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Killer

@Hello_01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

👏👏👏👏👏👏

Heyy😃!!

Words are less for me to describe how beautifully you potrayed everything. it felt so perfect to be true.😃 I mean, as if i was just travelling along with them and viewing every scene that you penned down. Seriously, Gal - you have got a talent... and every little thing that you mentioned fitted so perfectly😊, sooo beautifully⭐️.

i wish to be that woooden girl "Riddhima"- saved by a boy - Arman 😆😆 Oh Lord, you have made me your fan !! i can't tell you how much i have loved this particular OS .... i demand you to right more😃, of this sort.... Ahhh .... i can't stop smiling at this perfect fairy tale.... my jaw hurts dude! 😆 uh see i Blabbering nonsense but i have to tell you that you were Marvelous!! so you get it right😆? should i describe more that how good you were😆😆

Awsome, fantabulas piece of Work!!

write again ASP!

Thanks for the Pm

Love Maha😳.

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anushkajain

@anushkajain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

👏 ⭐️ 👏 AWESOME👏 ⭐️ 👏

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: -Sary-
Your concept sounds intriguing and different so I shall read LOL I will edit after I read =) BTW the longer the OS, the better <3

Edited -

Ok I loved the OS LOL the concept was really different and was handled well :) The whole thing of Armaan meeting her and saving her was so dream-like and I am truly a sucker for those kinds of stories. I love how their love story progressed <3

"miss Riddhima who just got a new life. Will be my girlfriend? Then after a few years my wife? And then after a few years the mother of my kids and then after a few yea'" I locked his mouth with mines before he could finish his long rant.

That part was so cute <3333 I could clearly picture it *sigh* Keep writing more :)

thanks man. i was so confused to whether post this os or not, cuz i wasn't sure if i handed the concept well.

aww thank you for the praises. even i love fairytales😆

love

sani

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sweety7395
hey i really liked the concept of the os
it was really good

am glad u likes the concept. that was the main bit

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: swetha10
amazing OS...

thank you for the praises

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: hunder

good

i love you kam akkal. even when ur angry with me, you can't stop helping me😆 aapke andar ka bhai apne aap ko rok nahi sakta😆 love u bhai itnaaaaaaaaa sara and even when ur angry with me. maaf kar dona bhaiiiiiiiiiii

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

kneeduh2000- thanks for praising my writing skills man. LOL made me happy.

here-i-am- thank you

sweety_ursh- thank you and sorry for the longness 😆

shristi sarda - aww thanks for ur chweet comments aswell😆

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG
awesome
:)

than you :)

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: kajen
i can't believe such things still happen in this modern era

i mean a fatehr chopping his daughter's head n people are praising him

its gross

i felt really bad after reading about aliyah's death n rihana aka ridhima tale was like a fairy tale

sweeet n lovy dovy

i loved d the whole concept

n d way u wrote made it more amazing

just loved it

luv

aarti

p.s-even i want a dictionary like ridhima to praise u 😆

okay ur comment made me laugh then blush.😳😆

yeah that father chopping daughter's head story is true. so stuff like that do happen. seriously it's gross but some people just follow their customs in the name of religion.😡

haha the love story was quite lovey dovy

about the dictionary, that was so sweet of u man. love u

love

sani

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: shreyshrey
amazing os.....
u should really write more of these os' with a social awareness message...

it was great!

love

shreya

sure bbz, am always interested in crime and writing stuff on these social problems.

thank you