CAPTIVATED HEART..mjht ff... ended - Page 40

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SAISakura16 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Totally loved it!!

The whole morning Mayur sequence was so adorable...I especially loved the following two lines:

" Sometimes I wish I could see myself while sleeping..do I look that handsome?" - 😆he is a cutie!!
"how about we continue from here when we come back?" -hmm...Mrs.Sharma is becoming bold & naughty like her husband...
I liked how u show the bond b/w the sisters and Mayank & Sam. There are there for each other!
The whole thing with fb was so sweet! I mean it was such a simple gesture but there was a lot of love in it and it meant a lot to Mayu...😊
Birth of babies - U were wonderful, explaining how tensed & scared the fathers were to the happiness they felt when they first held the babies. A moment to cherish!!
The last bit was really a nice family moment though a bit filmy, I think it showed the depth of their relationships. Sajan's daughter's name is Ishita???A special hug for that🤗🤗
A wonderful ending but I'm sad coz now I won't have this ff to read...please do come back soon with another ff!!Thanks for the pm.🤗
-SupriyaluvsMN- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww... mulan... thnk u sooooooo much 4 dedicating d update 2 me!!!!!🤗🤗🤗
it really means alot 2 me...🤗🤗🤗
aww.... such an beautiful update...
MN finally becam 2hearts 1 soul...☺️
& d birth of deir twins...😍
& lastly d song.. *yeh Zindagi..* 1 of my fav song wid whole MN Family...!😳😍😳😍
such an Perfect Ending... luvd it totally...👏👍🏼
thou.. i'll miss dis ff..... but i'm sure.. u'll cum up wid a new one...😳
thnx a ton..🤗🤗
luv ya loads....🤗🤗
ginny09 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhhhhhhhhhh my my
haven't seen any dori seen as adorable as this :D
contact sam :lol:
-sam- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hii Mulan,
I finally read the entire ff today
all 19 parts
I dont know how much time it took, but I did 😆
I dont regret for spending my time reading this beautiful piece
It was amazing, I didnt realise that its ended
but peoples comments told me that!

It was so good yaar
Loved it a lot 🤗
Such a sweet simple cute innocent ff
Like a Mayur movie playing infront!!!

God bless you 🤗

Please do pm me if you happen to write anything new 😃
I might be late in commenting, but I'll defo read!

Thanks for all the pms 😳
cutiepie12 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
it ws da most lovely ff..............wht an ending yr................superb............da perfect happy family...........😊😊
-CreativeSoul- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow i cant belive u ended this ff
it was amazing
and this part was just mindblowing
loved it
awsome ff
do ryt more
love
tanzeel
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Posted: 14 years ago
both d parts wer just awesome!
loved it!!
thnx fr d pm😛😳😆😳
kirti123 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
😊hey sorry for commenting late
another beautiful ff
wow mulan just loved it
please continue writing more such beautiful mjht ff
😊
hazra66 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow
aussum update
loved it
uday's character is so funny
-Anila- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ff APIII...👏👍🏼👏
i loved it...😃
loved d way MayUr relationship grew up wid time after marriage...😊
wowww...😛
both sisters gv birth to twins at d same time...😆🤣😆
i loved it...😉
awww all 4 babies call both d couples MAA n DAD...😃
dats really cute...😊
u write really awesome...😍
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
may ALLAH bless u alwaysss🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago

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