The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] - Page 22

Originally posted by: -Faria-

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Awwwwwwwwwww Suja i have to repeat the same word again n again
it was just awesome and mind- blowing update
ur update was so peaceful that i jst loved it and wanna read it more n more
its a great feeling u know..
the way describe everything i just can say hats off to u.......
its a very simple, cute, nice and wonderful ff
mayank n nupur both r so innocent- i loved them re
haye mayur bus scene- they were almost abt to kiss- ye bus conductor bhi na- iska timing itna kharab kyun hai....LOL LOL
Oh GOD the church scene was fantastic
nups dream- wow it was toooooooo good. i wish mayur ka dream jald se jald puri ho jaye.
btw why r u saying that-------------

They started their journey together ' not only for the fair, but for a lifetime ' but they didn't know that!

hahaha baat kya hai bhai

is any twist waiting 4 us???

sujaaaaaaa it was wowest and awesomest update

loved it to the core

now eagerly waiting 4 the next part.

keep it up

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

Wonderful update Saja mayur moments in the bus was sweeeeeeeeeeet mayur imagining each other in the church wooow hope the wil confess b4 mayu goes to back bautiful part hun i love th pic's u used myr loot cute thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Nice part.😊

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

Thanks for loving this update😊

Originally posted by: nightdreamer_mn

It was amzing one dear omg luved mayur scene...specially da dream one...by god...😍..

i luved da way u describe da surrounding it's seems lik im watching online ....👏

Originally posted by: itzMYattitude

awesomeeeeeee update dear

loved it to the core

amazinggggggg job

mayu is really sweeeeet

loving him in ur ff

was in short a lovely n cute update

was bit short

do continue sooooooooon

Originally posted by: arjunkidiwani

wao...waiting 4 d updates

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

Thanks for loving this update😊

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

it was so sweet.........
nups wass dreaming about her marriage with mayank....wow😍
lovely part
suja i love ur this ff so much....its so simple but so beautiful
u tell a sweet story with simplicity
love it
thnx for pm nd plz cont soon

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

wow mn magic all set to begin....! lovely update...cont soon n thnx fr d pm😳

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

amazing update

luved mayur bus scene n they almost kissed and dat stupid bus conductor ruined their romance....huh

the way u describe the fair was really mindblowing n luved mayur n pranjal convo.....

the church scene was really mesmerizing n luved nupur dream..they started falling fr each other n hope their dreams would come true

luved dat sweet cute little girl tisha....tnx fr the pm n cont soon

Originally posted by: kirti123

😊wow

that was so lovely

first the bus scene

then the church loved nupurs dream😊

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

Thank u so much for loving this update😊

Originally posted by: -moona-

Awesome Part Suja di...

Love their attraction towards each other...

Nice and Romantic part too

aww love Nupur's imagination...

Thnx For the PM

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

awwwwwwwwwww

this was the most beautiful update till date ....

the way u describe the moment ...it was beautiful..

the bus part n the last part was awesumm.......

thy r so much in love i hope the confess soon n he founds sum peace....lovly part

Originally posted by: -Annie-

Res!! Will update when will be back from the college!

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur