[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) - Page 91

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Posted: 14 years ago
Another amazing update habibti!


p.s I think it would be very awkward for Aarya to see his sister (neela ) like this...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poor guys...by the time Devi is through with them they will all be falling down like flies thanks to exhaustion😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome awesome update devi.....
loved d concept............
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Munni yahaan bhi badnaam hui!! 😆


Aur kahan badnaam hui thi sasuri?

For Tammie: Where else did Munni earn her direpute?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-


Aur kahan badnaam hui thi sasuri?

For Tammie: Where else did Munni earn her direpute?

Tammie no speaka de hindi. You'll need to translate what Jazz said.
"Munna" and "Munni" always confuse me. Are they endearments? Munni is Gauri, right?
Is sasuri related to sasural? As in in-laws home? Badnaam?
Oye. Looks like I need to listen to my "Speak Hindi in 30 days" cds again....🤣 This old dog is having trouble learning new tricks. Especially since now that I'm watching Thai, Korean an Taiwanesse dramas. My brain is FRIED when it comes to languages. I blame Devi.
btw Devi - did you finish Secret Garden? I loved the music in that one. Well, loved HB more, but you know....😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Shradha....Munni kahaan badnaam nahi hui!! Har shaadi mein badnaam hoti hai...its an over-kill of Munni's badnaami all around. Last October... her badnaami was "the" thing in my cousin sis's wedding.🤣

@Tammie....munni means a little girl, munna is a little boy. In Devi's update, Senna was the principal munni with six more munnis assisting her😆 All were getting badnaam for their respective Darlings...though Maan picked his munni up to enjoy her badnaami in isolation and Neela, I suppose, is yet to know that she is the munni for Dhruv Darling🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago
Aha...that explains a lot. Thanks!

What does badnaami mean.

"Har shaadi mein badnaam hoti hai" = In every marriage there is ___. Right? Or at least close?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: saomom

Aha...that explains a lot. Thanks!


What does badnaami mean.

"Har shaadi mein badnaam hoti hai" = In every marriage there is ___. Right? Or at least close?



"Har shaadi mein badnaam hoti hai" = Earns ill-repute in every marraige these days.
Badnaami = ill-repute

Its the song of the season. A must in every ladies sangeet these days.
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Jazz - once again, I am in your debt... Thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago


Chapter 112: Finale – Part 1 (Rated R)

If you have made it thus far in this story, you know how I write my stuff, so no futher explanations needed, I assume ;)

[Note to readers: I am wrapping this one up, all my lovely peeps… This is one of those stories that I could likely write forever. It's really fun and fluff… and obviously sex… but aside from that, I really have no compunction to create any more drama for any of these folks. So, any further writing would be a sole exercise in self-indulgence. And I find that now that this was a welcome break after all the drama of Love and Despair, I do want some drama again. Some angst (maybe…).. I don't know yet. If you have any continued interest in reading my FFs, I have started a new one, link below. But aside from that, The Oldest Story is now starting its last chapter… in parts… I can only take departure in parts ;) Thank you all yet again for coming along with me to the Kapoors and their Kin and their chums… with occasional visits from the Khuranas…highly libidinal folks that they all are…]

In the merrymaking and dancing after Munni concluded her Badnaami, he pulled her out through the entrance that she had come in through and saw that it led into a small room, which led in yet another smaller room. He pulled her into that last one and closed the door, locking it, before he lifted her up onto her tip-toes and kissed her everywhere he could reach. It didn't stop there though… before the memory of a promise could intrude, he backed her first against the shelf and then against the wall by the curtained window before he lifted her to wrap her legs around him and plunged deep inside her. An almost animalistic groan made its way out of his throat as the sensation threatened to overtake him and make him drop to the ground. It heightened that much more when he heard her cry out his name throwing her head back. It had been so abominably long… so long, in fact, that this encounter proved to be just as short. He felt her tighten around him with a shudder within just a few minutes and it was all he could do not to scream out loud as he felt every pore of his body explode in pleasure as he spilled his seed inside her.

But the truth remained, he acknowledged that to himself afterwards as he held her close … it didn't matter that they were just a day away from their wedding… they had broken their promise…

She didn't know how she knew, but she knew it just the same that she had conceived… while she was dressed up as Munni and her fiance took her against the wall in a room of some Mob-inspired Hotel after she crashed his bachelor party… She looked up at the wall against the other end of the room. The time read 1:20 am. She considered it the most auspicious of times, not because she had any belief in astrology, but because it was the moment when her womb became blessed.

"Munni…" he called her then, breaking into her thoughts. He was still inside her and her legs were still wrapped around him, but rather than put her down, he moved aside the curtain's edge and placed her on the window's ledge. The only light burning in the room was a low one, which prevented anyone from the outside from seeing anything clearly.

She lifted her her eyes in question at him.

"You're Munni tonight. And I am Chulbul Pandey… So, there are no broken promises. Rathan and Senna will return tomorrow for regularly scheduled programming, just like they promised each other. And they will make sweet love for the first time in…. ages. Nothing has changed…"

He looked so earnest as he concocted such a wild story to ease what he must be sure was her distress that they had broken their promise. Every time she thought that she couldn't fall for him anymore than she already had, he managed to prove her wrong.

She hugged him then, tightly, and felt an incredible surge of happiness that they had broken their promise tonight… so wonderfully too… this child was bound to be a maverick… a lot like his father at heart, but with a lot of his uncle in spirit…

She felt him hardening inside her then and pulled back to look at him in surprise to ask, "Again?"

He pulled her back toward him, stroking a finger up her back, which tickled and made her press her closer against his chest, and whispered, "This blouse is driving me nuts. Can we do it one more time, but nice and slow?" He bit the edge of her ear then as his hands pulled down the little chain that passed as the blouse's sleeve.

"Nice….and… slow…? Like in that LL song?" she managed to bite out as she felt him move inside her as he simulatenously pulled off her blouse.

"Not that dirty… but maybe close…" He smiled at her reference. "You and the girls did give me the best bachelor party ever thrown for any man, after all…"

***

"I can't believe you're here!" She heard his voice behind him and looked back.

"Why?"

"Because… because…" he started off strong, like he was about to make a valid point, but then petered off when he realized that there was nothing of the sorts...

"Why? Because your girlfriend is here?"

"No! because it's a bachelor party!" he answered, trying to not let his agitation seep through.

"Okay. So what?"

"And these girls are each attached to each of these men." He gestured to the rest of them. "And you're single. And…"

She knew he didn't mean it the way it sounded; she knew exactly what he meant, and so she took pity on him.

"I am going home now, Aarya. Don't worry."

"Yes, I am coming with you." He answered.

"My car is parked at the Khurana's place."

"Great. I'll drive you there."

"Aarya, stop. What about Nirosha?"

"What about Nirosha? She's going to the same place, isn't she? So, I will drive you both back."

"She came with Geet and her sister. And Gauri's and Thalia's cars are parked there too."

He paused for a moment, just looking at her. "So, what are you saying?"

"I am saying, relax, stay a while. I am fine. Go talk to your Rosh for a bit. Have a drink. I think your buzz is coming down."

"And you?" by the way he asked it, she knew that there was no way that he would leave her side.

"Why, I'll give her company." Neela's eyes widened as she heard Dhruv to her other side. She noticed her expression mirrored in Aarya's eyes, but he recovered more quickly than her.

When they both turned to look at him, Dhruv continued, "I am not attached to any of these women here. And before you misunderstand, I am not attached to your sister either. I was just asking her for the pleasure of her company until this party winds down fully and everyone is ready to go home. If you notice, the main couple has gone missing. And Maan and Geet have yet to return."

"Alright." Aarya answered hesitantly.

"I don't need babysitting." She didn't know why she was irked, but she didn't want two males worrying about poor single Neela who couldn't amuse herself.

"You certainly don't." That's all Dhruv said. And it made her smile for some reason.

"I will be back soon, Didi." Aarya leaned over to kiss her cheek and she whispered in his ear, "Stop being so overprotective!"

"I can't help it. That dude definitely has his eyes on you." He replied just as quickly in a whisper before looking at Dhruv to give him a nod. And when he still looked reluctant to leave, Neela gave him a gentle push, and Aarya was finally off.

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