The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1]

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#171

superb superb superb

marvelous.... beautifully written

luved the birds convo....dat was soooooo sweet

luved mayur feelings fr each other....soon they confessed

n tnx fr the translation....

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nanchie sharma

@mayur-ki-diwani

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#172

awesomeeeee part

mayur were soooooooo cute

continue soon

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

It was mindblowing update.....luved it...2 da core...mayur were awesum....😍

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

suja......today i was hearing that song whole day nd imagined the scene..........suja i can't xpalin how beautiful it was.........😍

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#175

Very sweet Update..

But Mayank should not underestimate himself..

their friendship is growing now...

Very fine update..

thnx for the pm ..

and i am waiting for ur Yun Mile Hum Tum FF

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Awwww another awesomest update...😳😳
It ws sooooo cute...Specially the convo bw the birds...Hope the prediction of the bird turns out true...Im really excited for the confession and mayank's reaction...😍😍
And thnx for the rabindrasongeet that too of shan...I never knew that shan sang robindrasongeet too...The song ws so pleasant to hear and shan's voice suits it very well...
Before reading the note i ws surprised that how cud u translate rabindrasongeet so perfectly...Then i read the note and laughed...Do u really need any help for translation...I dnt think so..😆😆
Now cont soon...

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itzMYattitude

@itzMYattitude

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#177

again sorry for being late

awwwwww

lovely update dear

really enjoyed alot reading it

awesomeeeeee

amazingly wwritten

u have done a great job

do continue sooooooooon

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: jiya_angel
OMG Sujata-di
😍

one of my favourite Rabindra Sangeet + mahalaya + mayur
😍

ooooo..... i m on seventh heaven right now

awesome to say the least
👏

thnx for de pm
🤗

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😃

m really happy that u like this update😃

i was really nervous after posting😳

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: -Faria-
Sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Heyyyyyyyyyyy - u r just too good dear
what in update- totally mind blowing------awwwwwww u added Rabindra Sangeet- and thats veryyyyyyy cute one.
u knw i alwz love RS. it sooths my mind
u have selected a very nice song
it conveyed mayanks feelings in a beautiful way
wah i was lost on this song.
i loved mahalaya also-

and the convo b/w blue birds was just fantastic
hahahahaha even they know mayur love each other.

GOD knows when will they confess their love........

it was a wonderful update Sujaaaaaaaaaaa
simply superb
enjoyed a lot
keep it up sweet heart.
take care

now i m humming this R.S

Esho nipobone chaya bithi tole
esho koro snan, nobo dhara jole
esho nipobone chaya bithi tole................

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😃

as a bengalee, m also love RS ......... this is one of my favorite.😃

Thanks for liking birds convo.......bt i thot, it was very childish😛..........n i laugh during writting😆

mayur confess their love soon........just wait😉

is this song ur fav one??? actually its remaind me Sonar tori .... my altime fav poem😃

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed
🤣
now i'll tell u why i m laughing ...i read ur note n thought there is no update n coment on tht .....but thn i saw uff yaha tu update bhi .......

any ways

yaar it was a beauitful part ....specilly the converstion between the birds..tht was soooooooo cute..........the song ..lyrics ....ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i was lost completly ....

thn nups care ...pls dont break him....aww.....bst line of ths ff ....just loved it.....

evrything was perfect 👏👏

u rocked .....loved it to core sachii