FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03

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afsha

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Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#441

That was really awesum

Loved her opening n their romance

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t-mayur-sajan-j

@t-mayur-sajan-j

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Posted: 14 years ago

#442

Hey hasini
amazing update
love how geet is opening up to maan
but what cud it be tht is bothering maan
anway loved it u wrote so well
wonderful
jasmin

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JayaR

@JayaR

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Posted: 14 years ago

#443

wow....
beautiful update........
d way u described their moments was amazing......

brilliant work..... I loved it.....

N yes im following your blog....eagerly waiting for more of ur OS's......

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puth

@puth

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Posted: 14 years ago

#444

awesome update Hasini....
you write so well that i can feel the emotions in maan and geet place while reading the monologues....

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#445

wow my dear i'm speechles

This I did not expect. I was very much in the mood to play and toy with her more, but as I saw her undress herself in my presence, as she ran towards the shower, I was overtaken by my primal cravings. Everything disappeared; the rooms, the walls, the plate of peaches on the counter, even the meal that she had prepared, which my grumbling stomach would easily devour, and now...there were different hungers. As I advanced to follow her into the bedroom and then to the bathroom, her silhouette framed my mind; her ever so delicate and slender figure, exhibited a physical carnival in my eyes.

love that part that was beautiful V gift

my dear it was worth of wait yu paid off

ur really damn excellent writer

magnificent update pls cont

soonnnnn thanks pm

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#446

Yay!!! 🥳 Finally, New York Times update😊

Thank you😊

Beautiful update.

Beautifully portrayed emotions with Geet being more open of her feelings, her wants to the man she loves so much. And how Geet has the power in her which makes Maan forgets all his worries. She is truly His Mishti.

Enjoyed reading it though I was expecting that you'd clear Maan's turmoil to us, the truth which made Maan to go through a series of emotions on his trip, in this update. I am too curious to know what is it. I hope the next update throws some light on this.

And you aren't getting banned. It was pretty decent😊

BTW Belated Happy Valentine's Day😊

P.S. Please don't make us wait for too long for the next update😳

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#447

Hasini,

Loved the update......

I will write more in a few days, currently busy with applications......ufff..

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#448

Hasini.....I felt like calling u Lily...cus of ur post on V-day.

As soon as I read stairway to heaven title......for some reason I could only think of Jack n Beanstalk. I just could not picture regular stairs, steps etc. I could just think of a tree with its leaves.....

The leaves n branches being the steps....

The steps are a journey ...which in the present time is never ending.

The journey is to its destination.

Is heaven the destination?

The destination will only arrive when it is the right moment, when it feels right and what that moment will come is a question mark?

How does a person know what their destination is?

What if you find something on the way to destination?

Then what happens? Do u stop there or u carry forward to what u thought the actual destination is?

M I making any sense? I have no idea. 😕

Edited by Water. - 14 years ago

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Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#449

That was plain beautiful! You described it all so nicely......lovely! Finally, Geet spoke those words.....shared her guilt of not letting him speak and he removed all of it so lovingly. Loved their playfulness in the beginning and their desire for each other towards the end.....always wanting to bask in each other's love and warmth. Awesome! The last lines.....they were superb! It was just WOW!! Do continue soon.