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Originally posted by: drmaha

gr8 one yar.....the conversation between nuper and shilpa was soo touching.....but the ending......😕.?
thts not fair....update soon...........😊

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

hey Aru🤗

luv ya

thnks for finding time n cuming here..

i m glad u liked it

n finding it intresting

thnku so much

i know i have hookd u all with ths person...

n i'll update soon dear

Originally posted by: arunabehere

Fiza dear

no need of thanks

u must be saying to read this reply of comment

but i already read so dont send me the thread again :)

so i can expect the update in this weekend

rt ???

yup..mayb before weekend ....2morow or frida😳y

Hey guys

Im here..this time with quick update

Thnku so much for ur liking…but on finding many of u missing frm here

Just want to ask u …"R U FINDING THS STORY BORING…OR TO MELODRAMATIC….OR TO SLOW"

Plz do answer me…

N ya…from now on the story will go in past…..

Its half of the chapter ..other half at weekend…..sorry I cant type more

Luv ya

Fiza

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

yup..mayb before weekend ....2morow or frida😳y

as im on an OS request by faria on weekend ...else she is gonna kill me

Originally posted by: arunabehere

Faria should change her name as "KILLER"

she ll be always killing some one

tell her that i said this

she is already angry on me

ghee dal do aur jalegi aur bolegi at least she ll talk to me then

u know i dont feel like writing this days

anyways u dont feel it

and write more and more

lolzzzzzzzzzzz

Chapter:4

Chapter 5 A

I went home all lost in myself n him too'.could'nt even realize what is waiting for me there

I rung the bell'hoping my maid will open'but whom I saw'.i lost my all inhibitions'.i hugged him tight n cryed out loud'.in an urge to find sum peace in his arms'..

Man : kya hua hai'why r u crying dear'bolo Nupur'plz'.ur scaring me

He cuped his face and wiped off sum tears'but they were just not stoping '.

Man : bolo kya hua hai

Nupur: mayank

The only letters she can speak to make word were these''he didn't understood why she is crying again for him '.

Man : andhar chalo..plz

He took her inside'n make her sit on sofa'giving her sum water tht she refuse to take'.she was sobbing continuously

Man : now tell me'wht happened'.u meat mayank

Nupur: han

Man :kaha

Nupur: Mukti mein

Man : waha kyun aaya tha woh'us ko pata k tum

Nupur: nhi'.rehabilitation center mein

Man : ohhh'.donation dayny aaya hoga'.he has a heart of gold

Nupur: nhi DAD'woh wah patient hai

LOLZzzz'..April fools'..sorry guys'but I cant control'.back to emotional drama

Nupur: nhi Dad '.woh patient hai waha

Dad: kya'

Nupur: she turns towards him'..woh pagal horha hai'pata nhi kya horah hai us ko''woh drug addict hogaya hai

Dad: Nupur u must b misunderstanding ..he cant be drug addict'kuch aur hoga

Nupur: nhi na'I talked with doctors'thy said us k blood sample positive hain '..

Dad: per woh asa bulkul nhi tha'.he was naughty'.woh tu tum dono thy but he wasn't spoild'.

Nupur: I know..but us k symptoms everything'.u just don't know how I saw him

Dad: where he was after college'.kuch batay unhon'. us ke family

Nupur: woh London mein tha..akela hi..almost'sami tha but ..woh us k sath nhi tha'anty ko bhi kuch nhi pata'us se abhi 'I cant talk like tht'he seems soo fragile dad'mayank'mayank seems to b so vulnerable

Dad: dkho beta'I know how ur feeling '..but abhi he needs ur stronger side'im with u '.locate sami or any1 related to him at London'if find necessary go there'.but he needs u..n ths time stay with him please

Nupur: she just lookd at him'n hugged him'..dad'is this all because of..

