MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 - Page 20

Originally posted by: achoose

am very late this time..hmmm...

 

the update was awesome dear...u really made me a fool..i was worried about that so called "man".............thank GOD....no no..thanks fiza....

the past was so cute..............................they r simply the best of friends................

mindblowing...pls continue soon dear...............

Originally posted by: drmaha

nice story ..........
its not boring one....infact the story track is really smooth n it should be carry like ths.....⭐️
ths story itself attracts........😊

Originally posted by: -Faria-

So my DocMOM
how was my silent treatment???
Accha hain na??????????

but u r emotional blackmailer - mujhe mana hai liya.
hahahahahaha aisa galad faime pe maat raho- kyun ki main jab naraz he nehi huye tou tum mujhe kya manaogi.LOL

but yaaaaaaaa i m angry on Aru- and i wont talk to her(i know aru u r reading my comment).

any way coming to ur update-
wah wah kya jamana agaya- april ki pehle he APRIL fool bana diya

fiza ki bacchi- now i m surely kill u.................

waha mera halat kharab ho rahi thi ki wo kaun hai- aur yaha tum haas rahi thi- right???


but i m really happy- bala taal gaya.LOL

awwwwwww i loved the flashback part
i adore mayur frnship.
hmmm so maynk has bitter past.
i wanna knw it.

beautiful update januuuuuuuuu

fantastic
keep it up

Originally posted by: hazraluvarjun

wow

ausssum update

loved it

 

Originally posted by: -moona-

nice part...

nxt part will break the suspense...

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

wao great update

I really like this story

I know its little slow but its Ok

Flash backs were so beautiful

They both shared great bonding

Thanks for Pm 

cont soon

Originally posted by: mahakmev

interesting and osom dearr

HELLO GUYS

Love u all…im so relived to know ur fine with the flow of ths story….thnks aloot

Rplyd to u all….

N where is Tasfia???

Oki next part is up

Sumthings I wanna clear…

1. dnt wait for MN wedding…it may cum like u didn't imagine…..n its nt cuming atleast for upcoming 4 parts
2. past is up for sum updates

Luv ya

Fiza

Mayank: do u know Vivek Sharam

Nupur: finding words between drinking her drink'.the famous industrialist'.who people say is involve in many other business'.

Maynk: yes'.many other wrong business''.after a pause'he is my father

Nupur: wht ..she almost shouted..

Mayank: yes he is my so called father

Nupur: mayank but it doesn't mater '.wht people say is nt always true'u know there r thousands of rumors abt it

Maynk: thy r nt rumors thy r true'remember the chool accident few days back'tht was my fathers master plan'to get the area'

Nupur: ur mom never tried to stop him

Mayank: he laughed faintly'..mom'I was four whn she died'so I didnt saw my real mom'dad got married after two yrs again'n I  have a younger brother because of tht

Nupur: so thts y u don't live with them'step mother brother

Mayank: oye its nt a Cinderella story'.my mom n brother are the most loving people I can have in my life'..mom has no control over her husband'she cant argue'.he is mad'.

N sami..i mean smart is young'.n sumhow don't find these business non ethical'for him sab yeahi kerty hain'.

So I left the home'I don't want to live my life on black money..i ask mom to be with me but she is an Indian wife'laughed sarcastically'

Nupur: ofcorse  he is her husband /'.how can she leave him

Mayank: husband'???..he even don't rember last time he lookd lovingly towards her'.he just want a k''forget it

Nupur: do u meet anty

Mayank: ya'evry tueday I meet her at mandir'n sumtime sami cums to hostel to meet me..or gave me my dads grant for his son..

The silence was all over '.she could'nt understand wht he is'..at one point he enjoys life at fullest..without any rules'.n on the other hand'  he lives his life'struggle just for his principle'whtever it is but she cherish his frndship the most' a relation she is proud of'

Nupur: to break the silence'..acha bus'stop behaving like a Devdas'.v r here to celebrate ur victory dear 'right

Mayank: he smile at her'.true she is here support system'..chal last burn the dance floor'.com get up '.

He drag her to dace floor'.dancing n enjoying'celebrating there friendship'thy were having blast'true the don't need anybody except themselves around to have the bst of time'.

Nupur: chal aj have sum drink

Mayank: no way '. tali hony k bad meri izzaat kaun bachy ga'

Nupur: mayank'.ur so

Mayank: I m so wht'.wasy aj kal ur too in  mood to have FUNNNN' laughed out loud

Nupur: very funny '.just shut up

The club was surrounded with claps n shouts'.

Nupur: no nt again'

Maynk: God'.phr koi stupid  kisis ko propose ker rah hoga

Nupur: han aur '.ek mth bad phr ya tu devdas bana batha ho ga''yap hr kisi aur k sth hoga''

Th bth shared a high five

Mayank: whn people cant handle there relationship ''why they comit so ''achay khasay rishto ko mazak bana diya'..

Nupur: haay mera filmi hero'array she jumped with excitement'..

Mayank: kya ho'.Srk ko dkh liya kiya

Nupur: woh dkh'.yeah is ki frnd thin a'

Mayank: han right'.

M/N: yuck'pathetic

Boy: I have cherish u as my bst friend'u have been there throught thick n thin'u know me in n out 'even thn u have expectd me'stand with me'.always'..will u be mine for ever'.

The girls was in shocked n rush out of the club'every1 was sad'except the two in corner..who have ths disgusting expression on there faces'..

Mayank: how could he

Nupur: disgusting'.i mean how can he just imagine her like tht'

Mayank: ya'she would have trusted him so much n he'

Nupur: n he'had hai'.rishto mein milawat'I hate it

Mayank: me too'so disrespectful'..

Nupur: so ture'..is ko tu punishment milni chaiy

Mayank: agar mein is ki jaga hota tu tum kiya punish kerti

His question just came like tht'.but let her dumb struck '.she could'nt just imagine ths question even he didn't mean anything'.

Nupur: hmm'to live alone till death

Maynk: aur agar tumhain asa feel hota tu..

Nupur: tab bhi'saaz tu ek hi honi chaiy

Mayank: hmm'ya so fair'.dhokay ke yeah hi saza honi chaiy'..

Silence was there''..question n answer bth disturbed them '

Mayank: kya yaar'spoiled our night'chal ghar chalty hai..ur dad must b waiting

Nupur: ya right

He went to drop her home and went inside to meet her father

Mayank: hey uncle'.how r u

Dad: hey young man'.so party mean u won

Maynk: yes uncle I did'.n u wont belive I beat him in straight sets'gr8 na

Dad: so where is my part of treat

Mayank: oops sorry ..next time we'll have a men's night out ..how tht

Dad: sounds gud

Mayank: hain na 'n than we'll have loads of fun

He received a tight slap on head

Mayank: wht cant u just get out of ur definitions''

Uncle ap is ko kasay bardasht kertay hoo

Dada: jasay tum kertay hoo

Mayank: meri tu majbori hai

Dad: mein yeah kaho  tu samhj bhi aata hai'tumhari tu choice hai

Mayank: kaha choice '..pehly din hi takra gai'galay par gai

Dad: acha tu chalo tumhari muskil asan kerta hoon'.vr going to delhi

He was siping coffe wch chocked'..

Mayan: wht uncle'kyun'array mein tu mazak ker raha tha'.ap ko yaha koi problem hai'tranfesr hoa hai tu mein rukh wa do ga'.

Nupur: han dad kyun'I don't wanna go

Dad: ek min'roller coaster ho tum dono'hum hamesha k lyan nhi'3 dino k lyan ja rhy hain

Mayank: ohh'.who was standing in excitement'jump back to sofa'.bs 3 din'mjhy laga jan chuti'.

Dad: tum dono na'.pagal ho

AWSOME UPDATE.........................