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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
loved the ff.............
the bonding bw maaneet is amazing............
hate this dev.................y is he after her...............hope he doesnt do smething now that will hurt maaneet..............hope maan is there to protect his geet.............
i hv sent a buddy req can u pl add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Loveee the part!!
Maneet r tooooo gudddddd.
Sameer and meera r veryyy nice.
Aryaan is very cutee.
I hate this dev.
Continue soonnn.
Can u plzzz add me in ur pm list?



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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: spvd

part 15
oh Maan was so embarrassed and the pics were so nice...................oh yahan pe bhi Dev..................hope Maan comes out looking for Geet soon.....................cont soon dear....................
one request.................can u just post the link in the pm whenever u update the fic???????????????thank u......................



lool i feel like ive forced you to comment 😛 just kidding.. hehe but thankyou! i love the pics myself.. and yes Dev is here too.. unfortunately lol 🤢 Sure... ill post the link.!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the ff.............

the bonding bw maaneet is amazing............
hate this dev.................y is he after her...............hope he doesnt do smething now that will hurt maaneet..............hope maan is there to protect his geet.............
i hv sent a buddy req can u pl add me to ur pm list



Thankyou for your lovely comment ! I was trying to aim for a very strong bond between maneet.. and i can't really tell you why dev is after her. :) you're just going to have to read on! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Part 16: Enjoy and Comment!


"You F****** b*stard.... what the HELL do think your doing in the Khurana Haveli.. you have been ?" screamed Geet. " Shhh... arey yaar.. bhabhi jii.. its a partyy.. why do you wanna ruin it" smirked Dev. " SHUTUP DEV AND LEAVE. NOW. BEFORE I CALL THE GUARDS TO TAKE YOU AWAY... DON'T MAKE ME REPEAT MYSELF DEV." roared Geet. " What the hell are they going to do?" smirked Dev. " They can't do sh*t honey.. no one can" added Dev. " Shut the hell up... get the f*** out of my face or else I will make sure you get thrown out of this haveli personally in front of everyone". Geet was raging in anger... oh she was definitely feed him to the dogs if she wanted to.. in fact... that was a great idea. " Get out of my face Dev" repeated Geet, "What if I don't? kya karlogi tum?" sneered Dev. He rolled his eyes and said, " You were a wonderful pick of mine... God.. I wish I had taken advantage of you once more... queen like and moonlike beauty into one. He suddenly raised his hands to touch her cheeks just to make her even more angrier. She slapped his hand away and punched him in the nose.. causing a huge nose bleed. " That was for you.. you stupid b****... don't even mess with me.. dont even try.. you know what happened.." roared Geet.

Suddenly the guards surrounded Geet and Dev with huge rifles. " Isko meri nazron se dur le jaoo." ordered Geet. She signed her fingers and the guards did what she said. They grabbed Dev and he suddenly said, " I'll go myself... besides.. who would wanan sleep with this used b****.... she slept with two Khuranas". "HURRY UP AND TAKE HIM OUT OF MY SIGHT... I SHOULD NEVER SEE HIS FACE NEAR THE HAVELI" roared Geet. The guards were alarmed with the power of her tone and were surprised that a tiny woman like her would scream that loud. Dev loosened himself up from the hold of the guards. He walked off and turned around to look at her one more time.. except this time.. he smirked and said, "Don't underestimate me.. if I go to hell.. i'll drag you with me". Geet stood there wanting to beat the living crap out of Dev but she kept herself in control and she said to the guards, " Agle baar.. dehaan rahe kay invitations kay bina.. koi nahi aayegi.. chahe dur se rishtedaar ho... ap sab ko humse poochna parey ga" instructed Geet strictly. Theey all nodded and said, "Ji bari bahu saa.. jo bhi aapka hukum". "Ab jayiye.. and no mistakes this time.. and if there are.. then you all will have to deal with the consequences. They all nodded and left to their duties. Geet was storming angry, but took three deep breaths and walked towards the main party hall.

As she entered the hall, she felt a strong hand pull her into one of the side entrances. She was still flaming angry.. and she got even more frustrated. " Maan!" said a frustrated Geet. Maan looked at her and analyzed her face and said, "Geet.. kuch hua kya?... why do you look angry..". "Nothing Maan... just leave itt... lets just enjoy the party" said Geet as she loosened herself from his grip. Maan pulled her towards him again and asked, " Geet... kya hua?". Geet couldn't lie to him... she just didn't have the courage to face it all on her own anymore.. she was just too frustrated. " Guess who came again?" said Geet as she rolled her eyes. Maan knew it. and in the most calmest tone he could say it, " Geet.. why didn't you call me?". "Maan I dealt with him.." said Geet. Maan widened his eyes and said, " How"?. "Oh.. I basically fractured his nose.. it bled a whole lot and I had him arrested and kicked out of the haveli... happy?" said Geet seriously. Maan's eyes widened even more and said, " you what?". Geet rolled her eyes and said, " I fractured his nose and yes it bled a whole lot and I got him kicked out of the haveli.. kutton ki tarah bahar pikvaya hai.. khush?". Maan was shocked. His delicate wife punched so hard?... he never let her touch the housework even when she She was pregnant and she can't use so much force.
" Maan.. don't be surprised please... you know the history of Handa's... boys AND GIRLS are taught archery, sword fighting and horse riding" added Geet with a smirk. "Oh right..." said Maan with a surprised look on his face. "I learned that when I was in my teens and she learned when she was younger... well.. she is my sherni" thought Maan... "Waisay bhi.. aap Mogambo aur Gabbar kay combination hain and I wouldn't want to take a chance in challenging you.." said Geet innocently. That made Maan smile, " Geet.. I want you to be strong... and the strong person you have become is just wonderful.. I love it". I won't let him bother us now jaan.. I won't. " This time.. hes done for...I'll make it hell said Maan in his typical arrogant and powerful attitude... Geet looked at him and said, " Maan please take care in whatever you do... and I want you to promise me one thing". Maan asked, " Kya". " You will protect Aryaan and our baby.. no matter what happens.. you know it Maan.. its either one of us.." said Geet. Maan knew. Maan couldn't ignore that promise... he could do anything for Geet. "I promise Geet..." said Maan as he raised her hand to kiss it. He put his hand on her tummy and said, " I won't let anything happen to you pari". Geet had tears in her eyes and cupped her hand around his cheek.

Suddenly, hands tapped Maan on the shoulder and he turned around. " Oh ho... dusray bhi iss mehfil mein hai.. zara nazar uthakay dekhlijiye. "Meera? tum" asked Maan. " Haan ji.. aur kaun.. aapki pyar si saali sahiba and choti bhabhi" smirked Meera. Geet blushed and escaped Maans cornering act near the pillars. She rushed beside Meera and said, "Chal.. daadi maa bularahi hongi". She was blushing hot red because usually these moments with Maan were with no one around and Meera seeing it is just too embarassing. Meera laughed and went with Geet, leaving Maan smiling to himself.

Although Geet loved having Maan all to herself. Truthfully saying.. she loves it when he grabs her like that.. she loves his possessiveness and attitude when he gets protective. Maan on the other hand loves it when she blushes likethat.. he loves it that she can act like a typical punjabi kuri and punjabi wife.. and act strong and modern too! They just loved eachother to bits...!

here it iss! please comment and tell me how you like it!😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
... boys AND GIRLS are taught archery, sword fighting and horse riding" added Geet with a smirk.

tats great,.... DEV sud have known tat...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
loved the update..............
loved geet's punch.................
loved maaneet's cute little romantic scene....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: aarthirajendran

... boys AND GIRLS are taught archery, sword fighting and horse riding" added Geet with a smirk.


tats great,.... DEV sud have known tat...



Well now lol.. he didn't:p now he knows! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Part 17: Enjoooy and Comment!!

When the party was finished that evening, the Khurana family were all gathered in the main living area. " daadi maa... the party was just fabulous!" smiled Meera. " I know beta! aaj kitna mazaa aaya na?" added Dadi maa. Geet was just "pretend smiling" because her mood was ruined by that stupid man. Maan nudged her to signal her that she needs to tell "THE NEWS". Geet suddenly remembered and said, " uhm. daadi maa.. aapko kuch baat batani thi". Daadi maa looked at Geet and said, " Jii bete.. boliyee... kya baat hai". " Woh daadi maa... main.. umm... " stuttered Geet. Daadi looked at her questioningly. " Daadi maa.. main phir se maa banewali hoon" said Geet as she blushed hard. Daadi maa's face lit up like a show of fireworks! " Geet!! sach me beta?!! mujhe itni khushi ho rahi hai kay.. mujhe yakeen bhi nahi a raaha". She looked at Geet lovingly and said, "Geet bete.. idhar aayiyee..". Geet stood up and sat beside Daadi maa. She kissed Geet's forhead and said, " Bete.. aap apna khayal rakhti hain kay nahi?". "Jii daadi maa.. Maan mera itna khayal rakte hain kay mujhe kuch karna hai parta.. mujhe ghar kay kaam bhi haath nahi laganay dete" smiled Geet. "Geet bete.. humne faisla kiya hai kay aap sab yahaan mere paas rahenge jab tak bacha payda nahi ho jata.. hum Geet ka khayal rak sakte hain"said Daadi maa. " Maan bete.. aapko aitraaz nahi hai na?" asked Daadi maa in a hopeful voice. Maan looked at her and knew that all people out of everyone.. he just couldn't refuse his daadi maa. " I'll just have to work from the Jaipur office.. " thought Maan.He came out of his thoughts and said, "Acha daadi maa.. hum sab yahaan par rahenge.. aapke paas".

"GREATT.! THIS MEANS LESSONS ON HORSE RIDING AND ARCHERY BHABHI?" added Sameer jokingly. " Sameer! behave... aapko pata hai naa kay Geet pregnant hai naa... to woh bus araam karegi" scolded Daadi. " Oh come on daadi maa.. I've seen how good bhabhi is with swords, arrows and horses, she can be a good competition for Maan bhai" said Sameer. "Actually yess.. mujhe bhi dekhna hai Maan veerjii VS Geet Sherni Khurana" laughed Meera. "Meera.. tu naa.. pitay gi mujhse.. chup kar!" said Geet. " Sameer... daadi maa theek keh rahi hain.. Geet ko araam ki zarorat hai.. woh bechari kya laregi?"said Maan with a pretend serious tone. Geet looked at Maan with her full on sherni look and said " Oh hello jii.. main bechari wechari nahin hoon... aur aap kisko challenge de rahe hain?". " Geet.. mere itni himmat?" said Maan with a sarcastic tone. " Daadi maa.. dekhiyee.. Maan mujhse kya keh rahe hain" complained Geet. " Maan... aap meri bahu ko kyun tung kar rahe hain?" said Dadi maa. "Nahin daadi maa.. yeh Mogambo aisay chup nahi hongay...okay fine. Mr. Khurana.. I challenge you." said Geet. "Geet.. tum haar jaogi" said Maan with an arrogant look on his face. " Oh ho.. aap bus harnay ki tayaari karein.." challenged Geet. "Okay. done... " said Maan. "Geet bete! aapkay sehat kay liye yeh sahi nahi hai.. aap nahi karengi". "Okay okay.. wait wait.. ek minute yaar.. okay. how about Maan bhai and Geet bhabhi teaching ME how to do all of this?" said Sameer. " Theek hai.. waisay Geet ko araam karna chahiye.." said Maan. " Maan ji..shayad aap bhool gaye.. Sameer needs lessons.. and IM NOT tired." retorted Geet. "Theek hai Geet ji.. jo aapki ichha.". Geet and Maan both were pretty serious, whereas Meera and Sameer were just chuckling to themselves of how childish both can act even if they are the older ones. "Chaliye.. sonay ka time ho gaya hai.. aap sab jaa kar sojayiye" said Daadi maa as she shrugged off whatever was going on. Daadi Maa left and the two couples were getting up to go to into their respective rooms.

Ok guys.. to make the story even more interesting.. im going to have Dev's point of view as well! :) I hope you guys like it!



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Dev returned back to his hotel after getting heavily drunk in the nearby bars. He was so drunk that he needed help to get upto his room. As soon as an employee helped him to his room, he threw himself down on his bed. "Thankyou and get lost..." said a drunk Dev. The employee looked at him with utter disgust and left the room. Dev was laying on his bed with his eyes closed thinking of the past few incidents that had occurred in the past two weeks. " That stupid bitch of a woman... I wish I just had killed her..." thought Dev. He suddenly went deep into this thoughts and recollected all the events that happened over the last 6 years.

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"I hope she learns her lesson not to mess with Dev Singh Khurana..." sneered Dev. As he got into his car, he was thinking and laughing to himself how extremely fun that was. " Damn Dev.. you are just too good.. I haven't had much fun in sex before.. damn she was good" said Dev as he laughed to himself. He reached his home and parked his car in the front and gave the keys to the driver. Dev entered his home and went straight to bed.

The next morning Dev woke up from bed feeling a little too fresh from last night. He stretched and got up off his bed. He quickly brushed his teeth and got himself ready for the long day ahead of him. As he walked into his living room, he stopped. He saw a little petite figure not facing him. " Excuse me? who are you and what are you doing in my house?" asked Dev. The woman turned around and faced him with a smirk. Dev had a surprised look on his face and he could not believe it. "Tum?" said Dev. " Surprised to see me Mr. Khurana?" said the woman with a smirk on her face.

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Suddenly, Dev was startled out of his thoughts when his cellphone began to ring in his hear. Dev opened his eyes and turned to lay on his stomach and reached for his cell. " Hello? kaun hai yaar... subah se pareshaan karke raka hain" said a frustrated and tired Dev. " Ab to tumhare sar pe pareshaani ka pahar hoga Mr. Kameena Dev Singh Khurana" said the voice. " you freaking ninnny.. get off your lazy a**". " Kaun bol raha hain" demanded Dev angrily. " Your worst nightmare"replied the voice.

Endd of part 17--- !😊

Edited by Desigirl144 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
this was awesome...
loved itt
plz cont soon
1st to comment lol
Edited by Ilovemsk - 14 years ago

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