[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134)

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bluerose1889

@bluerose1889

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#911

Awesome update!

I can't believe its ending. I hope there are a lot of parts to this "Finale".
Are you going to write an epilogue like in "Love & Despair"?

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Posted: 14 years ago

#912

That was fantastic Devi... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#913

god i have the biggest stupidest smile on my face from that awesome update!

it is sad that you are ending it but i am just as excited that you have started a new one! all good things must end right? -- not like ill stop re-reading your FFs!

back to that update--- DAMN women! oh i actually dont have words LOVE IT! cant wait to see dhruv and neela come together and so much more before you end! i hope you wrap up rosh and aarya as well!

oh i just cant wait!!

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Cytherea

@Cytherea

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#914

Devi! You're ending it??sniff sniff

I'm going to miss my daily dose of Shiv/Gauri!!

Luckily I have your new FF to keep me going..and I can always re-read this one 😃

Awesome update!! I absolutely love your work

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#915

It takes a while getting used to the fact that something I love is ending. So I should start getting mentally prepared....starting right about now!!

Oh waise...loved the line after Munni concluded her Badnaami😆

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arabianpaki

@arabianpaki

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#916

It started off with a sad note of ending the FF..but the update it self left me with a grin on my face and then while making my breakfast I was still like this 😃 and then I looked down and saw my supposed to be golden pancake now dark brownish..thank god my family is gone out..otherwise I would have embarrassed my self!

Loved the update..I loved the first part with Chulbul Pandey with his Munni..*sigh* and then adored the brother-sister interaction...I know how protective brothers can get..my brother reported an older man to school security because the man told me he was looking for a possible marriage suitor..and I just told my brother thinking it was funny incident and all..but he didn't think it so funny! Brothers!

p.s: I can't wait for the return of Rathan and Senna tomrw ;)
p.p.s Mr & Mrs.Kapoor are going to become grandparents sooner then they expected..and I'm sure in a few years they'll have quite a few grandchildren running around ..😆

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#917

Awww! U r finishin it too, bt every good thng has to end othrwise it becomes borin, bt m happy tat u'll give it an end in several parts.

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wilddevil2010

@wilddevil2010

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#918

I know that every FF has to end somewhere still I cannot help but feel sad. I hope there r loads of final parts before 'The End'. I'm going 2 miss this ff terribly.

Rathan- Senna segment was both hot and touching. Rathan's logic abt Munni and Chulbul was awesome. Lets c what transpires btw Dhruv- Neela.

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#919

Oldest story is ending....😭....I still havent been able to check out the other FF....whether I know the characters or I don't...I shall be stalking and haunting that FF too...I guess that goes without saying😆

This part was intense...it was great to see Aarya's protective side regarding Neela- hope Dhruv can finally manage to keep his head on despite Neela's presence and move things along!!!

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her_story

@her_story

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#920

that was one intense update...
this one is ending? ah, am getting emotional.. i'll save the speach for the farewell though.. and am glad u strtd a new one..i can't seem to survive without waiting 4 ur updates..