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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shah10

who is that person?

plz..update soon.



Suspense! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Awesome update
Loved it
Awhh Maaneet scenes are soo cute
Hmm I guess Dev hehe
Continue soon
Thank u

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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Nice part!!
i think is Dev!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I thought I'd kill the suspense for you now.. since I felt a little bad! :)

Here is Part 6! Enjoy

"TUM YAHAAN KYA KAR RAHE HO" screamed Geet. " Darling' or oops.. Bhabhi jii' aisay welcome kartay hain mehmaano ko? Sneered Dev. "Aur ek baat bhi BHABHI' main is ghar ka sadasya hoon' afterall.. Khurana hoon na?" replied Dev calmly

Geet walked upto Dev in her protective sherni mode and immediately slapped him across the face. She screamed. " Tumhari itni himmat.. you disgusting devil". Geet was raging in anger. When she slapped Dev he sneered and smiled wickedly at her. " You stupid woman, I should have just thrown you out after I used you that night.. or even better.. used you till you were breathing your last" sneered Dev. Suddenly from above the stairs Dev heard, "DEV!". It was none other than Maan!

Maan walked up in full anger mode and said, "AGAR TUMNAY KUCH AUR BHI KAHAA GEET KO TO MAIN TUMHE ISSI ZAMEEN PAR DAFNA DOONGA". Dev replied, "Oh bro' bhabhi and I were just talking about past times.. you know". "SHUTUP DEV' I HEARD EVERYTHING.. DON'T EVEN TRY TO GO NEAR MY WIFE OR SON' YOU KNOW WHAT I WILL DO.. EVEN IF YOU ARE MY BLOOD' I WON'T EVEN HESITATE TO TURN YOUR LIFE INTO A LIVING HELL" yelled Maan. " Oh bro.. calm down' aap to jazbati ho gaye" said Dev in a perfectly calm tone. He knew that Maan would fume out his anger and that's exactly what he wanted. A Reaction. Maan immediately told Dev to leave the house or else he will make sure that even if he tries to come, he won't have the courage to. Dev smiled wickedly, "Yeah' who else would want to stay in this frickin house anyway but to spend another one with....?". "SHUT UP DEV AND LEAVE THIS HOUSE RIGHT NOW BEFORE I FORCE YOU OUT MYSELF!" roared Maan. "Bro.. relax.. learn to talk with a calm tone" added Dev. " DEV, I SWEAR TO GOD... JUST LEAVE THIS HOUSE RIGHT NOW, YOU DISGUSTING MAN.. I HOPE YOU ROT IN H*LL" screamed Geet. Dev ignored Geet and said "By the way' tell Aryaan that his uncle said Hello' Im sure he would be thrilled" said Dev as he exited the home.

Geet felt weak on her knees and suddenly she began losing her balance. She fell onto the couch in utter horror. Maan turned around and went on his knees, " Geet tum fikar mat karo... main sab kuch theek kardoonga.. aur Dev ko bhi?" Geet went out of her trance and wiped all her tears away. She tried to smile and said, "Haan Maan' aap fikar maat karo par please... aap abhi kuch mat karna... us Dev ko bus reaction hi chahhiye... waisay mein aapsay kabhi nahi alaag ho sakti". Maan knew that fakeness behind her smile and said, " Geet, you know I will lay down my life if it means that you are protected from Dev". Geet immediately put her hand to his mouth and said "Maan.. please aisay baatein maat kijiye' yeh Geet apna tun aur mann de chuki hain aapko' and if it means protecting you I too will risk anything' even my own izaat to save you, even if I have to burn my whole body to provide you heat and warmth.. I will". "Geet.. aisay baatein mat karo... yeh tumhara Maan abhi zinda hai.. aur tumhari hifazat kartay rahe ga.." said Maan protectively. Maan took her in his arms immediately and said, "Geet.. hum apni zindagi Aryaan aur apne liye jiyenge.. aur hamara anaay wala bacha kay liye bhi". Geet smiled said, "Chalein.. is baat ko bhool jayen aur nashta kartein hain". Maan agreed and helped Geet up and held her hand all the way to the breakfast table.

I hope you like it... :) its a little dramatic but theres more drama to come!! :)😊

Edited by Desigirl144 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
res
yay....me 1st...me 1st....🥳
btw....awesum parts...luvd dem😳...do pm me whenever u update plz

Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Nice FF . do pm me whenever u post the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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just read all the prts...
nice story..
plz add me to ur pm list...
n continue soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 7:

"Geet' I have an urgent meeting, I have to go and quickly attend' I'll be back in two hours" said Maan in a hurry. "Acha Maan.. aap jayein" said Geet. Maan asked her if she was going to be okay and Geet replied in a nod. Maan left the home shortly five minutes afterwards and left Geet sitting on the swingset out in the garden. She went deep into her thoughts'

------FlashBack--------

Kya karlogi jaan? Sneered Dev. "Are you going to call your savior and Superman?" laughed Dev. Geet screamed, " Don't even dare to go near me". Too late' Dev had already torn off Geet's Dupatta and the sleeves of her suit. " Man' I should take pictures of these wonderful moments' nahh. Actually.. they will be stored in my memory and yours too" sneered Dev. Dev grabbed Geet and threw her onto the bed where he stripped off his clothes. Geet was screaming and crying. She was a relatively strong girl but Dev's strong hold prevented her from slipping away. She was struggling so much that Dev put all his weight onto her and started tearing off all her clothes. Geet was struggling and crying so loud, but no one was there to save her because they were in a secluded area. Dev finally stripped Geet naked of all her clothes and started scratching and invading himself into her body. He bit her; he punched her' and explored her body tastefully. He was at this for a whole three hours and finally he let go and put on his clothes. Geet was as dead as ever. She could not move because her body ached and her tears dried up leaving mascara trails all over her face. Dev finished putting on his clothes and took another look at Geet's injured and bruised body. He laughed wickedly. He left the room. There was silence in the whole room. Geet finally attempted to get up and tore the sheets off the bed to coverherself. Geet could not believe that this would happen to her! She just didn't have a reaction at all' she was as frozen as a statue'

---------------End of Flashback------------

Suddenly Geet broke out of her thoughts and heard Maan coming in from the door. She wiped her tears and walked towards the interior of the house. Maan saw her and knew that something was horribly wrong. Maan rushed towards her, "Geet' kya hua? Dev phir se aaya kya? Usko to mein-" . "Maan, sach mein.. kuch nahi hua" Geet said cutting Maan off midway. "Geet tum fikar mat karo' I'll deal with him and no this time you aren't binding me with your promises" stated Maan. "Par Maan-" as Geet said trying to explain.

" Chup! Bilkul Chup Geet' Maan Singh Khurana jab thaan leta hai.. to woh har haal mein karta hain... koi bhi na rok sakta.. tum bhi nahi said Maan fiercely. Geet shut her mouth right away and smiled, "Acha Mr. Khurana' mere samne itne sher bante ho". Joked Geet. Maan laughed, "Tumhara to chuhe jaisa dil hain naa?". "Nahi.. main to Miss. Hoshiyarpur aur aapki apni sherni hoon" joked Geet. Maan laughed at her comment. " Acha ab upar chaltay hain' tumse kuch office ki baatein karni hain" said Maan seriously. Geet wasn't in the mood and joked, "Yeh baatein karni hain kya' woh baatein karni hain winked Geet as she trailed her finger through the side his face. Maan knew that if he said something back, he would lose his self control. "Geet.. seriously' we have to talk". Said Maan seriously. " Eh lo' okay.mr. saru.. chalein.. baatein kartay hain... ab kiska chuhay jaisa dil hai" muttered Geet." Kya" asked Maan. "Kuch nahi' chaliye" said Geet. And they both went upstairs into their office area.

Here it iss!! :)😊


Edited by Desigirl144 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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poor Geet went through a lot evil Dev😡 awesome update pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: simi91

poor Geet went through a lot evil Dev😡 awesome update pls cont soon



Yepp! But I thnk you;ll hate him even more as the story goes on! :) Thats my goall ehhe but thanks for reading it though 😊

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