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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
my dear love you FF
is superbbbbbbbbbbb
pls dear update fasttttttttttt
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi here is my next update..........

PART 3:

GEET: OK come we will have some lunch.
MAAN: no no if you are hungry then only come..dont come for me.
GEET: i too have stomach which can be hungry .i am coming with you because i am hungry....
MAAN: cant you talk nicely for once?
GEET : no.
by this geet went to nearer hotel to have some ............geet ordered all maan's favorite ..........
MAAN: GEET dont eat that it is very spicy .
GEET: is it?
MAAN: yes.
GEET: what i should eat then?
maan thought for a minute ...he no geet cant eat spicy and she is also hungry
MAAN: wait till i am back......dont move.
GEET: umm but come fast.
MAAN: ok.
he went to the hotel owner and ask him to talk with MR.KHURANA.
hotel owner said ok to MR.KHURANA to whatever he said.
MAAN: where is the kitchen?
OWNER: sir that the way.
MAAN: ok. thanks .
owner is shock to see that the small kid is having that much capacity to do and that to for his small girl friend .....
then owner turn to see maan's girl friend geet.

he was stunt to see that much handsome rich guy is interested in this ugly girl.
maan went to kitchen he ordered to some chef to help him with the cooking.
after few min.maan was on his way to geet.

GEET: where were you?
MAAN: geet i went for loo.
GEET: ok...but i am hungry.
MAAN: here are something for you.
GEET: excitedly what?
she saw that all the dishes is her fav.
she immediately begin to eat.
maan is not a boy to express something his love .his hate.
he simply watches geet eating her lunch.
meanwhile all others also join them.
DEV: geet from where did you get this ? i know this hotel they dont have any dishes like this.
GEET: umm....i dont know ask maan.
MAAN: maan gave a glare to dev to which dev shuts his mouth.
all eat there lunch and went to see the place with all their gaurds.
anni and geet where last........behind all .
some boys where walking on the street ans saw both anni and geet.
BOY 1: see see model with bahenji.
BOY 2: no no she is such a bitch.
maan stair at both of them and hide behind the big tree.
anni where is maan bro.
GEET: I DONT KNOW. she run to the house crying loudly.......
after some time when maan follows that boys .......
MAAN: what you told to her.?
BOYS: hey hey see this tiny kid wants to know that what we said to his bitch girl friend.......laughs louder.
thats it maan came running and gave one punch on the boy face which starts bleeding .........

one boy run to maan to fight maan runs and hide in one of the shop......after searching in all the places boys left.
maan soon goes to house.

MAAN: geet geet.........
GEET: what happen why are you shouting like ideot.
VICKY: i dont know why geet has such proud even she dont have any quality.......ugly girl.
DEV: because maan bro gives her so much importance.
VICKY: but what maan bro saw in her?
DEV; ?????
MAAN: geet see what i brought for you?
GEET: what? show me...
MAAN: no first clean your nose then...
GEET: OK.
MAAN: she cleared her nose with his hanky and kept back in his pocket.
GEET: now show me.
MAAN: he showed her one of the


ANNI : wow maan bro that is awesome ........
GEET: i loved it .
see she pointed to blue teddy he is maan and she pointed to pink one this is me.
VICKY: that teddy has bad luck because she is ugly geet.
MAAN: one more word you will not be seen with us in our camp in next month.
VICKY: sorry bro pleaseeeeeeeeeee..
GEET: maan shut up..
vicky its ok .
NEXT DAY........

all are getting ready for playing in the garden....
maan went to geets bed room...
knocks....no reply.
he went inside
MAAN: oye geet get up we have to play...
GEET : STILL IN SLEEP... no maan i am not playing today..
MAAN: OK. he taken a seat on sofa and reads newspaper.
GEET: maan you go and play.
MAAN: how can i? if are not playing...
GEET: thats because i went to sleep at late night.
MAAN: ummm when.?
GEET: 3:00 am.
MAAN: what? what you were doing till that time?
GEET: i am busy with my BUNNY.
MAAN: BUNNY?
GEET : he like you.........i cant stop kissing him..
maan got up from the bed what? who bunny? what bunny? which bunny? how can you kiss him? you are only allowed to kiss me....which you havent yet.
but to that chunny ,bunny you kissed.
he was shock.
GEET: how can i kiss you.....?
MAAN: why not he .tears came in his eyes.
GEET: if i kiss you my nose may come in between.thats why i avoid it because my nose is not clean.
and when i kiss bunny he never complains me about my nose.
MAAN: he started crying ......and you thought i may complain ?
how you can think like this....
from now onwords we are NOT FRIENDS ANY MORE.......
when he think he cant control his anger he leaved the room and went to his room and locked.....

please leave some comments and do hit the like button please comment it motivates me ........................
to all my friends and forums fans please hit the like button and leave longggggggggg comments.😊
Edited by sana.saba7 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great part.....loved it.....cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update , GEET: i am busy with my BUNNY.
MAAN: BUNNY?
GEET : he like you.........i cant stop kissing him..
maan got up from the bed what? who bunny? what bunny? which bunny? how can you kiss him? you are only allowed to kiss me....which you havent yet.
but to that chunny ,bunny you kissed.
he was shock.
GEET: how can i kiss you.....?
MAAN: why not he .tears came in his eyes.
GEET: if i kiss you my nose may come in between.thats why i avoid it because my nose is not clean.
and when i kiss bunny he never complains me about my nose.
MAAN: he started crying ......and you thought i may complain ?
how you can think like this....
from now onwords we are NOT FRIENDS ANY MORE.......
when he think he cant control his anger he leaved the room and went to his room and locked.....he is jealous.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congo dear...finally u got ur thread...i love ur way of writing...!!!

u rock babes...😊

hmmmm...u can kiss me only...POSSESIVE bt maan i always like this for geet!!

bt even i have a dout wy maan give so muchh imp to geet irrespective of her ugliness..!!!

pls put some light on that as welll....😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was a good one 👏👏👏👏 loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
Maan crying..... Maan is jeoulsed..... Loved it...... Geet needs a makeover..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
great part.
awww maan..
do continue plz
thx.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
OMG
love it love love it
awesome update :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Gr8 part...lvd it..❤️❤️
do cntnue soon....

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