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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

aww such a nice update.... maan is so in love with her ... i love the way he pampers her and takes care of her ....

i hope they kiss and make up 😉

continue super soon

love

Sana

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shreya satish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

loved this maaneet...

pls add me in ur pm list

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Shalve

@Shalve

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

wow.. nice concept.... pls add me to yr PM list...

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sana.saba7

@sana.saba7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

HI MY FRIENDS I AM BACK WITH MY UPDATE..............................................PLEASE LEAVE SOME LOVELY COMMENTS ........I LOVE TO READ THE AND DO HIT THE LIKE BUTTON.

PART 4:

GEET: WHAT? but why.
she rushed in maan roon but it was lock ...................
MAAN: go away.
GEET: please say me whats my mistake ......she cried louder.............
MAAN: dont cry i will not melt..
GEET: i need hanky to clean my nose.
MAAN: go to that chunny.....
GEET: HE IS BUNNY.
MAAN: what ever just leave
GEET: how can i take his hanky.
MAAN: why?
GEET: because i only use your hanky.
MAAN: O O O..take my hanky and you kiss to him WOW.
GEET: maan please open the door ....you know i cant stay with out talking to you.
maan loves geet sincerity the way she always say she love him and he know may be for outer world she is ugly but for him she is the beautiful girl in world her eyes,her lips,her cheeks which turn red when she cries ,her way of talking ,the way she get scared of dark and call him........her white skin for which he some time looses control .
he know that he is mature and he knows everything but geet too need to grow up.
MAAN: maan slowly open the door clearing his tears and see geet standing in front of his door......
he passes his hanky but does not open the door fully.
MAAN: take.
GEET: maan what my fault ?please say .........
MAAN: nothing he dont want to say anything to geet .he is very reserved guy.
MAAN: umm how many times you kissed that idiot bunny?
GEET: umm....confuse look
MAAN: say me...
GEET: only thousand times........
maans mouth wide open .
MAAN: GET LOSTTTTTTTTTT
he scream ..geet got scared first time he is angry with her and that to this extent .she was in feer and left ...........she went to her room and cries her eyes out.............
MAAN: maan closes his eyes..

AFTER ONE WEEK A DAY BEFORE LEAVING BACK TO INDIA .
EVERY BADY WAS PRESENT ON THE DINNING TABLE .....
MR.HANDA: where is geet?
MRS .HANDA: she is in her room doing some work...
MAAN: maan was curious now ...what she might be with that bunny and what type of work she is doing..........
he completed his work fast and went to see geet.
geet wasin the shower talking some non sense ....
MAAN: where is geet? he heard her talking he smiles...after oe week.
GEET: see BUNNY what you have done i can go out now
the word bunny was enough to strike maan .........
MAAN: what the hell bunny is doing with MY geet......
he cant control any more he cant make out what both are doing.
GEET: ok baba dont be angry i no what i should do to make you happy.
maan again heard her kissing UUMMMAAHHHH
MAAN: geet open the door .he knocks the door hardly ...
GEETTTTTTTTTTTT
before he rushed in the bathroom geet opened the door..
he stood there first time he saw geet without two ribbons her hair open teasing her cheeks..
he is mesmerized by her beauty.......
she was standing in front of him in the towel only and her legs were naked.....
GEET: maan ....she said in fear...
what happen maan why are you screaming?
maan came back to his sense ....
MAAN: who is there inside the bathroom with you? to whom you was kissing............he cant control himself any more .
GEET: no one.
MAAN RUSHED TO THE BATHROOM TO SEE WHO WAS THERE....
GEET: MAAN!
MAAN: dont hide anything where is your bunny?
GEET: O BUNNY...here it is.
maan turn to see to whom geet is talking about.
he was speechless ..............
BUNNY was no one other than the teddy he gave to geet that day the pink one and the blue one.....
she was talking about the blue teddy as bunny to whom geet said that it is maan.
MAAN: O this is bunny he takes deep relaxing breath ....
GEET: are you talking with me i mean are you still mad at me?
MAAN: no i am sorry.
GEET: smiles ....no no i am happy she jumps in air .......
her towel jumps along with her from her legs to thighs .....maan's eye caught the side and stood there till he heard geet saying
GEET: maan i am so happy you know when you were not there i use to talk with bunny .
she sat on the bed..she drag him on the bed
GEET: maan i was missing you she hugs maans tightly ...with this geet took bunny in her arms and kiss with all force saying i very veryyyyyy happy.
MAAN: if you want geet you can kiss me too your nose will not come in between .....he said shyly
GEET: ok but you should also kiss me
MAAN: he was embaressed ......ummm
GEET: she went close to maan and her breath tickles himm he smiles ..........
she kissed him like not letting him go and he melts with her kiss he want to take geet in his arms but control he know that is not right.
GEET: now you turn...kiss me.
MAAN: he want to escape but before that geet went to his side and put her cheeks in front of his lips ...
GEET: KISS ME MAAN.
MAAN: he kissed her and both was froze for a moment like they want more and dont want to move fromm there positions
both stares in one another eyes ....
MAAN: umm geet come out i am waiting for you we will go for shopping because we are leaving tomorrow .
he left leaving geet FROZING
GEET: what was that why i am feeling to kiss maan again.i should ask him.

she went again in her old dressing sense ....

IN MALL.
GEET: maan i want to ask you some question.
MAAN: busy in thinking about there first kiss.
GEET: maan she shakes him.
MAAN: ummm
GEET: i want to know why i am feeling like this? why i want to kiss you again?
MAAN: he coughs he was expecting this question but not prepared for any answer........
I DONT KNOW.
he simply said to avoid further questions.
MAAN: come we will go.
GEET: ok.

PRECAP: MAAN 18,GEET 16.

PLEASE PLEASE LEAVE SOME LOVELY AND LONGGGG LONG COMMENT I LOVE READING THEM....AND PLEASE DO HIT THE LIKE BUTTON.
WAITING FOR YOU LOVELY AND LONG COMMENT ON MY CUTE AND ADORABLE MAAN AND GEET ..........HOPE YOU LIKED IT.

Edited by sana.saba7 - 14 years ago

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Loved it..... I hope now geet is not ugly anymore...... Bunny....lol... Good one.

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

aww they're so cute :)

cant wait for the next update

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sana.saba7

@sana.saba7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56
Loved it..... I hope now geet is not ugly anymore...... Bunny....lol... Good one.

YOU HAVE TO WAIT DEAR ................FOR THE NEXT UPDATES TO KNOW ABOUT OUR GEET
THANKS FOR THE COMMENT .....

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sana.saba7

@sana.saba7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sindu555
aww they're so cute :)

cant wait for the next update

THANKS DEAR ..........

NEXT UPDATE WILL BE SOON I WILL TRY TO UPDATE TODAY BUT NOT SURE..............

Edited by sana.saba7 - 14 years ago

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sana.saba7

@sana.saba7

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sana.saba7

YOU HAVE TO WAIT DEAR ................FOR THE NEXT UPDATES TO KNOW ABOUT OUR GEET
THANKS FOR THE COMMENT .....

IF YOU LIKE MY FF HIT THE LIKE BUTTON DEAR

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Shweta13

@Shweta13

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

I am wondering how mad are we about maneeet , yur post is beautiful and m feeling happy bout imagining maaneet as kids....oh their first kiss at school age.... isnt this post is some thing similar to dev and paro as kids.

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