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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 8:

Later that night, Geet was lying on her bed and thinking very deeply… Suddenly, she went into that same thought of that horrible night that changed her look and personality.

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"Someone please help me screamed" Geet as she screamed on top of her lungs. "No one is here.. .what am I going to do??? Its so late at night". "Kya karoon" thought Geet. Suddenly, she remembered that there was a little storage room and it might have some clothes in it... "I think the last owners just abandoned this little cottage… I wouldn't blame them.. its so creepy… " thought Geet. Geet wrapped the sheet around her even tightly and walked towards the storage room. As she entered the dusty area with cobwebs hanging, she found a large chest box. "Wow this is just not realistic is it?.. kya karoon.. I have to get to Meera's house" muttered Geet. So she opened the box and found a baggy shalwar suit that was a million times bigger than her size. "Good enough" thought Geet. So she changed into it and kept the sheet just in case and saw a mirror while changing. She saw herself even closely than before… bruised, scratches and cuts hid her beautiful face. As she put her hand on her cheek, she started crying and thinking, " Oh god… ab kya hoga?...". Geet was helpless at the time but she knew that she needed to get herself out of this mess. Geet went outside of the cottage and found that it was completely pitch dark black outside. She expected some sort of guiding light… However, she prayed to God and entered the dark forest hoping she wouldn't get lost. As she was walking, she spotted a small river. "Great, I'll wash up the dried blood and hopefully wash off everything else too". She knew that no one was there and so she decided to bath herself a little before heading off even more. " I don't want anyone to ask me any question" thought Geet. So she crept her little self down towards the river which seemingly enough was absolutely beautiful. The moon shined onto the water which reflected its purity into the dark water. Geet took her bag and put it on the rock away from the water. She looked around to see if anyone was there. She went on and started to take off her clothes slowly and kept the sheet nearby. She wrapped the sheet in the way that it wasn't too long, neither was it too short. She tightly wrapped it two times and then crept towards the water. She found the perfect rock and sat in the middle of the water and started to wash herself. However, she wasn't not alone this time… Geet was too busy bathing herself/ relaxing after that horrible incident that would scar her for the rest of her life. Geet did not hear the footsteps in the bushes from above, but they were unsure and heavy footsteps…

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"RRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIING… RINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG* roared Geet's alarm that was set to 6 am. She jumped up and realized the time! When she was getting out of the bed, she realized that Maan was still sleeping. So she slowly crept out and entered the washroom to freshen herself up.

Here it iss!! enjooooooooooy! 😊

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Loved ur ff....... plss add me to ur pm list

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Part 9!! Enjooy

The whole day was her usual routine of getting Aryaan ready for school and then getting herself ready for a day at the office. However, now a days Geet has been getting even more exhausted where she just goes home a few hours early. Maan knew of the stress at KC and assured Geet that she would not be working anymore and to take care of her and keep an eye out for her, he would work in their home office.

However one day, Geet was home alone because Maan had to urgently attend an important meeting that had to be done face to face. So he left the house at about 10 o clock and told Nakul Kaka to keep an eye on her. That very day, Geet was walking around the large halls of her home and then she heard a, "BOO" behind her back. She jumped and turned around to see who it was. It was Sameer and Meera back from Canada! " SAMEER! BADMASH! Ek minute! Abhi khabar leti hoon" said Geet who was absolutely not amused by his joke. "Bhabhi!... spare me once naa? Aur kiskay saath karoonga?" joked Sameer. " You have a good point" joked Geet. " Waisay tumhari begum kahaan hain?" askedGeet lovingly. " Sameer ki begum yahaan hain" smiled Meera. Geet was overjoyed and she ran up towards Meera and gave her a tight hug. " Oye! Kahaan thi tu? Phone bhi nahi karsakti thi?" said Geet excitedly. " Sorry Geet' it was so last minute" added Meera. " Why do girls scream each time they see their best friends.. it's not like they've seen them the first time?" asked Sameer jokingly. "Shutup Sameer" said Meera and Geet together. Sameer put up his hands in surrender and said, " jo bhi aap pretty ladies kahein". They all laughed once again like they did in old times.

"Chalo tum log, aapka kamra dikhati hoon aur ek khush khabri bhi sunati hoon" said Geet excitedly. She loved having her devar and best friend over! Geet led them upstairs into their old room that she kept neat and tidy every week because she knew that her best friend and devar would come very unexpectedly. " Chalo.. yeh hai tumhara purana kamra' just the way you left it" said Geet. "Thanks Bhabhi'!" said Sameer with his million dollar smile. " Haan Geet' thankyou.." added Meera. " Aur ek aur khabar... well' I recently found out that.. well.. I'm pregnant" said Geet excitedly. "KYA" said Meera and Sameer at the same time with shocked faces. " OMG GEET! I AM SO HAPPY FOR YOU! EK AUR FARISHTA ISS GHAR MEIN" said Meera excitedly who once again got the chance to become a chachi and mausii again. " Bhabhi! Are you serious?? Kab hua? Aur apnay phone bhi nahi kiya?" said Sameer who was excited with the fact that he had another baby Khurana to spoil. " Well' I found out a day or two ago and things have been so crazy at the office that I never got the chance to' sorry baba!" explained Geet. "Khair.. choro iss baat ko' phirr'? Kab hai due?" asked Meera. "Pata nahi Meera' bus hospital
jaana hai.. kuch test karvanay hain" replied Geet. "Bhabhi, Maan bhai kahaan hain? Aur mera champ Aryaan abhi school say nahi aaya?". "Oh haan! Usko jaa kar pick karna hain.. Sameer zara pick karlo na..main bohot thak gayi hoon" sighed Geet. " Aapka hokum sar aakhon par" replied Sameer.

Sameer went to go pickup Aryaan from school and later returned after 20 minutes. " Chachu! Meri
chocolates kahaan hain?" asked the impatient Aryaan. " Tumhari chachi kay paas hain' aur ek baat bhi.. Mama ko nahi batana" winked Sameer. Aryaan looked with wide eyes and said, " Chachi bhi yahaan hain??!?! Kahaan hai voh" asked Aryaan excitedly. " Aapki chachi yahaan hain beta.. " smiled Meera as she bent down and opened her arms out wide for her nephew. Aryaan flew into her arms and gave her a tight squeeze. " Chachii! I am so glad you are here!" said Aryaan. Geet smiled and said, " Aryaan.. pehle jaa kar fresh ho jao phir baat karenge" . Aryaan frowned, " Okay Mama' promise naa? You both will be there right?". Sameer and Meera nodded in a "yes" and Aryaan ran straight upstairs. Suddenly, Geet heard the all famous, "GEET".
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Part 10: Enjoy!

"Oh ho! Maan! Main yahaan hoon… kahi nahi gayii" yelled Geet. " Sameer Meera.. jaa kar chup jao" instructed Geet. So Sameer took Meera's hand and took her into the pillars which had curtains covering them. "Shh" whispered Sameer. " Geet? GEEET? GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET" yelled Maan. " AAYIII" yelled Geet. Geet walked over towards Maan, but he was quick and got there even before her. Maan wrapped his arms around her waist and said, " Geet… kahaan thi tum?" ." Maan.. buss.. kijiyee… koi dekhlay ga.. Aryaan dekhlay ga" said Geet shyly. She hadn't expected it to go that far.. Oh how embaressing! In front of her devar and best friend. Meera was giggling but Sameer quickly put his finger to her lips to quiet her down. Maan started nuzzling her neck and said, "Aaj mat roko… even if Aryaan comes.. I don't care".

Geet was blushing bright red. Suddenly, Sameer and Meera jumped out of the curtains and yelled, "Surprise!!". Maan quickly let go of Geet and was shocked. Maan cleared his throat, " Sameer? Meera? Tum dono kab aaye?". " Waisay Meera.. tumhe nahi lagta kay hum kabhi kabaar ghalat waqt par aaja thay hain?" teased Sameer. " Aap to bus kijiye.. mere Maan Veerji ko har waqt satatay hain" replied Meera. Sameer and Meera quickly rushed upto Maan and went into his embrace. Maan welcomed them with open arms and hugged both of them. " Tum log kaisay ho?" said Maan lovingly. " Hum theek hain.. buss apki aur Geet Bhabhi ki yaad aa rahi thi" replied Sameer and Meera. Maan smiled and said, " Acha hua… tum dono kitnay din kay liye aaye ho?" asked Maan.

" Actually… we aren't going back to Canada at all… we thought that its time to move back to our own house.. with our own family" replied Sameer. " REALLY? SUCH MEIN? TUM LOG HAMESHA KE LIYE AAYE HO?" said Geet excitedly. " Haan Geet… ab hum sab saath rahenge" replied Meera. Geet was overjoyed! Two of her most favorite people in the world were here to stay! She wouldn't have to miss them anymore! " Waisay, tu na Meera.. mujhse pitay gi.." said Geet. Meera laughed and said, "Kyun?". "Actually.. Sameer.. tum mujhse maar kaaoge."


"Actually bhabhi.. aap apnay pyare se haathon se mujhe Alloo kay parathay bana dijiyee na?" asked Sameer who was obviously hungry. "Oh haan! Itni pagal hoon main.. poocha bhi nahi kay tum dono ko kuch khaana hai ya nahi!" said Geet as she smacked her forhead. " Acha pyare devar jii.. bana deti hoon…" smiled Geet as she squeezed his cheeks. " bhabhi! Aapka haath ka khana to mein chakne ke liye taras gaya tha" said Sameer excitedly. " Chal Meera… tujhse to gupshup hi karni hain" as she said pulling her towards the kitchen.
"Maan bhai you don't know how much Meera and I missed you guys!" said Sameer as he hugged his brother once again. Maan smiled and said, " Kaisay ho Sameer?.. actually.. tum mere saath chalo…" Both the Khurana brothers walked away talking and disappeared into the large hallway.
As everyone started to sit down for dinner, Meera and Geet were busy in the kitchen trying prepare the last bits of dinner. "BOO" yelled Sameer as he came behind Meera, literally scaring the life out of her. "SAMEER! WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT" yelled Meera. " I was joking baby" as he grabbed onto her waist ( pulling a maan trick he learned earlier seeing his brother romance with his bhabhi). Meera blushed bright red and said, "Choro naa… Geet aajayegi… kisi ne dekhliya to?. "Dekhne do… waisay bhi.. if you didn't know already… I'm your hubby" joked Sameer. " Sameer.. baad mein.. please… you know I get shy" replied Meera who just was about to drop. " Kya horaha hai yahaan par" asked Geet as she stood there amused, but still managed to keep a serious face.
Sameer let go of Meera and Meera quickly fixed up herself and they both stood there serious. Geet laughed and said, " lage raho… I'll go" as she left the kitchen. Sameer kissed Meera on the cheek and then quickly ran away. Meera was about to smack him with her wooden stirring spoon. "Abhi bata ti hoon… Mr. Khurana… you act like a lion in front of me… and then Maan veerji ke saamne chuhe ban jate ho… I'll definitely get you back for that one" said Meera.

I hope you enjoy! and I'll probably update again today 😊
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Awesomeeeee update
Loved it
Amazingg part
Awhh so cute hehe
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awesome update.......nice to see.......sameer and meera staying back with maaneet 😊
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Part 11: Enjoy!

Everyone was seated for dinner and then Geet and Meera were putting food onto each plate. As soon as they were finished, both sat down beside each of their respective husbands. Everyone was talking and then suddenly Meera started to play footsies with Sameer. She ran her tiny toes onto his legs and feet but still managing to keep a conversation. Sameer looked shocked. Maan noticing this, " Kya hua Sameer? Sab kuch theek hain naa". "Haan Maan Bhai' sab kuch theek hain" stuttered Sameer. Maan nodded and contined onto his other conversations." Meera' kya kar rahi ho" whispered Sameer as he put his head near her ear. Meera still smiling and eating replied, " Kya? Khana ka rahi hoon.. aur kya karsakti hoon". "Meera' tum ghalat insaan se panga leh rahi ho" smirked Sameer. "Tum ne to ghalat ladki se pehle panga liya tha' mein kya karoon?" replied Meera. Their whispered conversation was interrupted by a phone call on Maans cell phone. Maan picked it up and said, "Hello?" . Maan continued, " Yes Ms. Sprikley' I will meet you for that meeting tomorrow' lets say around lunch time?... We could have our lunch and discuss about this important deal". Geet stopped eating and with wide eyes she then squinted. Maan said good bye and put down the phone. " Yeh gori Sprikley kaun hai?" said Geet as she squinted. Maan replied,"Geet' she is one of our new contacts' kyun?", " Ah hah' yeh gori sprikley office mein nahi mil sakti?" said Geet jealously. "Geet' important kaam hai.. aur tum bhi nahi jaasakti mere jage kyunki tum pregnant ho and you need rest" replied Maan as he ate his food not realizing how jealous Geet looked. Once again, Maan's phone rang and he picked it up, " Oh hello again Ms. Sprikley, yes' and the reservations are at the Italian restaurant..? thankyou' I'll be sure to come tomorrow' thankyou for your time Ms. Sprikley". Geets mouth opened wider. " Haye rabba' Maan' I can't believe that you are actually going' Yeh goriyaan chotay chotay kapray pehn kar office jaati hain...bus aap bhi jasakte... '".

Suddenly Maan realized that Geet was definitely jealous. " hayee rabba... churail sprikley teri kursi toot jaye.. tera ghar jal jaye... " mutted Geet. Maan heard her and smiled. Sameer heard this and said, " Aap se kaun punga lega bhabhi? Someone should tell Sprikley that she shouldn't mess around with her". Meera kicked him in the leg to tell him to shutup right now before he gets the beating of his life. Sameer went quiet and started to eat."Geet' tum jealous to nahi ho rahi" asked Maan who had a smirk on his face. " Nahi JII. Aap bus khana khale and guess what? You're sleeping on the couch" replied Geet who suddenly got up and cleared up her plate and went into the kitchen.

Maan's smirk turned upside down and had the "joru ka ghulam helpless look on his face". " The lady has spoken' you're sleeping on the couch' what will you do now?" teased Sameer. " Maan veerji, I'll talk to Geet' don't worry" assured Meera. "Nahi' aur Sameer mein tumhe baad mein dekhta hoon" said Maan quickly. Afterwards, everyone cleaned up together and then went into the living room to talk some more. Five hours passed so quickly while catching up. They all later went to bed very late.
That very night, Geet definitely meant it when she said he is going to sleep on the couch for the night. Maan had no other choice and he felt too tired to even argue back. So Maan laid on the couch and turned to look at Geet who was already asleep. " She looks like an angel till today' he tried so hard to strip her her innocence but he failed." thought Maan as he looked at Geet. "She filled my life with colors, while her's was as dark as the night... she kept protecting me selflessly... she changed the arrogant and selfish Maan Singh Khurana into a human being.. " thought Maan. Maan closed his eyes as he was looking at Geet for quite awhile. He drifted off into a deep thought
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Maan loved to go camping every weekend because he found it relaxing to stay away from the bustling and busy city of Delhi. Maan went into the woods looking for some more logs, as the ones he used were running out. As he was walking, he approached a beautiful river that was black in color at night but the moon seemed to be shining on it, creating a more relaxing and beautiful atmosphere. "I probably need some water to put out the fire when I'm sleeping anyway. So he approached the area where the river was located and then he suddenly saw a slight figure of a person. As he moved closer and closer he saw a petite woman sort of figure. He was getting curious' Maybe he was seeing things? He walked slowly daring not to make a sound. Maan wanted to know who that woman was. Suddenly, there was a tree that helped him peer over the river in perfect view up at a little height. He knew he couldn't move any closer. So he pushed the branch aside to get a closer look at this woman. As he moved the branch aside, he saw a beautiful woman wrapped in a clear white sheet bathing in the middle of the water. He thought he saw an angel. Maybe a fairy? She was far too beautiful. "Could she be real" thought Maan? The woman was playing around with the water and he saw heard and saw that her payals were making noises as she was splashing her feet into the water. Her beauty was unimaginable. The moon shined onto her pure skin leaving an angelic glow. She was washing herself from head to toe, but she didn't take her white sheet off. As she was washing herself, the drops of water were delicately dripping off her body. "She is the most beautiful woman I've ever seen' she looks like an angel from heaven" thought Maan. Suddenly Maan snapped back into his thoughts and said, " What the hell is happening to me? I feel like a total perv thinking that.. no Maan Singh Khurana... no women.. you know what they do to you". He was back to his own self but it was so hard to take his eyes off of her. He felt a sudden desire to touch her' to see if she was real or just in his dreams. "No' that's just over the top" thought Maan. He pushed back the branch and turned around never looking back.
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"Maan! MAAN' MAAAAAAAAAAAAN" called Geet as she was getting ready for the day to go shopping with Meera. Maan startled awake and said, "KYA HUA GEET". Geet smiled and went upto Maan. She bent down and caressed his face and hair. Maan loved the feeling of her touch, as it sent shocks all through his body. " Maan' wake up' you have a meeting in a few hours" said Geet softly. Maan took her hand and kissed it, " Acha Geet' I'm getting up". Geet smiled and said, " I'm sorry Maan' maine jealousy mein aakar aapko sofay pay sula diya... ". "Koi baat nahi Geet.. waisay' tumharay liye jee jaan haazir hain' yeh sofa kya cheez hai" said Maan in his husky voice. "Chaliye chaliye' uthiye' aapko ready hona hai aur maine aapka breakfast ready karliya hai.." added Geet as she stood up and reached for her purse. "Acha' Sameer, Meera aur main shopping ke liye ja rahe hain' aur aryaan bhi saath jaa raha hai" said Geet as she was about to exit the room. Maan nodded and got up off the couch and went into the washroom.

I'll probably update tomrrow too :) till then.. enjoy! and Commentt! 😛
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