Escaping the hell (AR OS) DT NOTE: Page 22 - Page 7

A very nice OS.
I feel so bad for Aliyah.Such a heartless father.
I really loved the way AR met and their journey began.
I loved this OS a lot.
Very well written.Well done.
Plz come up with more ffs in future.
love Asma

that was simply awsum.....

loved the way u wrote........

fantastic...

n its a fact...in remote areas of...not only in pakistan...its in india as well...n i guess more then pak its common practice in india....... "no offensive guys...a simple fact...im indian myself......but its true..."

n it should be stopped.........

just loved it.........

beautiful end.........

thnx for the pm........

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G

You write such a fabulous OS and then keep your expectations high for a long comment. Which world do you come from, ma'am? Seriously girl, I am beyond speechless. I don't have the perfect words to say what message this OS has spread out. I have like so much to comment about but words just fall short to explain them. Twinzy firstly I am super surprised to see a pm related to your OS waiting for me in my in-box because I really didn't expect you to write one until January. Is this my New Year gift? (It better be😆).

Anyways, coming back to the OS. Hun, not only have you written an OS this time but as well spread out a message to all. I don't understand why it seemed to you that it could be racist - Because it's not at all. I feel really sorry to know that these sort of inhuman tortures still exist but no wonder it is a bitter truth. It definitely is a very touchy topic but yet you have written it so genuinely - you are for sure a very talented writer. You started the OS with such a topic that could have ended up hurting people if not written in a proper way but when I read your writing I must say that it has been written perfectly. Not only have you spread a nice message out there to people but as well proved that if people choose the right track, some life can as well end in a fairytale. Yes, it was no less than a fairytale.

Remember while chatting, you weren't sure if you ended the story well and you wanted to know what I thought about it? Twinzy, I believe this was a wonderful ending.

I love your writing skills but I love you more 😛❤️

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Nice OS....loved the way u describe everything ...

Amazing

i can't believe the father actually killed hi 16 year daughter


thanx 4 the pm

update soon


Kamal

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

Amazing

i can't believe the father actually killed hi 16 year daughter


thanx 4 the pm

update soon


Kamal

you know am so glad that first time u wrote something diff on ur comments😃

oyehoyye killer OS
Wen i started reading i was lyk itne emotional itne sad OS YEH sani hi writer hai kya i was expecting koi comedy type hogi isko kya hua yaar i was abt to quit then i thought ammy ki entry tak dekhte hu then came sTUPID MORON KHOTA ur signature
Awesummm os dear

Originally posted by: zara-20k

oyehoyye killer OS
Wen i started reading i was lyk itne emotional itne sad OS YEH sani hi writer hai kya i was expecting koi comedy type hogi isko kya hua yaar i was abt to quit then i thought ammy ki entry tak dekhte hu then came sTUPID MORON KHOTA ur signature
Awesummm os dear

oye hoye sani par bharosa to rakhti yaar😆 well jab mein kuch serious topic par likhne behti hu tab i so get into it but u know as am sani and couldn't help but put some stupid moron in it.😆