..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF} - Page 99

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preety88

fabulous update...cont soon

Thanks Preety for liking the update 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: karantakiar

heyyy dear congooo for completing d first thred🥳
luvlyyy part yaar,awsm,fantastic .
u rock guys.
muahhh
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika

Thanks Vritika for ur appreciating comments...n sure we will b updating soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Swania n Soham and Joseph…..Congratulation for completing your first thread

Update was as usual Superb Fabulouse and fantastic….👍🏼.👍🏼👍🏼

as always every feature totally based on reality ...from starting to end each n every point was written sooo carefully according to everyone's feelings n emotions…..i really like this thing in your SS…⭐️..You give a huge space to every character….not only to main lead..but veryyy beautifully and deeply you explained in details…thoughts condition and feelings of HADDIAN too…👏👏..actually guys..i know all of them are somehow lead of this Story….but for me they are still HADDIAN and will always be Haddiyan…😡..no matter how much nice they are by Heart…..i know this…but I could not stop myself to call them by this name ……so plzz allow me to call them this..😉

Richa is Super HADDI…Rahul "Medium HADDI" and Mohnis is small Haddi…actually I m little bit confuse in the ranking of Rahul n Mohnish…but jst according to Gunjan's Pov I wrote this………😉😉

Anyways come to the point…..

Nanda house family Scene was wriiten so nicely…Gunjan is really very lucky to have a soo nice and loving family…😳😳..Rahul helped Gunjan in making a report…..this scene was written very nicely….thier friendship and care abt each other….everything was just Superbly written…⭐️⭐️⭐️

then Monish Entry……..

His second..but purposely first meeting with Gunjan……n before this..his Excitement….nervouse feelings….were so natural…and then his Good luck..that Gunjan opened the door for him…😳..n he was just lost in her beauty n simplicity…..no doubt..anyone can be….afterall shez the epitome of Innocency and Beauty…….😳😳

Their 2nd meeting was also written in veryyy detail…..and Beautifully….then Nanda's reaction to see Monish in their House….including Rahul….oh God……what a scene…Monish n Rahul…two compititors confrontation…both met eachother first time..both were feeling too much Jealousy n uncomfortable to one another…….

This situation was really funny for me……actually both were absolutely right at their own spot…both loved Gunjan n want to marry her……so Monish was that's why got suspeciouse to heard Rahul name….and Rahul was absolutely got angry to see Monish behavioure and attitude towards Gunjan…………

Gunjan is really too much innocent that she could not notice Monish Intentions…her way of speaking while talk to her…again n again he called her name…she should not be too much innocent yaar….then making coffee for hm..n he praised her alottt….definately Rahul would be get angry to all this na….but I was surprising for Mr n Mrs Nanda..why they did not notice this…they werej just thanksfull to Monish for his every act.. before he helped Gunjan n then given promotion to Pro Nanda…….but after that first time I was soo happy with his decision for denying the keys of car n appartment which Monish Presented them……and Rahul reaction…emotional attachment with his home….was narrated mind blowingly…….Superc scene…..you have fully justified with this whole situation……👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏….

i really admired your hard working guys..i know its just so simple for us to read a story soo Perfectly but its quite difficult for writers to maintain the real effect of every character in every scene..n write it in sooo Perfectly Manners……means..we just can imagined the reaction of anyone..but the feel and too much real touch...which dialogues bring in such scenes were not anyone can be imagined or wite so easily or simply……so you S3 are the best writers…Joseph tooo….as I know right now he is a Director of this SS…😉😆 Okk after that…..dinner table scene was also very nice….Rahul could not be able to control on his anger and feelings which he was feeling for Gunjan n monish both……his thought in his room was mind blowing……. oh yes I want to ask something…in this scene what was that guys…..when he was thinking..its too bad meri Gunjan ko us usss --------------------------- k lye khana bnana parega…whats that word ..i couldnot understand….

Then came Samrat shergilll……..ohhh again Richa's call…..thank God ek Haddi nikal gai …..u know I was feel like laughing when Richa said.. "mujhe kabi kabi lagta he tum mujh se pyar nai karte.."..n I was like..isy abi b lagta hi he..hamen pta he…😆

how duffer she is……..samrat doesn't love her but v know he will never back up with his decision..as popularity…success business is everything for him…..he consider Richa a trump card for him….so sometimes I really feel Samrat n Gunjan both fall in love with eachother but would never accept it with their some personal issues n status diffrence…this scares me sometimes…🤢🤢...infact that horrible line…So Miss Gunjan Bhushan your chapter is closed…😲😲😲😲😲…oh Goddd….n sam was crying while saying n thinking this…i was feeling very bad for him...it shows how deeply he has started to fell for her.. .he loves Gunjan but cant accept this reality nor get marry with her..just bcoz she doesnot meet to his high class society n his just an aordinary P.A…but at the same way he does not love Richa but ready to marry with her just for sake of money…bussiness…that y Richa is Super Duper Haddi for me…….😡😡😡😡

Hope Sajan soon realise their true feelings n take a step for themselves….i mean for unite themselves not for seperation...as of now..sarat is just waiting for Gunjan's single mistake for termintaion...i m sure Gunjan will not give a chance to him..but kuch b ho skta he...S3 fav dialogue..Wait & Watch...😉

Rajan scene was also cute...Overall whole update was Superb...mind blowing... plzzz continue soon the next part now...sooo many days left already... thanks for giving a long update...plz next time give again a long one...after all Sonia remember that line na...Sabr ka Phal meetha ones...😊😊 thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys🤗awesome update👏 loved each n every scene very well written n potrayyed👏 love reading ur updates keep it up👍🏼 precap seems interesting😉 do cont soon n thanks for the pm😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
wowow tht was really awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowow tht was really awesome

Thanks sweety for liking the update hon...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -mysterygirl-

Awesome Update
loved it
continue soon

Thanks hon for liking the update ...we will try n update soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guysss 🤗missed u all hon and extremely sorry for my so late reply 🤗i was stuck with pending pms 🤣and today i made up my mind to complete this updates and i did *phew* 😆😃ohh i m seriously glad u guys liked those creations i wanted to give it to u all b4 i leave and i m happy i did , will def make one more as u want for this FF 😃 and there is no need to mention my name with each siggy bcz now its all urs and asset of this FF 🤗

ok coming to update but b4 update's my view i m surprised with ur guy's note one incident which will change one's life and black monday with twist 😕😲looking forward to it who will be and how this twist will come , ok coming to this update i loved this update once again awesome work👏 monish finally got chance to impress mr and mrs nanda no doubt rahul felt bad with it and poured out to gunjan loved their scene awesome here mohish's case its very different to see his two sides one for his goal who wants gunjan in his life and second vulnerable

samrat gosh he is hurting himself and still thinking it from mind on contrary he follows his heart for sure only one month left for his marriage so it will be interesting to read how sajan will fall for each other for sam's side he is almost fell for her but gunjan 's side didn't get to know how will she feel and how their lives will take turn ,do continue soon hon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey my friends Soham, Swati n Sonia I have unreserved my comment PAGE 136 ...Do Read it plsss...

My comment is on page 136...

Love Ur friend Gunjan😊😊
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Edited by 1gunjan7 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fend

hey guys🤗awesome update👏 loved each n every scene very well written n potrayyed👏 love reading ur updates keep it up👍🏼 precap seems interesting😉 do cont soon n thanks for the pm😊



Thanks, dear for your comment. We are glad that you enjoy reading our updates. We will be updating soon.😊

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