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sana.saba7

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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 1---PAGE I
PART 2---PAGE 2
PART 3---PAGE 3
PART 4---PAGE 5
PART 5---PAGE 9.
PART 6---PAGE 14.
PART 7---PAGE 18.
PART 8---PAGE 22.
PART 9---PAGE 27.
PART 10---PAGE 31.

😲😲YOU ALL SAID YES SO I AM HERE WITH MY FF.

HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT.

PART 1:

MAAN IS 15 YEARS OLD...

DEV IS MAAN'S BRO 14 YEARS OLD

ANNI IS MAAN'S SIS 13 YEARS OLD.

VICKY IS MAAN'S YOUNGER BRO 12 YEARS OLD

MAAN SINGH KHURANA IS ELDEST SON OF KHURANA FAMILY..........THEY ARE ONE OF THE RICHEST FAMILY OF THE WORLD SAME AS HANDA FAMILY.......

MR.KHURANA IS CALLED AS PAPA BY CHILDRENS.

MRS .KHURANA IS CALLED AS MUMMA.

MR.HANDA IS CALLED AS DAD.

MRS.HANDA AS MOM.

BOTH THE FAMILIES LIVE IN THE SAME AREA OPPOSITE TO EACH OTHER.

BRIJ IS THE ELDEST SON OF HANDA FAMILY 14 YEARS OLD

GEET IS 13 YEARS OLD.

RAJJI IS 12 YEARS OLD.

GEET IS VERY UGLY LOOKING EVERY BODY WANTS TO RUN AWAY FROM HER..........

SHE PUT 2 RIBBONS ON BOTH THE SIDES OF HAIR. ALWAYS HER NOSE LEAKS.........................

MAAN IS THE ONLY MUSCELS BOY IN THE SCHOOL .HE IS DOING HIS 10TH IN THE SCHOOL .HIS LAST YEAR IN THE SCHOOL.

WHERE AS ANNI LOOKS SO HOT AND HER BROS USE TO FIGHT WITH EVERY ONE WHO EVER TRIES TO DO MISCHIEVE WITH HER....

AND PARI IS DAMN SEXY .

VICKY AND PARI IN SAME CLASS AND ANNI ,GEET IN SAME CLASS BOTH ARE BEST FRIEND...

BOTH THE FAMILIES PLAN FOR THE TOUR IN THIS VACATION .

IN SINGAPORE.

GEET:mom where is maan?

MOM:maan went with all the others to see the place ..

GEET:how can he?

MOM: why?

GEET: he never goes any where without me ..........

MAAN: GEEEET.............

MOM: now go and take the handkerchief.

geet run all over the big house to reach maan's voice she was above to fall from the ladders maan catches her from the waist...

GEET: you went leaving me?

MAAN: no.i was waiting for you.

GEET: cho sweet.

MAAN : shut up!dont call me sweet i am not .

GEET: ok.how is darling ...

geet giggles.

MAAN: WHAT!

you only knows how to annoy me

GEET: what i can do if you get annoy soon.

MAAN: SHUT UP. and dont call me by stupid names

GEET:why? ask innocently

MAAN: i dont like any.

GEET: you never likes any thing.

MAAN:no. i like the....

GEET: what?

maan dont want to answer her question

he just avoided..

MAAN:come lets go.

GEET: where are all..

MAAN:they are waiting for us lets go.

GEET:ok.

MAAN: atleast clean your nose first ...

geet nose is leaking

GEET: how can i?

MAAN: why?

then suddenly he realize what geet means

MAAN: hmm..

he raises his hands up..

geet takes the hanky from his pocket and starts cleaning her nose by making sounds...

afterwards she kept hanky back in his pocket .

GEET: dont use that ,it is spolied

MAAN: ok.lets go.

both went to the group who is standing for them....pari also came along with them to enjoy holiday.....

ANNI:hey geet fast we have to go...........

both came and joined them

all shouts yepeeeeeeeeee

vicky is drooling over pari

MAAN: VICKY.

VICKY: hmmmmm

MAAN: shouts .stop it.

VICKY: what bro go to that ugly geet

MAAN: what you are doing? with strin look.

VICKY: bhai i want pari to be my girlfriend..\

maan shock with his small bro .he thinks he is just 12years.

MAAN: you are too small for this ..and by the way first say me what is girlfriend.....?

VICKY: to whom we can kiss.

MAAN:WHAT?

VICKY: yes bro you dont know that then you too need dev bhai's class he is love guru.

he showed me how to kiss by kissing his girlfriend...

but his gf is not nice she every time shouts at me....but dev bro said me he is with her only for her kiss beacuse she is good kisser😳.amoung all his gfs she is the best.

maan eyes widen in horror like he is dreaming all this 😲

his small bro talking like this

this is only because of that dev he is spoiling him....

MAAN: DEVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV

PRECAP: MAAN AND GEET ON THE CYCLE...............!

