Escaping the hell (AR OS) DT NOTE: Page 22 - Page 5

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awwwwwwwwwwwwesome os yaar

d first prt was reallly touching

fabulassssssssssssssssssssss

do rite more

thanx a ton 4 d pm

Originally posted by: kashfull

sani beautiful one shot.

the starting part was dreadfull but then it was awesome

Originally posted by: azy123

this is simply awesome!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Prinnia

Edited*😛

hey my sexy churel kamini jannemaan of heaven princess🤗 heaven princess. kaise hai man? i missed u😭

OMG!!!😲😲....Firstly i got a HUGE shock after i saw U wrote a oneshot😲 yeah look who wrote a one shot. MEEEEE😆
And second shock i got when i finish reading this Oneshot...😃 hope the shock is a good thing😆
it was Heavenly awesome man👏👏
I am telling u..This is the BESTESTESTESTEST oneshot i ever read😃 OMG R U SERIOUS😲 thank you soooo much man. i am so overwhelmed right now with all these comments😃
I am lack of words right now but hope u can understand my feelings my kamini jannemaan😉
I loved the way u protrait the condition of Girls Early marriage😳
This is a wrong practice and The riddhima of ur OS reflects it Damn awesomely👏👏
And How her Dad Killed her Big sis was like DAMN man..😡 yeah yeah i can understand ur feelings but man i can't explain my feelings after reading all these comments. first i thought that i shouldn't have posted this os u know. am glad that riddhima's character did her job properly😆 like that word "damn awesomely"😆 yeah some dads are like that. anyways mitti daal yaar prinzu tu meri kuch zyada hi tarif nahi kar rahi😆
How could a father do that with her Own child😡
I got emotional in that Part...😭 aww sorry to make u cry but i had to pen down the harsh truth of today's world
And then came our superman Armaan to the rescue😉
OMG!!!...he was BEYOND DESCRIPTION😍
When he stepped in I was feeling like Finding water in a desert...exactly like riddhima😳😳
And how he saved her was out of the World😛
And i love riddhima's inner mind talkings😆😆

hehe armaan did come like a hero and saved her but hero was too talkative😆 OMG that was exact feeling i wanted to give my readers like finding water in desert. haha that inner mind talking was mines btw😉😆
Above all I LOVE EVERY BIT OF THIS ONESHOT😃
And i LOVE u even more for writing an awesome oneshot like this😃
Hats off to u Jannemaan....⭐️⭐️
Thanks for the PM

AND I LOVED EVERY BIT OF UR COMMENT😃

thank you bbz.

love u muahz

love

sani

love you
Prinzu😳

Originally posted by: arlover_aditi

m so glad u wrote this one shot sani...n there is nothing to be taken in racist way...its all about humanity u see...even some of the indian villages have child marriage n all....and thats so not right...if sumthing terribly inhuman is happening in our society we have the right to voice against it...n this os is sumthing i truely love...with all my heart! 👏

omg u lot my word seriously and sacchi mucchi mein giving me long comments😆 thank you bbz but u know some people mind just start on how can u say about our country like this and blah blah, so i put that note. yup i do believe in voicing my opinion and am not scared to publicly say that these customs are just WRONG! omg thank you bbz. i love u too😃

n here comes the famous "m elder so m always right" mentality...gawd...seriously...i dun understand y elders tend to think that way...just coz we r kids doesn't mean we will always be wrong...and the relatives well...they just wana have fun of wtv is going on...sumtimes i wonder y our parents get so much affected by wat others r saying...coz all of us knw...that for them its just another drama...not like they really care!

yeah i know in countries like india/ pak that line is common and ur right about the mentality. but thank god now not much people think like that. reletives have got nothing to do with it and they just pass comments😡 bbz even i don't know why parents care so much about rishtedaars. even my parents does.😆

he actually killed his own daughter just coz some shyty things others had to say? Just coz it hurt his male ego? I can't believe hw any1 can be this heartless. Not even a bit of regret or sorrow for wat he did? And the others were cheering n clapping? Whoa'cool'.all these ppl do they even know wat they are dng? God ya Allah won't ever forgive such ppl'!! :|

some men are like that. their izzat comes before anything. they don't even have any regrets and poor women can't do anything aswell. they should voice their opinion man seriously. yeah god will never forgive such people.

Riddhima was lucky enough to be saved from this torture'all this can be changed'women can live their life the way they want to only if all women come together to fight against the injustice against them. They say na..god helps those who help themselves. 😊

that sentence of urs is so true that god helps who help themselves. untill they don't stand up for themselves and their kids, women will get crushed like that always. riddhima's mum should have spoken up for aaliya but she kept quite. riddhima was indeed lucky but not everyone is lucky like her.

And lastly'the way armaan supported her'took her out of the mess'was really touching'keep writing such beautiful one shots sani! 👏 👏 😃

thank you bbz. ur comment was really nice. like sacchi😆

love

sani

Loads of love!
take care!
aditi!

Originally posted by: jannat4ever

awesome os...........too good.....👏👏
nd d concept is just fab....👏👏
i hate dat such things still happen in this
modern era..😡🤢
but i knw these things still happens.......😲
nd i so wnt to kill riddhima's dad.......😡
i mean a father chopping his daughter's head n people are praising him...mentally sick people....🤢😕
rihana aka ridhima nd armaan love was like a fairy tale in ur os........😳😛
sweeet n beautiful............😛
i loved d the whole concept
n d way u wrote made it more amazing
just loved it...............😛

luv
jannat.........😳

Originally posted by: crazy_4_karan

Hey i loved the OS... poor Riddhima she had to go through so much i seriously cn't imagine how parents cn think or treat ther kids like this... n omg wen he killed his elder daughter i was really in tears even i read a lot of stuff like this n it seriously breaks my heart thinking how cruel n inhuman cn some people be... n trust me u wrote the whole thing very nicely...

i am sorry to make u cry but stuff like that seriously happen. thank you bbz. am glad u could understand riddhima and her character.

Now coming to the fun part tht's the running one... god it was seriously like a fairytale... i loved how they met like stranger n thn got along... i loved Armaan's talkative self soo much he was jst so cute... n thn wen the love seed started growing in ther hearts awww tht was such a cute part... n thn finally wen everything was ok n she was back to England i was like thnk god they are safe...

innit a fairytale.😆 i was like kuch zyada hi nahi ho gaya but then i was like nah it looks like a fairytale, so sab chalta hai😆 armaan's all about yak yak yak😆 yeah when they finally reached england, her problems came to an end. but people often feel lonely aswell

I loved the last bit the most specially the way he confessed... "we met like people meet in fairytales. I charged in and rescued you. We both spent a night of our life together escaping from that village of yours. We promised each other to stay together always. You still don't get it Riddhima" "miss Riddhima who just got a new life. Will be my girlfriend? Then after a few years my wife? And then after a few years the mother of my kids and then after a few yea" God he's jst so cute... i loved the confession the happy ending... u shld seriously write more often i wld love to read more frm u... thnx alot for the Pm :)

aww thanks bbz and am glad that u liked the confession. he;s not just cute but damn cheesy as well😆 aww i would love to write more aswell😳

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani