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Posted: 14 years ago

hello eveyone.....

starting a new ff of bandini....named as ye dooriyan.....

hope u all will lyk it....

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Posted: 14 years ago

yaar,,,as many of u know i have already put this on rrr....

so,,i was thinking to put this here also....

but just want to know,,,that shd i first put the older ones also....or directly put the new ones...

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Posted: 14 years ago

LOST KEYS!!!!!!
Nowadays dm n santu r too busy in there works,,want to spend some tym with each other but not able to do so'.
Scene start with sanraj room''..

Dm sleeping on bed......Santu in hurry cum out of bathroom,,,looks at clock 8'0clock!!!

Santu::aaj to bahut late ho gai! Taking jewellery frm almirah n simultaneously murmuring'..
Abhi to pooja bhi karni,,baa ki dawaii,,sab ka brkfast,,,maalik ki chaaye n thn '''looks at maalik n shouts '..maalik aap abhi tak so rahe '..its already 8am''.jaldi uthie''..

Dm turns n slowly gets up n sits on bed n does 1st work of his day'.look at santu!

Santi in yellow sari,,,,open wet hairs on 1 side,,,,standing near the dressing n wearing earing'''lookking gorgeous!!!
Suddenly she realises that dm is awake n staring at her'.she turns toward dm n says

Santu::bus bhi kijie,,,,kab tak aise hi dekhte rahege????((stop it'for how long u will keep staring at me???))
Dm:::::jab tak meri aankhe band nahi ho jati!!!!((till my eyes get closed)))
Santu,,,giving annoying expression:::maa'''lik???

Dm smiles,,extend his arm toward her n says:::eye santudii,,,idhaar aa''.((come here))
Santu also gives a cute smile n walk towards him'n thn extends her arm so that there hands (palms)are abt to touch''.

Voice comes:::maalkin,,maalkin'.
Santu get back'...n thn campakali cums
Ck::maalkin aapko baa kabse bula rahi h((baa is asking for u))
Santu::ha,,bus aahi rahi thi ck'.((just cuming ck))

She goes'.at door she turns''' look at dm
Santu::sorry'.have to go(( say..only by expression))
Dm:::::its ok,,I understands((say..only by expression))

Next scene'''
Dm getting ready in hurry'wearing red kurta'(lokkking drooling!!!!)'closing button of kurta'his phone rings'.picks phone'
Dm::haa saumil bhai'.file'no I dnt have'.I have given to u yesterday'..let me check'''.
Searching file''

Santu enters with tray of tea'..
dm :::ha ha saumil bahi,,file to mere paas hi hai'.I m just cuming'will reach in 5 minutes'

Santu::maalik,,tea'
Dm :::santu chaye rehne de,,,I m very late..so I have to leave(wearing his watch,,putting mobile in pocket )
Santu::bt maalik,,if u'l nt have ur tea thn u'l have headache..it will take jst 2 minutes'pls drink'..
Dm takes cup frm santu hand::::::;ok,,give

Santu:::maalik ..u didn't close ur kurta button
Dm::oh,,forgot!!!I will do it..
Santu::maalik,,let me do it'.u drink ur tea
Dm gives a big smile
Santu comes near him n abt to touch his kurta''

Voice comes'papa,,,papa
Santu gets back''n thn hiten enters
Hiten::papa u r nt ready,,,we r getting late!!!make it fast
Dm::ya,,I m ready'lets move((closing his kurta button))

Dm leaves'at door he turns,,look at santu
Dm:::sorry'.have to go((say..only by expression))
Santu::its ok,,I understands((say..only by expression))

PRECAP:::

Santu::maalik,,,actually I m not getting the almirah keys
Dm::what???
Santu::ya,,,jst nw I had them,,I took jewelry frm almirah n thn''..
Dm ::n thn what??????/how can u do that'.come on santu u r maalikn of this home n u doesn't even take care of keys'.

.(((in full anger,,,that's why said santu,,not santuri!!)))

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Posted: 14 years ago

THE LOST KEYS PART2

Late in afternoon,,,baa taural n santu sitting in living room n baa saying to santu to go to her room n bring her jewellery to be given to shopkeeper for finishing work…santu stands up n go to room…

dm cumes,,,,,talking on mobile ::;ya ya hiten,,I m at home,,,I will see the file n thn tell u wht to do next…put the phone down…says::baa how r u

Baa:: I m fine,,how r u ,,,too busy with ur new project…

Dm ::ya baa,,,,I m going to my room…some pending work is to be done…

Baa::ok!!!

Dm enters his room…

Santu opening almirah…see dm:::maalik aap aa gaye,,,will u have sumthing??

Dm :::yaa,,make tea for me n also sumthing to tea

Santu::ya,,abhi laati hu…

Dm put 4,5 files on bed n go to bathroom….

Santu take out 3,4 jewelry boxes,,,keep on bed one by one near dm files.,,,thn closes almirah…put keys on bed,,,,pick up the boxes n leave frm room…….

Later on…

Dm comes to living room where baa is sitting n ck giving her glass of water.. n dm ask ck for santu…n santu comes from kitchen….

Dm::santu,,give me the file I have given u yesterday to keep in almirah….

Santu::ji…abhi laati hu…go upstairs to her room

Baa::santu has gone to take file…till then u can sit here n take rest for atleast 2 minutes

Dm sits n suddenly stands

Baa::now what happen??

Dm::I have gone crazy baa….i gave santu 5 files but nw I need only 1 of them n how will she knw I need which file….I shd go n get file myself n thn leaves…..

dm enters his room…standing at door…see santu searching for sumthing….

Dm::e santudi…wht happen

Santu::nthing maalik

Dm::then what r u searching for…….

Santu::maalik,,,actually I m not getting the almirah keys

Dm::what???

Santu::ya,,,jst nw I had them,,I took jewelry frm almirah n thn……..

Dm ::n thn what??????/how can u do that….come on santu u r maalikn of this home n u doesn't even take care of keys…..(((in full anger,,,that's why said santu,,not santuri!!)))

Thn suraj enters n says::maa,,, I want to have choclate shake…

Suraj looks at santu n says::.wht happen maa

Santu::beta..I lost the almirah kys….probably I left them in kitchen…pls go n check suraj……

Suraj::ok I will bt after that will u make shake for me

Santu:::yaa…u get me the keys n I will do whatever u says….

Suraj leaves …….

Dm is still standing at door,,,,closes door after suraj leaves…put latch……look at santu with his BR eyes and a naughty smile on his face….

Santu is still searching….dm comes near her…….

santu searching keys in drawer of dressing table…….suddenly she feels dm fingers over her waist……n lift her face up n see via mirror…

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nidhi ka jadoo in writtig
Kahan ho long time no see at RRR

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetfari

Nidhi ka jadoo in writtig
Kahan ho long time no see at RRR

hiiiii sweetu...

thnku so much...🤗

yaar,,dnt cum on net 4 much tym...just cum 4 sumtym for bandini....will cum on rrr aftr exam on 5 feb....thn i will be totally vella....so....😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

thnx to..........

muttakin,,,,,ipod,,,shabz...crystal...cuckoo...cuterosy...

for hitting the lyk button...

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Posted: 14 years ago

LOST KEYS PART 3

PRECAP:::santu searching keys in drawer of dressing table…….suddenly she feels dm fingers over her waist……n lift her face up n see via mirror…

Santu::maalik,,, just now you were so angry on me n now….

Dm standing behind her n one hand at her waist….smiles n says::;now,,,now what????

SANTU just smiles n thn...Slowly,,,dm put other hand in his pocket n take out keys…….

Santu surprised….n then gives a cute smile…dm also smiles…Dm softly put keys over her waist n….

kiss her on neck once…

twice….

n keep on kissing from neck to shoulder……….

Santu blushing,,,put her one hand over dm hand lying ovr her waist…n other over dm face n enjyng his kisses n just lost………

Dm removes her1 earing n kiss her ear n slowly turns her,…..

santu facing dm,,,

dm moves his fingers over her face softly……

kiss at forehead…at cheek….near end of lips……abt to kiss on the lips whn ….

Suddenly santu stops him n says:::oh!!! This was all your GAMMAT!!! U have the keys n even then asked me to get the files n now I guess u didn't even need any file…..U know how much I was tensed but u ……..u were having fun….hm…….

Dm:::what gammat??? I need the file definitely n I got the keys from table when u were searching them in dressing table drawer….

Santu:::oh I see!!!

Dm :::now what r u going to do for me?????

Santu::what???

Dm::are dufford….u said to suraj na if he will get the keys thn u will do whatever he says….so I got keys for u…n now its your turn…….

Santu:::what do u want???

Dm slowly put his hand on santu face….santu remember the scene whn dm askd her to kiss on cheek by putiing his finger on cheek n thn she blushes……

Dm thn slowly extend thumb((while fingers still over cheek)) n touches santu lips frm one end to other..n thn click twice over her lips indicating to kiss on his lips……

Santu also got it…n blushes…….

Slowly,,,santu go near him n put her 1 hand over his eyes n close them……

slowly her face approaching his face…

thn her lips touches his lips softly…..

her hand moves in dm hair n dm hand in santu hairs…….

Dm pulls santu towards him by her waist showing his passion…..

santu also kisse him passionately……..

After lo…..ng time santu releases his lips n they just look at each other….. A romantic eyelock!!!!!!

Santu:::so,,u got keys from table???

Dm:::what???????.ha,,ha,,,I got from the table…

Santu::acha…par mene to bed par hi chodi thi…thik waha ..jaha aapki files rakhi thi…..((bt I left them on the bed ….right there..where your files were present…….))

Dm with shocking expression with dimple smile on his face::::oh!!!!it means that was all your GAMMAT!!

Santu::if u can do…cant I do gammat with u…

Dm::now u will get punishment for this…….

Dm pulls santu towards him n about to kiss her…….

Voice comes….maa…maa

Santu n dm moves back….

Santu moves toward gate…

Dm::e sambaad!!!!!!!!((stop))

Santu stops,,turns n look towards him…

He move toward bed,,take 1 file n sit on chair

Dm::now go n open the door…..

Voice comes:maa…maa