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Edited by sana.saba7 - 14 years ago

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maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

would like to go with it... so pm me too

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namitasin

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice concept but plz geet ko thoda sa saaf suthra bana do plz bytheway they both r cute luved both of tem. Do continue soon n do pm me.

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Audiwalia

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Posted: 14 years ago

loved d concept........ but do something wid geet................. nd plz tell who tie ribbons on ponytails dese day................... u know i have cousin she is just 10 even dat mattko knows how to dress up.............😆

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kiran naryani

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Posted: 14 years ago

wow nice start plz cont soon can u add me in pm list ......

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sana.saba7

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Posted: 14 years ago

HEY AS I PROMISE I WILL UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOON .HERE IS THE UPDATE.........................

PART 2:

MAAN: dev what the hell you are teaching to vicky?

dev is paniking now he knows his maan bro temper

DEV:bro what you are talking about ? innocently he ask........
MAAN: dont act smart you know well ....
DEV: but bro you know that vicky is lier...
MAAN: i know that well too but he is not lieing now.
DEV :inside he said .vicky ke bacche i will see you.
MAAN: now get lost next time i will talk with you by punching......
GEET: shut up !
maan and dev turn to see geet is standing in at the back....
GEET: how you are talking with your bro.
MAAN: geet stay away you dont know any thing.
MAAN:just go.
GEET: no .
DEV : saviour.....he run in the group who is standing with their respective cycles...
MAAN: geet what is your problem every time they escape from me ...because of you.
you dont even know what dev have done.
GEET: what?
maan rubbed his temple
MAAN: nothing lets go first clean your nose and what is this why you wore sweater....

geet dress completely covering her self

GEET: o no just it is i am getting cold and my nose is leaking
MAAN: when it not? and by the way in summer season you are getting cold.
GEET: MOOOOOM.....
MAAN: i just ask you why are you shouting.......
you dont even know when is cool and when is hot..
that why i ask you not to mug up the answer but understand them.
GEET: you are the one who thought me to mug up the answer.
MAAN: that is only for few which you cant understand .not every
GEET: i dont understand any.....by this geet went near maan and took the hanky from his pocket
to which maan respond by raising his hands ......she cleared her nose and put back the hanky .
MAAN: now grow up you are in 8th class but dont understand any thing.
GEET: maan you are in 10th now soon you will leave me and you will join the college?
she asked innocently
MAAN: yes i will be in college soon but i am not leaving you.
GEET: promise.
MAAN: ummm
lets go ........

all are ready for the cycle raise just waiting for geet and maan.....
VICKY: this ugly geet everytime takes time to come fast....
PARI: shut up!
vicky didnt said anything because he wanted to be friend with pari
both joined them .everybady are ready for a race...

ANNI: 1 2 3 GET SET GO.....................
all started to ride their cycles in high speed...
geet is last amoung them....but maan is behind geet..
GEET : go fast otherwise you will loose..
MAAN: no.and dont hurry you will fall...
GEET: ok.
MAAN: COME ON GEET.
GEET: maan
MAAN:ummm
GEET: maan i cant ride it hurts.....
MAAN: just leave that stupid cycle .that is not your fault that cycle is bad.
GEET: ok..know that maan is just so cute but she cant say that he will get angry.
MAAN: geet seat nicely on my cycle i will take you ...
GEET:ok.
geet adjusted herself comfortabely on maan's cycle with him
MAAN: is that done?
GEET :yes.
maan put her hands on the stand and set her duppata ....
MAAN: LETS GO.
GEET: dont shout i will get deaf ..
MAAN: O sorry!
GEET: its ok.friendship me no sorry no thank you.
MAAN: smiles seeing her excitement on cycle.my geet is sounds mature sometimes...
GEET: firstly i am grown up girl dont treat me like child ..
maan smiles
and secondly i am not your geet i am my parent child
maan wants to laugh louder but get scared what if she get down from the cycle.
mean while two love couples crossing the roads
GEET: what they are doing maan?
MAAN: maan coughs seeing them .....the lady hugs man while he rides....
MAAN: nothing just the lady is getting the cold like you ........so she hugs him.
GEET: hugs him.....what if i catch the cold.
MAAN: geet seat properly what will other thinks ..?.
GEET: that i am geeting cold.
maan doesnt have any problem.
GEET: you breath is falling on my neck.
MAAN: UMMMM
GEET: stop breathing.............she giggles.
MAAN: there is a chances of my death then.....

maan now was the in front of every bady all are shocked to see them like this and again seeing maan is first along with geet
maan crosses them with shooting the glare like DAM WHO CARES..........
while geet shows them the thump down.....
and hugging thightly in excitement ...........but maan is getting effected ....

GEET AND MAAN WON and waiting for them
MAAN: lets go to buy to eat something i am hungry
GEET: no i am in no mood.
MAAN: ok then we will go when you mood will...

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