Dad: shh'whtevr..n whoever is responsible'its nt necessary at ths moment'.u need to make him the old one thts more important'

For tht u need rest'.go n have sum'.ur looking to week'

Nupur: hum ap ko buhat tang keraty thy na

Dad: hann'per humain tum dono wasay hi pasand thy''nupur khabi khabi kuch asoolo k thor dayna acha hota hai'.rishty thor ny se'.yeah tab mein ny us se kaha tht aj tum se kah raha hoon

GUD NIGHT

I walked towards my room with my tired steps'..im truly tired'..

I enterd my room n throw my bag along with myself on bed'..looking towards the ceiling aimlessly'..i turned on the other side to find a picture ..a picture of US'

It was talken at colloge fiesta'.a smile appears on my face thy were truly gold times'..

We both are hiding each other faces with our hands'n laughing loud'.these smiles'.n ths relation I have cherish the most

She trace his smile'true it was a beautiful one..though I always use too call it such a "byaker" smile'but

Nupur: I am gonna sse you like ths again ''never I thought mayank'.seems I lost u again..the way I lost u than

Our friendship was like that..beyond words can explain'beyond wht we can make people understand '.but together we where solid as rock

Tense court :

the whole stadium was filled with people'.girls were screaming on a choclate handsome yumi boy'..he was sitting on the players chair'drinking sum thing to get back his boost for the last set''he moves his head around '.digging his eyes in crowd'.but he could'nt find wht he was searching

time'. The refer called

he move back to the court on last time moving his eyes throughout the court'.

Dam'ur still nt there'I'll kill u

Before serving he said so '.n throwd the ball in air'nt concentrating he dropd th first game of thrd n final set'.freak

Commenter: looks like Mr.sharma is losing his concentration'.such n early simple break'tht can make him lose his concentration

Kya ker raha hai mayank 'focus'he turnd around to hear familiar voice

Nupur: mayank

Mayank: teri tu'..he acted like throwing his racket on her'.

She touched her ears in sorry'n he proceeds to his game with simle'.

The match went smoothly n the hero won

Players room

Mayank: kaha thi ap'tera SRK mjh se zayada important hai'tjhy pata hai I want u there when I playing

Nupur: yaar tu mjhy ek baat bata'..mein kya teri Girlfriend oh ya lucky charm

Mayank: tu mera support hai..aur tjhy pata hai yeah'pointing out his finger

Nupur: han baba pata hai'asa lgata hai mein nhi aao gi tu har jay ga'.

Mayank: u know I watch u..u correct my mistakes during my game'n u know how much important ths was for me'

Nupur: array bhi..maafi'dnt get so emotional'huge traffic jam

Maynk: tu who said to cum alone'I ask u to cum with me 'per nhi'

She came forward n hugged him tight

Nupur: congrats yaar'.ur now intercolloge champion dude'cool man'..girls gonna drool on u more

Mayank: thanks ..thanku so much'he lifted her a bit from ground'.thy broke'.n don't u dare leave me alone'.

Nupur: aay bhgawan'tht y thts y I don't have any boyfriend'cause I hate these stupid chessy lines..chal chal party day

Mayank: anywhere u want aj hi dad ny pasai send kiya hain

Nupur: mayank..

Mayank: hmm'wht

Nupur: she stood ther'aj bhi nhi baty ga

Mayank: wht'ignoring question

Nupur: ek tarf'u say u don't have a family'.than u said its ur fathers money..thn u don't spend tht on ur studies or on ur personl expenses'..for tht u do a part time job'whts all ths

Mayank: kahin aur chaltay hai..aram se baat keray gay '.

Nupur: per aj nhi choro gi

Mayank: ok'.dnt worry'tmhain nhi batao ga tu kis ko batao ga

The went to a club 'a loud crowded place'.settling them on a far corner'away from people'view them dancing like insane'.she was waiting impatiently for him to open up'.she knew sumthing is inside him'.she knew him frm past 8 mths now but he never wants to talk abt all ths'but today he has agred'..

reserve

nice story ..........
its not boring one....infact the story track is really smooth n it should be carry like ths.....⭐️
ths story itself attracts........😊

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