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Part 10 & 11 Awesome update ..
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just read 9, 10 & 11..
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Part 12: Enjoy and Comment! :) I love reading those!! :)


"Meera!. .chall.. churiyaan lete hain" pointed Geet as she got so excited. " Haan Haan Geet.. ek minutee!" as Meera said as she was trying to buy new payals. "Chal, mujhe us wale stall par milna" said Geet as she was walking away from Meera. Meera nodded and continued trying to look for her own things. As Geet walked towards the stall, she looked around and was just admiring the whole mood around her. She entered the shop and started to pick out churiyaan for all her new suits and well... for the future ones as well. Geet was so into picking out churiyaan that she didnt realize that someone came behind her. They put their hand on her shoulder signalling her to turn around. Geet frowned and turned around. Suddenly, a look of shock overtook her.

"Dev! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE.." said Geet as she got into her protective mode. " Arey yaar.. Geet... oops. I mean bhabhi... aap yahaan?" said Dev sarcastically. " Dev yahaan par scene mat create karo.. yahaan se jao or else I swear to God I will kill you with my bare hands" said Geet as she clenched her fists. " If you kill me.. then who will take care of your coming child while ur in jail"added Dev with a smirk. " Dev. you better leave right now. or else I;ll create a scene and make sure that ur accomodated in the nearest jail cell" added Geet with a smirk on her face. " Shutup you b****..." snapped Dev. " Dev tumhe shayaad yaad nahi hai... kay mein Geet Maan Singh Khurana hoon.. aur agar tumhe aankh utha kar bhi mere ghar ko dekha na.. to main tumhara itna bura haal karoongi kay koi tumhe pehchaan nahi payega. " added Geet.

Suddenly, someone put their hand on Dev's shoulder who was just about to literally rip Geet apart. "Dev... yahaan se chup chaap chale jao" said Sameer seriously. Dev turned around and turned towards his brother and put a smile on his face and said, " Sameer! kahaan thay tum? aur bataya bhi nahi". Dev was about to go in for a hug but suddenly Sameer put out his hand to stop him. " Dev, tum yahaan se chale jao... warna main tumhara bilkul wohi haal karoonga waisay jaisay Maan bhai aur mainay pehle kiya tha". Meera came behind Sameer and was shocked to see Dev. Seeing all of this Dev said, " Geet. ek baat yaad rakhna... I'll make you lose everything that you hold dear to your life... just wait.. like you took everything from me... I'll do it your style". Geet said, "Agar tumne Maan yaa Aryaan kay taraf aankh utha kar bhi dekha.. yaa unhe chooth pohchaney ki koshish bhi ki naa.. to koi mujhse buraa nahi hoga" said Geet protectively. " Jao Dev" repeated Geet.. Dev left and got into his car where he sped away.

" Geet! tum theek ho na?" said Meera as she ran up to comfort her best friend. Geet softened her expression and smiled, "Haan Meera... bus.. chal... kuch aur dekhte hain". Sameer walked upto both the ladies and said, " Bhabhi, aap fikar mat kijiye.. Maan bhai aur mein.. Dev se nipat lenge.. aap bus apni looong ladies shopping khatam kiyjiye" said Sameer with a less serious expression. "Ah hah. Devarjii.. aap to bilkul.. woh kya kehte hain. superman? haa.. superman.. ban gayee hain" joked Geet. "Woh to main hun.. itni pretty ladies mere samne hai to mein kya karsakta hoon... kabhi kabaar superman buna parta hai" joked Sameer. All of them laughed and continued on with their shopping.

Geet was extremely bothered the rest of the day after they came back after the bazaar. After a few hours, Maan came back from his meetings all throughout the day. Geet was sitting in her bedroom thinking of the whole day. She had to tell Maan... she just had to..she hadn't hid anything from him.. neither did he hide anything from her. " Maan will not be happy... oh God. if he finds out.." thought Geet. Maan came into the room and took off his tie. He saw Geet and sat on the other side of the bed. He was taking off his socks and just relaxing himself. "Kya hua Geet ko? usually woh nonstop bolti hai... aur complain karti hai kay main kyun late aaya" thought Maan. He knew that if she was dead quiet, something was surely going through her head. So he turned around and asked her, " Geet.. tum itni chup kyun ho?". No answer. So Maan asked her again. No answer again. Maan got really worried and sat near her. He put his hand on her shoulder. She jolted out of her thoughts and said, "Maan.. aap kab aaye.. maine aapko aaye vay suna nahi". "Geet... main to abhi 5 min pehle aagaya tha" said Maan. "Geet.. kuch hua kya? mujhe baatao" said Maan again.

"Maan... aaj phir Dev ayaa tha" admitted Geet. Suddenly, Maan clenched his fists and his blood was starting to boil. "I was buying churiyaan in a nearby stall... and he just appeared there" added Geet. " Geet.. tumne mujhe phone kyun nahi kiya.. how dare he come near you?" said Maan angrily. " Maan.. main kaisay phone karti.. par I dealt with him.. so you don't need to" assured Geet. Maan stood up and said, " This was the last straw.. now I will definitely deal with him". Geet stood up and said, " Maan... he won't dare go near you or Aryaan.. he knows that you are my weakness... or else he should know that messing around with Geet Maan Singh Khurana's husband or son will cost him his everything". " Geet... your Maan Singh Khurana will never let anything happen to you or his son... you know that I will turn the sky and earth upside down in order to protect you and Aryaan" added Maan.
" We both are here to protect the coming baby and Aryaan" said Geet. Maan nodded his head and said, "That's like my Geet" said Maan proudly. Geet softened her expression and walked upto Maan with a naughtly look on her face. She stood in front of him and put her hand on his shirt button and said, " aaj to tussi itnay sexy lag rahe ho". Maan came out of his thoughts and had a surprised look on his face. He looked down at her with a serious look on his face. " Jab aap ghussa kartay hain to aur bhi sexy lagte hain" smirked Geet. Maan continued to stare at her. She started to unbutton his shirt and he just stood there frozen.

Geet loved that he wasn't doing anything. Suddenly, he grabbed her waist and said, " You messed with the wrong person Mrs. Khurana". They were so close together that they could hear each other's heart beat faster. Maan could hear Geet breathing faster as her heart beat increased. He inched his face closer to hers and was aiming directly at her lips. She inched in further where their lips were almost touching. Maan finished the distance between their lips and touched his lip to hers. Geet felt weak at her knees as he tastefully explored her mouth. She wrapped her arms around his neck and held onto his hair. They both were kissing eachother as if they were about to be separated forever. Geet let go of his lips and could not breath. " Mr. Khurana.. I feel like I'm falling in love with you again". Maan smiled and suddenly took Geet into his arms and placed her on the bed. Geet surrendered herself to Maan and closed her eyes. He laid on the bed and was on top of her carefully not putting any of his weight on her as she was pregnant. She pulled him towards her.And then both became one body once again.


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both parts amazing pls cont soon thanks pm
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Very nice one

so dev is brother of maan n sameer interesting.

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Pleaaasee add me to your PM list!!!! <3
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Part 13- enjoyy

That very night Geet was awake in Maan's arms who was awake. Her head was on his bare chest where as he held her hand which was on his chest as well. She could hear his steady heartbeat and slow breath while sleeping. She felt peace and security in his arms. She inched herself closer and tighter to him. He was sound asleep, but something was bothering Geet which kept her up. She closed her eyes and remembered that night again.

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"Haye rabba... atleast the blood is off" said Geet as she stepped over the rock and onto the dry sandy spot. She looked around her to make sure no one was there. No one was there. She stripped off the sheet and put on the shalwar suit that she was previously wearing. " Haye rabba.. why did this happen to me" said Geet as she teared up. She wiped her tears and said, "Dev.. tumne ghalat ladki se panga liya hai... ab meri baari hai... tumne ". Geet finished changing and climbed up the big rocks and finally reached the top. "Us kam**nay ne Geet Handa se panga liya hai.. ab mein uski zindagi barbaad karke rahoongi". She walked on swearing and cursing him. Geet reached the end of the forest and into a long road that led to the city. She walked in and put her dupatta on her head and covered her mouth leaving her eyes uncovered. Geet reached a bus stop and said, "I'll take this bus to Meera's house". The bus finally arrived and Geet climbed in. She reached a stop and she got out of the bus. Geet continued walking towards Meera's neighbourhood. Meera lived alone because she was an orphan. Meera was a well off lady doctor and businesswoman in New Delhi and was one of the most powerful women in all of Delhi. She lived in her own apartment alone. Her best friend Geet was one of the top well known businesswomen in Delhi and as well held enormous power in Delhi, due to her business. She and Meera rose from ashes to something, when they came to Delhi from Hoshiyaarpur.

Geet reached Meera's doorstep and rang her doorbell. Meera opened the door and said, "GEET? tu? yahaan? kya hua.. andaar aaja". Geet walked in and took off her dupatta. She turned around to face her best friend that had a obvious question mark on her face. Meera with wide eyes said,"GEET? WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU? KIS NE KIYAA?". Meera ran up towards Geet and grabbed her shoulders. Geet started to ball her eyes out. Meera took her into her TV room and sat her down on the couch. She quickly brought a box of tissues and a glass of water. She sat beside Geet who put her head on Meera's shoulder and started to cry. After about 15 mins, Meera finally calmed Geet down and got her to talk. Geet wiped her tears and composed herself and said, "Dev kidnapped me from my apartment, he shot all the guards and broke into my house. He dragged me, I tried to get away... he shut my mouth with a kapra... then he took me to this weird cottage and I tried running away... I even started to dial the police... and I tried to hit him with a vase but he was too strong for me... then he threw me on the bed and for 3 hours... he... he.." Geet stopped. Meera said, " Geet kya... boloo".

"He raped me dammit" spat Geet. Meera's expression changed into a shocked/ angry face. " Geet? WHY DIDN'T YOU REPORT TO THE POLICE?" demanded Meera. Meera eyes teared up and she hugged Geet tightly. She stroked Geets hair like a mother while Geet was sobbing quietly. " Chal Geet.. go change.. I have clothes upstairs.. go take a shower and come down.. I'll warm up dinner.. Im hungry anyways" said Meera as she let go of Geet. Geet nodded her head and headed upstairs.

After Geet had finished taking a shower and she changed into other clothes, Meera was preparing dinner. Geet walked upto Meera and said, " Meera.. thankyou so much... tu meri sabse achi dost hain.. aur mein kuch bhi nahi desakti.. tu to bari well off hai. aur main kya dehsakhit hoon". Meera turned around and smiled, " Geet.. aisi baat mat kar.. tu ne mujhe behn ki tarah treat kiya hai.. aur tu meri sabse achi dost aur behn bhi hai.. to aisi fazool batein mat kar.. and stop the tears.. you look like Meena Kumari". Both girls laughed and sat down for dinner. As both were talking, Meera finally said," Geet.. tu Dev ke baray mein kya karegi?..." .Geet stopped eating and looked at her best friend,"Meera.. I'll deal with him.. he messed with Geet Handa.. the Geet Handa that will turn him into ashes.. stupid B*stard... he doesn't know what I'll do now". Meera looked quiet concerned but she knew that he was definitely going to suffer. "Geet.. tu soch samaj kar karna.. waisay.. teri yeh dost tere saath hain". Geet smiled, " Ab mein uska woh haal karoongi kay dunya dekhti reh jayegi". Both smiled at eachother and contined on
Dev was definitely going to suffer.. since he messed with two of the most powerful women and he was an ant compared to Meera and Geet.

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Geet opened her eyes and realized that it was morning and Maan still was asleep. She smiled and leaned forward and kissed Maan on the cheeks. Maan slowly opened his eyes and a small smile crept on his face. He turned his head toward Geet and kissed her forhead. " Good morning Jaan." in his husky tone. Oh that voice of his drove Geet crazy. Geet smiled, " Good morning Mr.Khurana... how was your sleep?" Maan said, " oh it was good.. but the night was even better.. you really did get me tired". Geet smiled naughtily and said, "Maan... jaldi se uthiye aur naha lijiye."Geet got up out of bed and wrapped herself with her silk night sheets. Geet's slender body drove Maan crazy... he just had that feeling of pouncing on her and having her all day. Geet opened the blinds and to welcome the new rays of sunshine into their room. Maan was on the bed just smiling and staring at her angelic beauty that he fell in love with the first time he saw her. Maan came out of his thoughts and got up off the bed and went into the washroom to take a shower. He was done shortly and told Geet to go into the shower but said, "Geet... can I help you in there?" smirked Maan. Geet smiled, " Nahi Maan ji.. aap bus ready ho jayein.. main abhi aati hoon". Geet laughed and went into the washroom.

😳 I hope you guys like it!
Edited by Desigirl144 - 14 years ago
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nice interesting story..............................
that Dev deserves to be beaten for his sins....................
hope Maan teaches him a good lesson for life......................
Maan and Geet scenes are so beautiful and lovely..................
Sameer and Meera are nice..........................
Aryan is so cute.................
cont soon and pm me..................
have sent u the friend invi too...................
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nice updates ,... 😊 love
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