjan''''
Gunjan is really too much innocent that she could not notice Monish Intentions'her way of speaking while talk to her'again n again he called her name'she should not be too much innocent yaar'.then making coffee for hm..n he praised her alottt'.definately Rahul would be get angry to all this na'.but I was surprising for Mr n Mrs Nanda..why they did not notice this'they werej just thanksfull to Monish for his every act.. before he helped Gunjan n then given promotion to Pro Nanda''.but after that first time I was soo happy with his decision for denying the keys of car n appartment which Monish Presented them''and Rahul reaction'emotional attachment with his home'.was narrated mind blowingly''.Superc scene'..you have fully justified with this whole situation''👏'.
i really admired your hard working guys..i know its just so simple for us to read a story soo Perfectly but its quite difficult for writers to maintain the real effect of every character in every scene..n write it in sooo Perfectly Manners''means..we just can imagined the reaction of anyone..but the feel and too much real touch...which dialogues bring in such scenes were not anyone can be imagined or wite so easily or simply''so you S3 are the best writers'Joseph tooo'.as I know right now he is a Director of this SS'😉😆 Okk after that'..dinner table scene was also very nice'.Rahul could not be able to control on his anger and feelings which he was feeling for Gunjan n monish both''his thought in his room was mind blowing''. oh yes I want to ask something'in this scene what was that guys'..when he was thinking..its too bad meri Gunjan ko us usss --------------------------- k lye khana bnana parega'whats that word ..i couldnot understand'.
Then came Samrat shergilll''..ohhh again Richa's call'..thank God ek Haddi nikal gai '..u know I was feel like laughing when Richa said.. "mujhe kabi kabi lagta he tum mujh se pyar nai karte.."..n I was like..isy abi b lagta hi he..hamen pta he'😆
how duffer she is''..samrat doesn't love her but v know he will never back up with his decision..as popularity'success business is everything for him'..he consider Richa a trump card for him'.so sometimes I really feel Samrat n Gunjan both fall in love with eachother but would never accept it with their some personal issues n status diffrence'this scares me sometimes'🤢🤢...infact that horrible line'So Miss Gunjan Bhushan your chapter is closed'😲'oh Goddd'.n sam was crying while saying n thinking this'i was feeling very bad for him...it shows how deeply he has started to fell for her.. .he loves Gunjan but cant accept this reality nor get marry with her..just bcoz she doesnot meet to his high class society n his just an aordinary P.A'but at the same way he does not love Richa but ready to marry with her just for sake of money'bussiness'that y Richa is Super Duper Haddi for me''.😡
Hope Sajan soon realise their true feelings n take a step for themselves'.i mean for unite themselves not for seperation...as of now..sarat is just waiting for Gunjan's single mistake for termintaion...i m sure Gunjan will not give a chance to him..but kuch b ho skta he...S3 fav dialogue..Wait & Watch...😉
Rajan scene was also cute...Overall whole update was Superb...mind blowing... plzzz continue soon the next part now...sooo many days left already... thanks for giving a long update...plz next time give again a long one...after all Sonia remember that line na...Sabr ka Phal meetha ones...😊😊 thanks for the pm
Thank you RiJA for your lovely Reply. But, the completion of this thread is thanks to our readers who have taken the effort to write these amazing comments.😳 V R really grateful for this.
Thanks for liking the update. We need to give each character his space. As JOSEPH has mentioned all the 4 are leads. No one is a side character. ... so all the 4 and the others around them too, need their space. All are important in their own way.😊 This story is not a simple typical Love Story... Its an experiment... Here,Human emotion is most important then other things.
And the names you have given the 3. RiCHA, MONiSH and RAHUL... 😆 . you can call them by any name... SaJan and their Haddi 's... 😃 But,this is only a differences of our POV...for example SAMRAT & MONISH is big Haddi for RAHUL... meanwhile, RAHUL & SAMRAT is big Haddi for MONiSH.
The NANDA's are a closely knit family. A typical middle class family, they spend pure family time together. GUNJAN is indeed lucky... to be part of this family, though not her own, she has been accepted pretty well in this family.
Without any doubt, RiJA, GUNJAN is the epitome of beauty... she has that oomph factor in her which makes a lot of guys go weak in their knees... her innocence, her sweetness... these are just 3 of the guys who are floored by her beauty, innocence and sweetness, but people like GUNJAN. I am sure, will have a lot of admirers.
RAHUL is a bit possessive about GUNJAN, so he can see that MONiSH is on to something. As for MONiSH, he had no clue about RAHUL, so he is not very happy seeing him. GUNJAN is innocent, seeing the world as she thinks it to be...simple, clean and pure.. like her heart.😳 That is why, RAHUL has a tough job on his hands ... protecting GUNJAN, or so he thinks. So his possessiveness.
Mr. and Mrs. NANDA are just surprised to see how politely MONiSH talks and behaves, considering the fact that he comes from the 'Richer Class'. Their mind set that kids of rich families are mostly spoilt brats has been challenged. So they can as of now only see his good side.
That word, RiJA, is an unimaginable... unspeakable word... just like when in real anger, we tend to say a really horrible word...(something like,Abusing word) like that. That was to show how much RAHUL hates MONiSH.
RiCHA is happy with the way her life is going on. She is not aware of happenings around her. SAMRAT feeling for GUNJAN, but trying to stay away from her... who knows, he might succeed and RiCHA would never know.😉 Wait and Watch.
We enjoy writing because our lovely readers enjoy reading and take the effort to appreciate our writing. It takes a lot of team work to get this kind of update written out and we are glad that our readers understand this. Thanks to this awesome story, the brainchild of JOSEPH... rightly said, RiJA... The 'Creative' Director of this FF.😛
V assure you, 'sabr ka phal meetha hi hoga...' none of us have forgotten that line. V will B updating soon.😃
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