The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1]

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

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Awwwwwwwwwww Suja i have to repeat the same word again n again
it was just awesome and mind- blowing update
ur update was so peaceful that i jst loved it and wanna read it more n more
its a great feeling u know..
the way describe everything i just can say hats off to u.......
its a very simple, cute, nice and wonderful ff
mayank n nupur both r so innocent- i loved them re
haye mayur bus scene- they were almost abt to kiss- ye bus conductor bhi na- iska timing itna kharab kyun hai....LOL LOL
Oh GOD the church scene was fantastic
nups dream- wow it was toooooooo good. i wish mayur ka dream jald se jald puri ho jaye.
btw why r u saying that-------------

They started their journey together … not only for the fair, but for a lifetime … but they didn't know that!

hahaha baat kya hai bhai

is any twist waiting 4 us???

sujaaaaaaa it was wowest and awesomest update

loved it to the core

now eagerly waiting 4 the next part.

keep it up

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jiya

@--jiya--

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

like like super like😍

i don know why, but i feel like singing this song

"tomaar khola hawa....

lagiye paale...

tukro kore kaachi

aami dubte raaji aachi

tomaar khola hawa..."

sigh...😍

Nupur's dream... i soooooooo wish it comes true

and they live happily ever after😍

awesome update di👏 (do i hv to tell you dis everytime?😉)

luv u loads🤗 (u already know dis😆)

-jiya-

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#193

@sajal

wow...Beautiful update🤗🤗

loved Mayur scenes...n Nupur imagination

do continue soon

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itzMYattitude

@itzMYattitude

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#194

awesomeeeeeee update dear

loved it to the core

amazinggggggg job

mayu is really sweeeeet

loving him in ur ff

was in short a lovely n cute update

was bit short

do continue sooooooooon

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

Wonderful update Saja mayur moments in the bus was sweeeeeeeeeeet mayur imagining each other in the church wooow hope the wil confess b4 mayu goes to back bautiful part hun i love th pic's u used myr loot cute thanks for the pm

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nanchie sharma

@mayur-ki-diwani

Navigator

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

beautiful part

sooooo adorable n sweet

loved the imagination part of mayur

continue soon

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#197

It was amzing one dear omg luved mayur scene...specially da dream one...by god...😍..

i luved da way u describe da surrounding it's seems lik im watching online ....👏

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503046

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Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Res!! Will update when will be back from the college!

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#199

it was so sweet.........
nups wass dreaming about her marriage with mayank....wow😍
lovely part
suja i love ur this ff so much....its so simple but so beautiful
u tell a sweet story with simplicity
love it
thnx for pm nd plz cont soon