Escaping the hell (AR OS) DT NOTE: Page 22 - Page 3

sani beautiful one shot.

Edited*😛

hey my sexy churel kamini jannemaan of heaven princess🤗

OMG!!!😲😲....Firstly i got a HUGE shock after i saw U wrote a oneshot😲
And second shock i got when i finish reading this Oneshot...😃
it was Heavenly awesome man👏👏
I am telling u..This is the BESTESTESTESTEST oneshot i ever read😃
I am lack of words right now but hope u can understand my feelings my kamini jannemaan😉
I loved the way u protrait the condition of Girls Early marriage😳
This is a wrong practice and The riddhima of ur OS reflects it Damn awesomely👏👏
And How her Dad Killed her Big sis was like DAMN man..😡
How could a father do that with her Own child😡
I got emotional in that Part...😭
And then came our superman Armaan to the rescue😉
OMG!!!...he was BEYOND DESCRIPTION😍
When he stepped in I was feeling like Finding water in a desert...exactly like riddhima😳😳
And how he saved her was out of the World😛
And i love riddhima's inner mind talkings😆😆
Above all I LOVE EVERY BIT OF THIS ONESHOT😃
And i LOVE u even more for writing an awesome oneshot like this😃
Hats off to u Jannemaan....⭐️⭐️
Thanks for the PM

love you
Prinzu😳

m so glad u wrote this one shot sani...n there is nothing to be taken in racist way...its all about humanity u see...even some of the indian villages have child marriage n all....and thats so not right...if sumthing terribly inhuman is happening in our society we have the right to voice against it...n this os is sumthing i truely love...with all my heart! 👏

n here comes the famous "m elder so m always right" mentality...gawd...seriously...i dun understand y elders tend to think that way...just coz we r kids doesn't mean we will always be wrong...and the relatives well...they just wana have fun of wtv is going on...sumtimes i wonder y our parents get so much affected by wat others r saying...coz all of us knw...that for them its just another drama...not like they really care!

he actually killed his own daughter just coz some shyty things others had to say? Just coz it hurt his male ego? I can't believe hw any1 can be this heartless. Not even a bit of regret or sorrow for wat he did? And the others were cheering n clapping? Whoa…cool….all these ppl do they even know wat they are dng? God ya Allah won't ever forgive such ppl…!! :|

Riddhima was lucky enough to be saved from this torture…all this can be changed…women can live their life the way they want to only if all women come together to fight against the injustice against them. They say na..god helps those who help themselves. 😊

And lastly…the way armaan supported her…took her out of the mess…was really touching…keep writing such beautiful one shots sani! 👏 👏 😃

Loads of love!
take care!
aditi!

awesome os...........too good.....👏👏
nd d concept is just fab....👏👏
i hate dat such things still happen in this
modern era..😡🤢
but i knw these things still happens.......😲
nd i so wnt to kill riddhima's dad.......😡
i mean a father chopping his daughter's head n people are praising him...mentally sick people....🤢😕
rihana aka ridhima nd armaan love was like a fairy tale in ur os........😳😛
sweeet n beautiful............😛
i loved d the whole concept
n d way u wrote made it more amazing
just loved it...............😛

Hey i loved the OS... poor Riddhima she had to go through so much i seriously cn't imagine how parents cn think or treat ther kids like this... n omg wen he killed his elder daughter i was really in tears even i read a lot of stuff like this n it seriously breaks my heart thinking how cruel n inhuman cn some people be... n trust me u wrote the whole thing very nicely...

Hey ! Thanks for the PM !

awesome os
loved it
loved the concept
fab work
beautifully written
thanks 4 da pm

hey amazing OS sweety i never ever read this kind of OS ,that was sooooooooo amazing

sani...im at lost for words....i dont know how to leave the long comment u wanted...im overwhelmed with emotions...just one thing...you're amazing :]