The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1]

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: RiddhiB
nice part..
mayank-nupur scene was cute..
looking forward to the village fair..
cont. soon

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti
Beautiful update

very beautifully written

do continue soon

Originally posted by: mahakmev
osom i loved it

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: mayur-ki-diwani
awesomeeeeeeeee update

loved it

continue soon

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti
Just read part 4

superb

simply loved it

cont soon

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti
Woohooo

nups n mayank r go to d mela

nice

but who is this kabab mein haddi??

Update soon

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983
very nice update

thx alot for the pm

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed
I AM LOVING IT

such an adorable update..

ek tu it was earlier....

n wht ths yaar i was just imaging kitchen wala part n was drolling on himm,,,,hm...meray ghar mein asi koi window kyun nhi.....

nupur is sooo worrried abt him...wah wah...even forget she was hurt to...n my hero....he even didnt showed her tht he was hurt..

hay kya pyar hai

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tere ghar me nahi......par mere ghar me aisa hi ek window hai.......actually maine apna bedroom ko is FF me kitchen bana diya😆

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
Amazing update...And i loved mayank's body...😍😍
But he got injury..So sad...Nupur's concern ws obvious...But she went to ask him about the injury na...so what happened then...She didnt ask.😕..Mone hoy mayank er muscular body dekhe sob vule gache...😆😆
Kintu mayank mone hoy kichu lukache tai na...I wish nupur is with him in US...Koto moja hoto...Duijoni eka...
R tomar gram bankura...WOW...Eto sundor ekta jaigai tomar gramer bari.😍..Im jealous!!!😳
Cont soon...

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amar bankura te bari bole tumi jealous hoccho??😆

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: varsh-mayur
hey suja loved it.................😛

Originally posted by: .PINK.
part1this part waz amazing
so Nupur leaving Mumbia
in her vacationz with her daddy since she already did MBA
n waiting for her resultz
n then her lil sis Gun
lol loved her part
shezz sucha fun loving person n so naughty too
so then they came there
n then start making fun of Mayu
hezz choo cuteee
opening window when the AC is on lol this part waz amazing
cant wait to read more

Part 2
hailaa I got lost
so who is Mayua again to Nupur???
kinda confusing
or maybe itzz just me ???
well this part waz nice
Nupur visiting her villiage
just wish could get to know who is Mayu again??
-Linu

Linu, ur comment confused me......now m confused who is mayu😆

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: .PINK.
hey Liaba first of all
em soo sorry for not unreserving my post

had sed ealier to myself

dat will deffi read this FF yesterday

but guess I forgot

em ghajni at timezzz😆

ok so the concept is amazing

n so iz the title

the feathers of a blue bird

so Mayu rich

Nupz middle class

their CS iz amazing 2

can't wait to read more

-❤️Linu

Thank u so much

bt m not laiba............m suja.

m nt a gud writer like laiba.

i thot, u wr too tired of reading this FF............n mix up with laiba😆

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

Thank you so much for linking this story.😊

salma009, RiddhiB, Bhawna_arti, jiya_angel, Alini., preethi_m18, mahakmev, kirti123, drfizaahmed, Auroni.92, sariska_mnarti, chilluppp, zarfishan1983, ronojoy_ria, -Faria-, maria-soniarti,

Thank u so much guys for pressing the Like tab and also urs precious comments.😊

here is the next update........i hope u like it........😊

so, tell me how it is..................waiting for ur comment😊

Love

suja❤️

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Suja - jiya is right- dont dare call this boring
it was mind blowing update
i have changed lots of things on this update and made it more beautiful
i loved mayu and sutras scene
they hav enjoyed a lot.
at least mayu enjoying his life here- he is a boy of soft mind.
even sutra admit this fact
but i dont knw why his mom and dad alwz insult him
why dont they understand his feelings and emotions
GOD give them some brain....... they alwz praise gunjan and insult maynk.
its very sad yaar- i felt really bad for Mayu
i hope his parents will understand his value soon and will give him the same priority as gunjan
i loved the song- it was wonderful dear
and maynks imagination with nups was too good
loved the whole update
fantastic job SUja
keep it up

Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago