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Posted: 14 years ago
Thx for the TEA muskaan,
but i am waiting for ur breakfast treat (upate)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

ME READY WITH COFFEE/TEA &

ke garam garam jalebiyaan!!!!!



Yayyyyy...Yippiiie U r here..
Wow Jalebiss
Yummyyyyy Cant wait..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

ME READY WITH COFFEE/TEA &

ke garam garam jalebiyaan!!!!!



yummy yummy jalebi's 😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Loved the update!!!!!!!!!!!
God I just love Geets possesiveness,
her dominance,
Loved the Maaneet moment too,
Maan in so much under control, well yeh bohot zaroori hai,
Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar..w aiting for the update to step out 😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 68

They checked out early morning from the hotel after paying a fortune for all the damages she
had caused to the hotel properties. She smiled naughtily looking at the bill & maans reaction
to the embarrassment. He was least bothered about the bill but the staffs second look to the
broken things was really pissing him off. He was just getting to know his lady loves tantrums.
Very unlikely of Maan Singh Khurana to put up with all this but he did.
They boarded the flight. She sat cuddled up to him taking the spread on them. She was bit
tired & dossed off. Maan looked into his laptop catching up with some work. after they reached delhi, he dropped her home & went to office. She was thrilled about her selection in the army.
She threw a party in the disc at night. Maan was never into discs. He said he will join late.
Prem came along with mukti. Armaan joined with ridz. Raj & geet went from home.
They danced & danced & nibbled into the snacks. She was really happy on top of the world
She had whatever she wanted from her life, her love, her dream job, her best friends
Anybody who saw her today would envy her life. Probably truly magical it was.
Maan joined her really late. She sat holding his hand. While prem-mukti ; armaan-ridz danced
Raj was busy with his drinks.
Maan slowly kissed her head - khush ho na? she nodded & rested her head on his arms.
Prem - when is your training starting?
Geet - next month.
Mukti - so u guys will get engaged before that?
Geet & maan looked at each other in confusion
Geet - nahi , why should we?
Maan smiled at her confidence in him.
Geet - we never planned anything like that yet. Waise bhi woh sab mama, papa aur daadi
fix karenge hum thodi karenge
he held her closer to him sideways & kissed her hand.
Ridz - that's so sweet, I really like this attitude of yours.
Armaan teasingly - agar papa ne mana kar diya tho?
Geet - woh inki problem hain, meri nahi
Mukti curiously - kya matlab?
Maan cleared his throat - iska matlab hain, ki papaji ko mujhe manana padega
She smiles
Raj - that should not difficult for Maan Singh Khurana
Mukti - atleast get engaged now.
Geet was not prepared for all that nor was maan. Not like they didn't want to, but
it was never in their agenda. They were more interested in each other. Their new realized love.
They probably have not even expressed it to each other yet.
Their silence was strange all of them looked at them wondering what they were planning.
Raj - just leave them alone. I guess they know what they.
They moved on to have dinner. Geet & maan were little confused.
Maan wondered if she wanted an engagement or any commitment from him. Was his silence
hurting her in any way. She wondered if maan wanted any engagement. Off course he was settled probably wanted to marry soon with family & hear she is running behind a career that would definitely delay their future plans by at least couple of years. She didn't know anything
they never spoke or discussed anything of such sought. both of them had their dinner worried & confused about each others feelings.

She kissed goodbye to everyone.
Raj was still with his drink.
Maan came next to him looking lost.
Raj - talk to her. Maan hugged him.
Geet to raj - challen
Raj - tum logo ka bye bye hogaya?
They looked at each other feeling odd
Raj looked at maan - I will wait at the gate, after finishing my drink. Take your time & hurry up
Geet hugged him & went with maan.
They sat in the car & were not sure what to expect or what to say. She rarely expressed herself
to him in words. He has always spoken his heart to her but they never discussed anything.
The silence was eating them further. Feeling probably the other person is hurt or feeling how could they fail each other or not understand each other.
Maan & geet together - woh
Maan - tum kaho
Geet - nahi aap kahiye
Both of them where quiet again.
She really looked nervous like suddenly she feared losing him. He read her restlessness.
He slipped his hand over hers that was resting on her lap.
Maan - I never gave it a thought.
She looked at him shocked more questioning him thought what
Maan - I just saw you the other day & everything just happened bringing us closer & closer I am still not thinking actually I am never able to think or plan anything with you around. My life just seems revolving around you. Mujhe aur kuch sujtha hi nahi. Tum as pass rahthi ho tho mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiya.
He just hugged her. Tumhare saath ka yah ehsaas mujhe tumhara deewana kardetha hain. She held him closer. Waise bhi shaadi aur engagement sab tho ghar wale decide karte hain na, how can we.. he leaned in & kissed her falling in love with her all over again. I really want you to be happy with whatever you do.
Geet - I will be happy na..this is my dream job!!!
Maan - personally I still feel you should consider joining me
She hits his chest. aapko aise kyun lagta ki I should join you.
Maan - so that you can boss around me
She snaps away - acha so now you feel I boss around you?
Maan - aur kya karti ho!!! Meeting chal raha hoga bus aajavoghi gussmain,
bina kuch sune bina kuch dehke
she makes a face - woh tho aap phone nahi answere karte tho.. umm' nahi aavoonghi aab se
he pulls her back into his arms - main tho chatha hoon tum humesha aise hi aavoo
she turns away. He pulls her closer again - main tho humesha tumhe pass bulata hoon
tum hi door jati rahti ho.
Raj calls on geets phone
Geet - I will be there in few minutes
Raj smiles & keeps the phone
Maan drops her at the hawali - good night
Geet - thanks
He narrows is eyebrows - kiske liya?
She kisses his nose - for being mine bachan
maan - I actually missed you calling me that

precap
geet leaving to OTA - officers' training Academy

-NEXT PART 69-
(usually after SSB the training program is scheduled after 6months..I just changed it here to suit my truly magical... )
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments. Really love reading them
please do keep commenting.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
NOTE OF THANKS TO ALL THE READERS & COMMENTS FROM MUSKAN
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123pritha;
thanxs a lot thats really sweet of u
will be updating soon paka promise
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humz_786 -Lovely update baji!! ---thanxs a lot
Yaaaay Geet and Maan have made up!! ---sweet na
Loved Geet's possessiveness over Maan ---really possessive...bring problem
Geet and Maan are ahem getting quite close now---really close..umm..wait for future track
it was funny how Maan said he might not be able to control himself !! --he he
Can't wait to read next update baji!! ---let me first reply to every one ..then shall update
Thanks for the pm !! --welcome deary
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misbah92 - wow wow wow lovely update
loved the possessiveness
ahem maan and geet getting closer
di when are you planing for there marriage ?
plz be mercy on Maan us becharay sai control nahi horaha hehehehehehehehehehe
do update soon
muskan - wait deary geet is really going to get more possessive
true they are getting really close, kya karen situation aise hain
seriously bechara maan..thanxsbabes
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shreyabhra -wow Geet n Maan cuming close......wanting more!!!!!! wat wld happen wen Geet
wld move out for training!!!!!!! dono pagal ho jayenge!!!!!
muskan - very true dono hi pagal ho jayenge..boo😭😭
phir mera story ka kya hoga!!!
thanxs a lot sweet heart
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shivangi783 - welcome back deary ..missed u😳
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bpinky - sorry dear i ws nt able to comment early...bt i really lovd last two parts
66 n 67...they r very nice...i lovd reading them n i hv read dem more then thrice...
they r too gud dear....wht the hell sameera ws doing in maan's room???
stupid does nt knw manners n enterd in his room vry late n bcs of tht
our maan n geet hd to go through this much... bt i really like maan's
patience n maturity to handle over possessive geet....maan is such a darling...
lovd the way he jst handled her n he knew it tht she vl react like this whn
she vl get to knw n den also he told her abt sam...wow....wht a sincere n l
oyal person.. n i jst rememberd one song frm old hindi movie dnt knw it's
name bt song is like this - pyar me kabhi kabhi aisa ho jata he, chhoti si
bat ka phasana ban jata he...here sam coming to maan's room ws nt such a
big issue bt knwng geet v all knw she vl react abt it..n it happend...
bt i really lovd the way they both were claiming to eachothr im only
yours n u r only mine....maan said in mall tht geet u r nt othr person,
u r MSK's GF n u r only mine...n the same thing geet told him in room,
u r only mine n i cant bare to see any one coming close to u or evn watchng u,
n claimed aap sirf mere ho...n maan also said tht i m only yours...wow...awesome....
i really loved these two parts...plz updt soon dear...
muskan - that is magical how they keep claiming each other without even
actually saying those words yet to each other
perfect song selection dear..pyar main kabhi kabhi aise ho jatha hain
wonderful..so sweet. loved all you comments & views very much appriciated
thanxs a million
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anu_luv_maan - Oh so hot haan...
geet nd maan both r extreme possessive for each other
and i love it ......OMG !!!! this possessiveness she knws he wont cheat
her bt still cant see any1 arnd him .......awesum update ........
back to delhi ? so wen wud geet join ssb permanent ??
muskan - thanxs arrey yaar blore in this weather..geet & maan alone umm
kuch tho hona tha na..nahi tho u all would have killed me
geet joining SSB u will know soon...boo...😭
thaxs annu..love u deary
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whitepearl -Hi muskaan .....How can someone be such an amazing writer.---muskan blushing!!!
I like Maaneet comfort level in particular. They both know that the attraction
between them is is turning more physical now yet they have defined their
limitations...That is very sweet. I am so glad they are no embarrassing
moments between them...just accepting confessions.....Great work dear
muskan - thats the way it is with most of us now days na..we kind of understand
try to control knowing the limitation that holds us back..some times losing it
all together...hee hee..thanxs a lot deary
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ammu5 - pm list updated...deary
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Navpreet -awesome update!
loved d way she got so possessive about him....
really sweet n then in geet's room....geez.......tatz wz too good
they nearly lost it.....but maan realised it....
nice update
update soon!
muskan - thanxs a lot navpreet
yah I know they almost lost it..
naughty naughty..guys..
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naddiya26- where are u sweet heart??
thanxs for commenting!! blaogging really i get bored he he..
bt grt idea tum kardena he he
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LAXMI005 - Dear Muskan,
Thank you for the wonderful updates.
Both TRULY MAGICAL N DEEWANAGI are awesome.
and khamooshi is simple superb...
but the updates are slow.
If possible plz post the updates of all the 3 at once in the morning.
My morning coffee is incomplete with out reading u r updates.
muskan - thanxs a lot deary
thats really sweet of you.
glad you like them all
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vantu12 -Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....
Maan u r such a darling...........Bechaara...
talking as Edward Talked to Bella Initially -- kay kare geet ne use behaal jo kar rakha hain
really........
GEET is MAAN's personal brand of HEROIN........TRUE driving him insane
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mamon.moon - thanxs a lot..I know she can really drive him
nuts..now delhi main..tho.umm.umm
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radiant_raisa - WOW!!
That was intensely passionate yaar..why am I getting the feeling something is gonna take place soon I just loved Geet's possessiveness..wonder what she's gonna do when she see Sameera again I don't think I want to further imagine
Thanks so much for the great update Di!
Loved it
muskan - arrey yaar negative feel mat de..kuch nahi hone wala hain
cute cute romantice couple hain..
thanxs a lot just kidding...loved it a lot
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MaansMishti - Beautiful update Muskan....dekha maine kaha na ki Geet maanjayogi
.....I'm glad they finally made up and aww Maan is so sweet he said sorry
for not controlling himself....aise ladke ab kaha mitle hai yaar! LOL....
Oh they're going back to Delhi so soon....its okk as long as their
cute scenes continue ....PLZ continue soon!
muskan - MSK nice hain na..he said sorry !!!
woh naraz kanha thi woh tho uska possessiveness tha
jab naraz hogi tab dehkna...he he
thanxs a lot darling
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SimplyAparajita-Haha di... Poor maan... .i Pity his condition..
Geet bhi na unknowingly bechare ki durgati kharab kar deti hai..
Poor maan.. How to make his idiot geet understand that she is nt a
baby that will sit on his lap and he will cradle her..
Haha wo bachi hai... :) :) awesome rocking update di... Waiting for next part...
muskan - geet bhi na uff sachi main aise kargi tho maan ka kya hoga
poor fellow...I just love his plight
thanxs a dear
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-sofiya-thanxs for the mindblowing appreciation
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acjanfeb1- thanks muski.
eventhough i enjoyed the passion i had a fear they may not control and will
give away.but maan is such adorable guy.stopped at right time. loved it.
i many people whats wrong before marriage. but somewhere i feel sancity of marraige is destroyed.
once again thanks muski you made my day.
muskan - thanxs thanxs you...
personally I believe u love that person..then it is upto them to decide their
comfart levels. but this tho is truly magical...so the magic part will
bring them together...wink wink😉😉
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komlika , maanmishti,Rocks.Dhara ...
actually welcome to chat while waiting for the update
muskan won't burn u rather would join u he he..lekin
phir update late hojage ..& u all will burn me alive
..😳
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coolkuddi- can't effort to lose the character...
they are the life line na..!!😳
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lilindiangurl13 - geets dad.😲.why do u want to invovle him
in this now...abhi th bahut deer hain
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faby - yaar muski...
great one as always dear...
will comment in details later as I am rushing out to Bank .. will come back and write..
btw, I have one doubt.. sending PM
muskan - still waiting for the detailed comment
naughty u..replied ur PM..wink wink😉😉
thanxs a lot deary
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Anu_sajan4ever - not killing yaar..just a teaser..bhi tho picture
bhaki hain mera yaar..he he..thanxa a lot
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maangeetcrazy - thanxs waiting & joining me with the coffee & cookies
glad u loved the update...
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aleena - thansx a lot for all the smiles...so cute!!!

very true maan usse ulti pati patah raha hai😆😆😆
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thanxs a lot for all your support & love
shall try to reply to all the comments when ever possible
.muskan kare bhi tho kya kare😳😳😳
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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again first to comment.......anyways loved the update muskan.....i was waiting for the update.....i loved raj and maan bonding.........loved how they understood each other well......even i missed geet calling him bachan😭.......want them to be together and lively like this.......update soon muskan.....love u 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Updateee..
Loved ittt....
No Maaneet Mangni or shaadi yet?
Hehe No problem wanna see some more of Romance between themm lol
Gr8 update muskii
Aww missed Geet calling Maan Bacchan..
Sooo cute
Loved it totally
Cant wait for the next part
Update soon!:)

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it ...maan is so understanding but y cant talk with their family and have a engagement party before geet leaves for the training ??it ll be more fun ..

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