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wow beautiful part

Wonderful upfate mulan...luved mayur scene..ur amazing writer...👏

superb update Mehak!

It was really comic sweet n romantic update

Mayu is awesum

He really hav shades

He is comic wit Sam strick in life n romantic wit Nups

Haaye

Nups really got the best surprise ever

U D A Y will hav tough tym wit Mayu

Hahahahahaha

Sam n Ria

Becahra Sam kitna bhabgta hai Ria se

PART 14

Mayank-Samrat convo was funny!! I loved how Mayank was taking that sweet little revenge on Sam !!

Mayur Balcony scene was so dreamy…but it was a bit short…

LOL! Uday Bhaiya and Mayur!! My fav combo! Poor Mayu! Uday Bhaiya just threw himself on him!!

He couldn't glare at Nupur??? How sweet!!

Last Mayur scene in the room was just magical and so romantic!! I could just picture the environment thanks to ur description of the atmosphere!!

Nupur is too deep in love with her man!! How sweet…!

It was a wonderful part and loved it!!!

Brilliant update

This was such a sweet and romantic update....Nupur wants Mayank to love her...not knowing that he already loves her😆😆

Well how much sweeter can Mayank get...any girl would want her husband doing such sweet stuff for her😉😉

It was awesome😃😃

wao so beautiful and romantic update

wow amazing update

Mulaaaaaaan
beautiful, beautiful, beautiful update
awwwwwwwww i just loved it- specially last part
haye my mayur- they r so sweet and cute
it was awesomest update dear
thanks a lot for ur nice part.