The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1]

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

it's really amazing loveddd it osom do continue soon

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

the up is good

so mayank and nupur went to the much awaited village fair

the bus journey was really nice

mayank got lil upset by seeing pranjal

but pranjal is really a fu n loving guy

i liked him

mayank nupur and pranjal enjoyed the fair alot and after that they went to the church to attend vicky and latix wedding

and nupur woh toh aapne aur mayank ke shaddi ke baare mein sochne laag gaye the

plz cont soon and pm me

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

wow mn magic all set to begin....! lovely update...cont soon n thnx fr d pm😳

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#204

amazing update

luved mayur bus scene n they almost kissed and dat stupid bus conductor ruined their romance....huh

the way u describe the fair was really mindblowing n luved mayur n pranjal convo.....

the church scene was really mesmerizing n luved nupur dream..they started falling fr each other n hope their dreams would come true

luved dat sweet cute little girl tisha....tnx fr the pm n cont soon

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kirti123

@kirti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#205

😊wow

that was so lovely

first the bus scene

then the church loved nupurs dream😊

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

awwwwwwwwwww

this was the most beautiful update till date ....

the way u describe the moment ...it was beautiful..

the bus part n the last part was awesumm.......

thy r so much in love i hope the confess soon n he founds sum peace....lovly part

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#207

Awesome Part Suja di...

Love their attraction towards each other...

Nice and Romantic part too

aww love Nupur's imagination...

Thnx For the PM

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Alisha2887

@Alisha2887

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#208

Brilliant update Suja
Looking forward to the next part
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: DhanakZ
Yippee I am first to commen
Such a lovely and so beautiful update
The way U describe whole environment is amazing
Mayur start feeling for each other I am so happy
Thanks for Lovely Update and Pm
cont soon

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti
@sajal

wow...Beautiful update🤗🤗

loved Mayur scenes...n Nupur imagination

do continue soon

Thanks for ur lovely comment😊

Thank u so much for loving this update😊

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#210

😊

Originally posted by: jiya_angel
like like super like😍

i don know why, but i feel like singing this song

"tomaar khola hawa....
lagiye paale...
tukro kore kaachi
aami dubte raaji aachi
aami dubte raaji aachi
tomaar khola hawa..."

sigh...😍

Nupur's dream... i soooooooo wish it comes true
and they live happily ever after😍

awesome update di👏 (do i hv to tell you dis everytime?😉)

luv u loads🤗 (u already know dis😆)

-jiya-