FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#461

tat was a flawless update....loved it

u have chosen the right phrase and sentence effortlessly to bring out the right emotions.....

loved the new geet..the way she opened up herself

nd how maan carried away her from all her turmoil was so loving!!!

actually I was expecting that you'd clear Maan's turmoil,which made him to go through a series of emotions on their trip........but u came up with this,i'm so happy!!!!!!!!!!

I'm waiting curiously to know wats disturbing him,hope u would clear this in the next update.

BTW,the forum won't ban ur account

coz u have portrayed it beautifully,words are less to express it!!

Ur literature skills really works here.

Dia

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maaneet2010

@maaneet2010

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#462

I could only read half of the part as I am @ work 😭.😳 i wil come bak in the evenin read it and give my comments ..... 😉😉

AJ

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maaneet2010

@maaneet2010

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#463

@ Dear Pal : As always I am out of words . So from now on I would update some beautiful and apt songs after every part. After all some one has said " "Music speaks what cannot be expressed, soothes the mind and gives it rest, heals the heart and makes it whole, flows from heaven to the soul."

Let music speak for me what I would like to tell about your story.......

Kia Ora,

For Part 69 : Bring Me to Life .....

How can you see into my eyes like open doors

leading you down into my core

where I've become so numb without a soul my spirit sleeping somewhere cold

until you find it there and lead it back home

(Wake me up)

Wake me up inside

(I can't wake up)

Wake me up inside

(Save me)

call my name and save me from the dark

(Wake me up)

bid my blood to run

(I can't wake up)

before I come undone

(Save me)

save me from the nothing I've become

now that I know what I'm without

you can't just leave me

breathe into me and make me real

bring me to life

(Wake me up)

Wake me up inside

(I can't wake up)

Wake me up inside

(Save me)

call my name and save me from the dark

(Wake me up)

bid my blood to run

(I can't wake up)

before I come undone

(Save me)

save me from the nothing I've become

Bring me to life

(I've been living a lie, there's nothing inside)

Bring me to life

frozen inside without your touch without your love darling only you are the life among the dead

all this time I can't believe I couldn't see

kept in the dark but you were there in front of me

I've been sleeping a thousand years it seems

got to open my eyes to everything

without a thought without a voice without a soul

don't let me die here

there must be something more

bring me to life

(Wake me up)

Wake me up inside

(I can't wake up)

Wake me up inside

(Save me)

call my name and save me from the dark

(Wake me up)

bid my blood to run

(I can't wake up)

before I come undone

(Save me)

save me from the nothing I've become

(Bring me to life)

I've been living a lie, there's nothing inside

(Bring me to life)

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maaneet2010

@maaneet2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#464

You have very beautifully described each and every emotion going through the eyes of Maan. For example " liquid dull grey that was leaving his eyes" , "Perhaps seeing me read much in his eyes, the nascent moment died, " etc..,.

This made me think ......

Eyes - The most beautiful organ created by God. An organ that tells truth that is as clear as water. Eyes speaks volumes which the lips cannot utter. Eyes are the mirror of a person's soul .

Is it possible for us to know the true nature of a person just by looking inside his/her eyes? Can we really see the shades of color changing in ones eye in different emotions ? Do the eyes give out the right answer to any question that may remain unanswered by the mouth ?

Have you (i.e readers of NYT) experienced the power of reading minds just by looking into the eyes of someone ?

(these questions may sound silly when taken in a literal sense. But when you look at those questions in a deeper manner, u will understand that there is a far greater thought attached to it)

Ps: I can still remember the twinkle in the eyes of a best friend 😉😉

Cheers,

Edited by maaneet2010 - 14 years ago

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#465

Wow another amazingly written update and the title of this chapter was spot on and like how geet opened up to him in the moment of passion she told him somrhing that she kept inside her something she was shy to tell or more thought she was selfish but when she voice it maan felt so content that she shared the same desire as him and made him fall deeper in love with her, I liked the payal scene it was sweetly romantic and geet surrendered herself to maan telling him she wanted him as much as him making a equal balance in their relationship and liked the end part where geet was describing the aftermath where they both sat serene and watched the night sky anuways another great update di and can't wait to read more 😊

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mishtib

@mishtib

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#466

hey
nice ff
it took me 4 days to read ur ff
plse add me to ur pm list
and update fast
well wriiten

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Maria

@JRia

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#467

Hi Hansini,

loved ur update dear

enjoyed it a lot

do continue writing such an extraordinary stuff

do continue soon

take care

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katmaan

@katmaan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#468

hiie pls update soon as i m missing nytimes

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#469

To whom I owe the leaping delight
That quickens my senses in our wakingtime
And the rhythm that governs the repose of our sleepingtime,
The breathing in unison

Of lovers whose bodies smell of each other
Who think the same thoughts without need of speech
And babble the same speech without need of meaning.

No peevish winter wind shall chill
No sullen tropic sun shall wither
The roses in the rose-garden which is ours and ours only

But this dedication is for others to read:
These are private words addressed to you in public.

just for you cause only you know who u are....