FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: maaneet2010

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A simple " I will always be there for you whisper in my ears"

My love, leave yourself behind
Beat inside me, leave you blind
My love, you have found peace
You were searching for release

You gave it all, into the call
You took a chance and
You took a fall for us

You came thoughtfully, loved me faithfully
You taught me honor, you did it for me

Tonight you will sleep for good
You will wait for me my love

Now I am strong (Now I am strong)
You gave me all
You gave all you had and now I am home

My love, leave yourself behind
Beat inside me, leave you blind
My love, look what you can do
I am mending, I'll be with you

You took my hand added a plan
You gave me your heart
I asked you to dance with me

You loved honestly
Did what you could release
Aaaahhh oooh

I know you're pleased to go
I won't relieve this love

Now I am strong (Now I am strong)
You gave me all
You gave all you had and now I am home

My love, leave yourself behind
Beat inside me, I'll be with you
Oooooohh ooooh
Du du du ooooooh

Kia Ora ,
AJ 😍

A silent whisper...to me is a sweet ball.

I dance in there...still and strong.

As you say...company would be nice...

But all you know...I can only hope with strife

Leave yourself behind and sway

Forever in my gaze...

I shall lock you away...

to live only in my mind....

with walls of clay...

They melt and fly as your fondness rains today.

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Dhrashtee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#422

wow... update after such a long time!!!.... i m off to read it now. pls also update the rooftop soon....

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Uthra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#423

Beautiul, no thats less, awesome, fabulous? I am sure more appropriate words do exist to describe your work. I am wondering how long is it going to be till whats' bothering Maan would be revealed.

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: Viji79
Beautiul, no thats less, awesome, fabulous? I am sure more appropriate words do exist to describe your work. I am wondering how long is it going to be till whats' bothering Maan would be revealed.

Thanks for the comment.

Not sure if you know my fascination with numbers, the big busters are always for round, even numbers.

70 is coming...

Also I think I had answered to Rachana in a post saying Maan's kashmakash is for the part next to their honeymoon...So there you go.

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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#425

loved it...loved it...loved it....👏

the words with which u potrayed were amazing.....🤗

no mesmerizing....👍🏼

as for the song...it is one of the most beautiful n everlasting song....one of my fav too....n is always in my mobile....😃

loved it....

it is one of the most sensual update of an FF...(of atleast those i've read...😆)....

waiting for the next part....which hoping u wud update soon...as in at least 2-3 weeks...😉

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
loved it...loved it...loved it....👏
the words with which u potrayed were amazing.....🤗
no mesmerizing....👍🏼
as for the song...it is one of the most beautiful n everlasting song....one of my fav too....n is always in my mobile....😃
loved it....
it is one of the most sensual update of an FF...(of atleast those i've read...😆)....
waiting for the next part....which hoping u wud update soon...as in at least 2-3 weeks...😉

Thank you for your comment.

I'm just going to take that last line silently....seriously.. I only started this last night...wrote some 500 words and closed it. Couldnt take the sensuality...trust me. LOL 😆

So I pulled an all nighter today and finished it to my own surprise.

Will be crashing now...

The upcoming parts are so much more easier...As I mentioned shorter ones....so there you go...hopefully the next one will not take 2-3 weeks.

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Audiwalia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#427

I hope u r kidding abt banned thing.....ryt I have a pathetic sense of humor!!! Don't worry they won't banned u 4r writting dis part i think u never read My dark lover, khamoshi nd many more.....lol... Anyways regarding updation *ahem*ahem* finally!!!!! Wat eles i could say...... Very written part.....

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

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Posted: 14 years ago

#428

beautiful part!..

i just loved it!

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punjabi.princes

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Posted: 14 years ago

#429

omg an update!!

awesome part

loved it

con't soon

and please update chandni rooftop soon too plz:)

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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#430

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Thank you for your comment.

I'm just going to take that last line silently....seriously.. I only started this last night...wrote some 500 words and closed it. Couldnt take the sensuality...trust me. LOL 😆
So I pulled an all nighter today and finished it to my own surprise.
Will be crashing now...
The upcoming parts are so much more easier...As I mentioned shorter ones....so there you go...hopefully the next one will not take 2-3 weeks.

u go take some rest...

after all we dont want to wait for long for the next updated of this as well as the other FF....😃

Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago