sanraj.....ye dooriyan... - Page 4

Originally posted by: muttakin

nidhi

u just made it like such a wonderfull

i don;t know what to say

your writng really fabulous.......................

thanks for such a amazing "ye dooroyan"

thnx a loooooooooot dear.....muahhhhhh for this.....

thnx shabz ,,,,,,,,,,mira,,,,,,,,,cuterosy,,,,,,,,,crystal.....

YE DOORIYAN …..PART 8

SANRAJ ROOM…………..

N DM sitting on chair n watching santu…

Dm in his thoughts,,,thinking abt what baa said n car scene when they were so close….

It's the long time whn they had been so intimate…..actually they never reunite afrt their first SR…its not like that they didn't touch each other….but aftr their first sr,,,their first anniversary came,,,arjan died n santu was in jail for 1 year n aftr her getting releasd they cant get so intimate coz of the mental trauma they all were going through specially khemi n Birwa n so as santu and dm….they used to talk to each other,,share there feelings..hug each other,,,kiss also but that intimacy …………never !!!

This time dm thinking abt restarting ther lyf from the point frm wher their lyf changed….

But santu not thinking lyk this ….she was still in her family world….while removing her jwlry,,,she was talking…SANTU((while removing a gold chain,,,which she is tryng to remove since long))))::maalik,,,how happy were everyone whn I agreed for the party…I m so happy…

But dm still in his deep thoughts…SANTU notices that :::maalik r u listening to me….

No reply……..

santu::maalik,,maalik(((in alouder tone)))Dm come out of his thoughts n ask what???Santu ::I m talkingto u n u r lost…..by the way what were u thinking…Dm::nothing…u tell what u were u asking???Santu::yaa….I was asking u to come here n open my chain…..I m tryng since so long time,,but its not getting open….pls help me….

Dm smiles n stands up….moving towards santu…again thinking same….looking at santu with his BR eyes….

But santu only looking at him,,,tryng to understand wht he is thinking,,,why he is looking towards her lyk this,,,do he wants sumthing????

Dm reaches santu….stand just behind her…close to her but not too close…still lost in his thoughts n his dear santuri….

Santu now looking only in his eyes,,,coz she knows to understnd the meaning of his deep eyes,,,she also has to fall so deep in his eyes….

Dm slowly raises his hand…..put on her shoulder….move her fingers frm one shldr to other to put her hairs on one side…

Santu just got shivered frm his touch ….

Thn he try to open lock of her chain n while doing so..his fingers touching santu bare neck….

Santu feeling sumthing different,,,,,feeling which she has missed so much tht even she forget that feelings….but now all her feelings r coming agn…she begins to understands meaning of his eyes….his BR eyes….

Dm also unable to open chain…so he bends his head down to open it by his teeth…..there his lips touch santu bare neck………

Now santu blushes….her cheeks turned so pink….now even her eyes showing BR feelings…

Dm opens the lock…lift his head,,look at santu…smiles to see her xpression,,,which he hasn't seen since so long time….thn some naughtiness comes in his eyes n a different smile on his face….

N thn…..

YE DOORIYAN PART 9

Dm opens the lock…lift his head,,look at santu…smiles to see her xpression,,,which he hasn't seen since so long time….thn some naughtiness comes in his eyes n a different smile on his face….

N thn…..He removes her chain little roughly coz of which santu get a scratch n says::ouch!!!!

Dm::oh!! U got hurt…so …

He bends liitle n kiss her neck n says .I M SORRY!!!

Now santu get it,,,he has done this willingly coz he want to …..

DM n SANTU santding,,,,,looking at each other via mirror…..enjoying to see feelings of each other….

Slowly,,,dm start moving his fingers over her shldr moving towards her neck n thn towards her ears….

Thn he remove her earring agn roughly,,,santu agn :::maalik!!!

Dm agn softly kiss her ear n says ::I M SORRY!!!

Now santu completely in dm love world,,,,unable to hold herself….so while dm was kissing her,,,hold one end on dressing table,,,so that she doesn't fall but that dufford doesn't know she has already fallen …..in love of dm……….

Dm aftr kissing ,,,lift his head,,,looks at santu….red cheeks,,,eyes close,,,,holding table tightly…

So,,,dm slowly put his hand over santu hand,,,remove it frm table,,,hold her hand himself…n says

DM::u doesn't need take support frm anything else till I m there in ur lyf…..u can take it whn I will go frm this duniya…

Santu immediately turns n put her hand over dm mouth….n nodds her head in noo…with little wet eyes….

N thn removes her hand….

SANTU:::why u alwys keep sayng these worlds,,,u know I doesn't like this at all n even thn….

DM smiles,,,,says:: I M SORRY!!((with naughty xpression))

SANTU ((((also in naughty way)))::this is not the way of sayng sorry!!! U have to say sorry in different way to manoify d'pur ki maalkin….

Dm smiles…..slowly moving towards her….bring his face close to her,,,to kiss her lips..whn.. …

A breeze of air blows outside coz of which santu hairs fly…….

Dm mesmerized by her beauty….

Santu removes her hair frm her face n put it aside but one of her still on her face,,,over her lips….

Dm slowly touch her forehead n bringing his fingers downward ,,,touching nose….upper lip..lower lip…thn remove her tress…move it aside,,,touching her lips….

Santu havng ahh feeling….

Thn dm put his one hand over santu waist n other over her face,,,,,getting close to her,,,,,too close…..bring his face near to her face….his lips near to her lips…..

Now,,,his lips just touchs her lips…..then he kisses her lips…..

Santu slowly move her hands over his back,,,,to take his support to hold herself….start moving her hand in his hairs….

Dm making his grip more strong,,,one by holding her waist tightly n second by,,,,,,via his lips….

Still kissing…………………………..

Dm slowly moves his hand over her back…..open one dori of her blouse…..moves his fingers over bare back…..thn opens second dori….lyk this open all xpect the last one….

Santu holds his kurta tightly….

Thn …..

He Touch the last dori ,,,,going to open it…..

Whn….

Santu not able to hold herself…..so…get back….

Now there lips leaves each other…..

Dm surprised!!!

PRECAP::

Santu now cant stand there more coz she vcant give the answers of questions which dm eyes were asking……..so she just lift her loosened saree…n run out frm room………..

Dm shocked!!!!

Originally posted by: muttakin

wow nidhi wel done......👏👏👏

it just awesome......⭐️

kash me director hoti bandini ka

i m sure i must follow the fans idea and same like your writing

SANRAJ is really amazing romance each other

their feelings...................❤️

thnx a loooooooooot muttu.....🤗

Originally posted by: ipodmackid

awesome niddi- continue soon

thnx mira...keep reading,...😊

YE DOORIYAN PART 10.……..

Santu looks at dm n dm at santu….

Santu,,,coz of her shyness,,unable to have an eyelock even!!! So looks down!!!

Dm get it …………..its just co of her shyness……….so he slowly put her finger over her chin n lift her fae up…………n says:::e santuri ….look at me…..

Santu slowly opening her eyes,,,,,,,,,,,,looks his eyes…..but still shyng a lot!!!!!!!!

Dm slowly start bringing his face near to her face to again kiss her………bringing his lips near to her…….

But santu still shyng a lot,,so,,,,,,,she fastly turns around…..giving back to dm…..

Now dm gives a cute smile………agn start coming close to her………

Thn,,,he slowly bends n come close to her bare back…….his lips reaches there n ……

………..begin to kiss her bare back…..kissing n kissing…..

Santu just lost in his kisses,,,,his way of loving her…..n thn….

santu havng a ahh feeling so she lifts her head liitle up…. N opens her eyes………

……..N there her eyes goes on the wall n shocked!!!!!!!!

Santu looks at pictures in front of her on the wall……of whole family……

Hiten,,kaddu,,,Birwa,,,suraj….arjan….

Thn she remembers what arjan said abt sanraj kids coz of which she took decision of no kids…..

Flashback of hospital scene,,,,,dm giving vachan of no kids!!!!!!!!

Dm still kissing her back…..

Santu now wants to stop him……….n says::maalik!!!

Dm Still kissing…..

santu agn::maalik!!!

Dm now stop kissing…

Santu got a relief feeling that he stopped….

but dm still in his love world!!!!

So,,,slowly……raise his hand,,touches her back,,,going to open the last dori of her blouse….

Whn…

Santu shouts::::maalik stop it………..turns around………looks at dm….

Dm completely shocked!!!!!!!

Santu looks at dm……..tears in her eyes…..

Dm surprised to see her tears!!!!!

Santu now cant stand there more coz she cant give the answers of questions which dm eyes were asking……..so she just lift her loosened saree…n run out frm room………..

Dm shocked!!!!

DM not able to move,,,,standing still………tears in his eyes….

SANTU out of the room ………standing over the stairs,,,,,,,,,,,,cryng,,,,

Background music……….

IN RAHOO KI DOORIYAN………

NIGAHO KI DOORIYAN……….

HUMRAHO KI DOORIYAN…….

FANAAH HO SABHI DOORIYAN….

KYUKOI PAAS HAI DOOR HAI ,,

KYU KOI JAANE NAA KOI YAHAA PE…..

AA RAHA PAAS YA DOOR ME JAA RAHA….

JAANU NAA MEI HU KAHA PE……..

YE DOORIYAN………

NIGAHO KI DOORIYAN……….

HUMRAHO KI DOORIYAN…….

FANAAH HO SABHI DOORIYAN….

YE DOORIYAN………

Ye DOORIYAN PART11

Next day….living room….

Baa coming frm her room n champ kali running down the stairs as she got late….

Baa::ck,,,u r cimng now..

Ck::sorry baa,,I got late…

Baa::ok ok,,just run to kitchen n help santu to make brkfst,,she must ba doing it alone….n first bring my pooja ki thali,,,,,I m going to wake suraj…..

Ck::ji baa…

Baa in suraj room….opens the gate n surprised!!!!

Santu sleeping while sitting on the bed n one hand on suraj head…..her face is looking so dull….as she was cryng for that whole night….

Baa::santu is still sleeping!!! N that too in suraj room!!!! Why???(((thinking)))

Thn baa trytng to wake santu…

Baa::santu,,,,e santu….

Santu just get up n little speechless to see baa…..she gets up frm the bed…touches the baa feet,,wishing her jai shri Krishna!!!

Baa::wht happen santu…u r so late…n ur face is looking as u didn't sleep properly….n why u slept here???I mean why not in ur room???

Santu((((fumbling with words)))……::baa,,baa,,wo actually…..yesterday,,I shouted on suraj naa n he was angry with me,,,so I thought that if I wld sleep with him thm he will feel good…..so I slept in his room….at night we both keep talking,,,,so we got late to sleep…that's why I didn't hav cmplt sleep……

Baa:::ok ok….now u go n get ready ….I will wake up suraj n make him ready for school….u go..

Santu moving,,,

Baa::n also wake up dharmaraj also,,,he must also be sleeping….

Santu start thinking……how will I face maalik…he must be so angry to me…what I will say to him….. n her feet not able to move coz she doesn't have courage to meet him…..

Baa::why r u standing here,,just go…

Santu::ya baaa,,I m going…

Santu moving on stairs….saying in her mind…..but I have to meet him…only then I can tell him why I behaved lyk that….

Thn she thinks sumthing n says:::I m such a fool….sahi kehte hai maalik,,I m a dufford!!!!

Why wld maalik be angry with me…what I did was to save our decision…save the vachan which maalik has given me….he wld rather be sorry to me that he forgot his vachan n will thank me that I protect that vachan….

She reaches her room,,,,open the door…..n ….surprised!!!!

Room is empty…no one there…

Santu moves towards washroom..noone…..surprised!!!

Santu::maalik went to factory so early….

Thn she see his watch,,,mobile,,,papers everything in the room…..it means maalik has not gone to factory,,,then where he is????

Santu get tensed,,,,,run out of the room,,,,to search for dm,,,,reaches living room…baa standing there….

Baa::are u again come here without getting ready….what happened to u??? r u fine???

Santu::ya baa,,I m fine,,actually I forget sumthing in suraj room,,so come to take that…

Baa::but that u can take later on also…see its already,,,,8'oclock,,,u didn't even ready,,,whn will u do pooja,,,n suraj brkfst,,,chai for dm….

Santu ::ya ya baaa…I m going……

moving towards her room n looking here n there…..

Baa::e santu,,,did u wake up dharmaraj????

Santu ::ya ya baa,,,he is geeting ready!!!

Baa::ok…

Santu moves out…

Baa going to her room…thn suddenly see that study room is open….open the gate n see n surprised!!!!

Precap:::

Santu just moving her gaze frm dm n looks twrds baa n says::ya baa,,I m ready…wait I will bring pooja ki thali for u….

Baa::no need of that…I already told ck,,she will bring for me….u go to ur room…n help dm to get ready..give him his clotohes n all,,he is alrdy so late…

Sntu::ya baa ..I m..

Dm interrupts in btwn((in attitude))………….

Loving your FF please post soon awesome writing Nidhi