The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] - Page 16

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mayur-ki-diwani thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeeeee part
poor mayank
hope mayur gets together soon
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
fabulous update
luved mayank n sutra scene.....n also luved mayank thoughts abt nupur n mayur convo were really sweet...
why his parents alwayzzz insulting him n praise gunjan...dnt like dem
aweeeee....the song part was amazing...luved mayur
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok
awesomeeeeeeeee update dear
really loved it to the core
the best thing is
u write it just beautifully
real it seems that u r feeling everything
great job
hats off
story me loving it
mayu's character is cute
a lil like me
so loving him more Lolz
in short lovely
do continue sooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice update
mayanks character is really different
hope he learns to express his feelings soon'
i enjoy reading the bengali lines in middle
nice part please dont say that ur parts are boring
u write really well😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Suja - jiya is right- dont dare call this boring
it was mind blowing update
i have changed lots of things on this update and made it more beautiful
i loved mayu and sutras scene
they hav enjoyed a lot.
at least mayu enjoying his life here- he is a boy of soft mind.
even sutra admit this fact
but i dont knw why his mom and dad alwz insult him
why dont they understand his feelings and emotions
GOD give them some brain....... they alwz praise gunjan and insult maynk.
its very sad yaar- i felt really bad for Mayu
i hope his parents will understand his value soon and will give him the same priority as gunjan
i loved the song- it was wonderful dear
and maynks imagination with nups was too good
loved the whole update
fantastic job SUja
keep it up


Originally posted by: jiya_angel

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don't u dare call dis boring???😈

its awesome suja-di
and i loved the song... perfect selectionšŸ‘
but again.. poor mayušŸ˜”... i feel sad for him😭
i hope his life will be on track soon😊... with Nupur😳

u 4got to pm mešŸ˜•??
😭

*edited*
i got ur pm after i finished readingšŸ˜†


Thank u so much for ur lovely comment.😊

ur comment alwz encouraging me.....thanks a lottt😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti

@sujal

Beautiful update
Mayur were soooo sweet
plzzz do continue soon



Originally posted by: DhanakZ

cute and lovely update

Thanks for pm
cont soon


Thank u so much for ur lovely comment.😊

ur comment alwz encourage me to write further 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Mujhe to rotten tomato aur eggs ki jaga ek virtual hug deneka mann kar raha hain...Toh yeh lo..šŸ¤—šŸ¤—...Ek ke saah dusra free...šŸ˜†šŸ˜³
And r u like mayu's parents jo itni sweet update ko boring bol raha hain...This update ws just like mayu...Sweet, simple and soothing...
Mayu's parents r really blind...They cant see the simplicity and the golden heart of their son...And he is a matured guy...How cud they alway insult him infront of his younger sister...They'r so annoying...😔😔...Poor mayu...
Ok now the best part of this update ws the song and MN in it..😳. I mean the environment, moonlight, guitar and MAYUR...šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜ all ws so dreamy...
All in all an amazing update...Do cont soon...


Thank u so much for ur comment.😊

ur comment alwz encourage me.........u r so sweet😃

OMG! u compared me with mayu's parents!!🤢

nice comparisionšŸ˜†

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nightdreamer_mn

Beautiful update.........amazing mayur ...scene.....

waiting 4 ur next update...šŸ‘


Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

poor mayank..........why he underestimate himself...........nd mayank loves rabindrasangeet.........wow.......i love it too...........it was a lovely part.........loved it.........

Originally posted by: -moona-

wow really nice update..

thnx for the pm...



Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

well, we, all bengalees love RabindraSangeet😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is really good
so mayank is changing day by day and this is due to the atmosophere as well as the effect of nupur
so mayank went to sutra house and there he had enjoyed a lot
sach mein mayank's heart is really nice and caring he stops sutra from killing the bird
but yaar yeh mayank ke parents yeh usse bas boring aur unsmart kun kahete haai they are his parents they should try to understand him agar woh log he usse nahin samjhenge toh woh aapne feeling kis ke saath share karega
i really dont like this kind of attitude of his parents
but anyways nupur is a good friend of him aur friend se kuch zada he ban gaye haai woh mayank ke liye
but mayank is feeling scared to express his feeling to her
plz cont soon and pm me


Originally posted by: pearl10

hey...beautifully written.....

the ff name is so different & nice.............šŸ‘
thanks 4 pm............

payal_


Originally posted by: mayur-ki-diwani

awesomeeeeeee part

poor mayank
hope mayur gets together soon
continue soon


Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

Thank u for loving mayanks character😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

fabulous update

luved mayank n sutra scene.....n also luved mayank thoughts abt nupur n mayur convo were really sweet...
why his parents alwayzzz insulting him n praise gunjan...dnt like dem
aweeeee....the song part was amazing...luved mayur


Originally posted by: chilluppp

ok

awesomeeeeeeeee update dear
really loved it to the core
the best thing is
u write it just beautifully
real it seems that u r feeling everything
great job
hats off
story me loving it
mayu's character is cute
a lil like me
so loving him more Lolz
in short lovely
do continue sooooooon

Originally posted by: kirti123

wow nice update

mayanks character is really different
hope he learns to express his feelings soon'
i enjoy reading the bengali lines in middle
nice part please dont say that ur parts are boring
u write really well😊



Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

Thank u for liking my writting😊

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