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avem thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
now i m craving for halwa and cake i m so stressed out
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

muski updating with tears...😭

geet going to OTA😭
coffee/tea..lots of sweets to make me to feel better..muski depressed
writting this part!!!!😭
maaneetcrazy, ambbiah, thanxs a for waiting
faby halwa for u...cake/ice-cream for lilindiangurl13


sorry honey just burnt 750 calories in gym.....cant eat this.....but they look yummy muskan......love u sweety🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey mushki....pls pls pls update khamoshi as welll.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
im loving the cake and the ice-cream.... by the way im roshni....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

hey mushki....pls pls pls update khamoshi as welll.....

thanks for saying that i was thinking the same thing plz mushki update khamoshi too
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

hey mushki....pls pls pls update khamoshi as welll.....


whatz up honey?how r u?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: avem

thanks for saying that i was thinking the same thing plz mushki update khamoshi too



yeah dear m missing khamoshi desperately.........pls pls mushki do somthing yaar...😭

by the way m pratima and can i no ur name ???
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 69

geet went back home & hugged rano & kissed her
she was really very & thrilled. the whole next week she spend shopping &
getting herself ready to move to OTA. college paper work, her documentation
clearance from all the places. she rarely attended any classes
she had applied for TC & certificates from college.
maan was getting cranky & stressed as the time of her going was nearing.

rano came to her room latter at night, she was talking to maan
geet whispers - mama hain ek min
rano kisses her head - tum khus ho na?
geet - ji mama
rano - are you really going go away in few weeks?
geet - mama aise kyun bol rahen ho. it is just a training for 6months
rano - do you realize what it means?
maan smiled at ranos concern
rano - bachan se baat huwai tumhari?
geet hid the phone - ji?
maan was curious
rano - nahi mera matlab hain does maan know about ur OTA?
geet - MAMA!! yeh kaise sawal hain actually feeling shy & nice
but not able to confess herself.
geet - sabko pata hain
rano - unhe koi problem nahi?
geet - mama, kisi ko koi problem nahi hain, bus abhi aap problem mat
create karo
rano - do you really want to do all this, I mean kya zarorat hain
maan shook his head in agreement with rano
rano - daadi ko pata hain?
maan smiled..haan baba sab ko pata hain
geet - yeh lejiye aap khud hi maan se poch le jiye
rano - nahi nahi .. good night kisses her head & goes out
maan almost skipped a beat.
geet giggles - mama chali gaye
maan - tum mama ko itna pareshan kyun karti ho
geet - aacha ji, aab aap ko yeh bhi problem hain.
he smiled teasingly
geet - don't worry I won't bother you, once I am in OTA.
maan was really hurt. he cut the call & went to his gym.
she kept calling him he didn't answere.
it was a week since maan had not spoken to geet now. she tried to reach him
in his office, home every where. she barged into his office he didn't
speak to her, he just walked away from there. geet completly broke down
her preparation, her packing everything came to a stand still.
maan was furious, more upset that she didn't understand how difficult
it was for him to part from her. she kept calling he didn't answer her calls
she messaged he didn't reply to them. another 7 days had passed.

5.30am she sneaks into his gym. he was dressed in his tracks
he had been working out angrily for an hr now
geet - main mazak kar rahi thi
he presses her againt the wall with all his anger
tumhe har baat mazak lagti hain, you never try to understand anyone elses feeling
geet - lekin
he pushes her harder on the wall hitting his hand on the wall she turns her face getting scared
lekin kya, your dream!! your job!! tumhari khushi!!, have you ever thought
how much I will miss you, uppar se tum mera feelings ka mazak utta rahi ho
I was so happy for us but you don't seem to see anything beyound yourself
he breaks a wooden plank kept behind in anger
she slips her hand around him moving from his waist to his shoulders
aap kaho tho main nahi join karongi
he snaps & turns to hold her - will we be happy then?
she looks down we are not happy now also
maan - thats beacuse you don't understand anyones feeling, har pal tumse dor rahena ka
gam mujhe satata rahta hain. I find it impossible to stay away from you
geet slowly inches towards him, not to buzz him again, her hands slip to his back
pressing him into her - I am sorry. mujhe maaf kardo
he tries to push her away. she holds him tighter pressing herself into him
maan - I can't stay without you damit!!!
holdig her back tighter like never before. she felt her bones may just crush
she could barely breathe. he kisses her madly, I will miss you a lot jaan
he lifts her & takes her to his room. he make her lay on the bed. she closed her eyes
and hugged him. he slowly kissed her eyes one after the other and rested himself on her.
he wanted feel her. he just quitely rested on her hugging her close, burring
his face into her neck close to her curls, taking in her scent. they lay like that until their
breath were in same rythm. syncing into each other heart.
she slowly slipped her fingers into his hair and his bare back.
they just lay their for couple of hours still longing to feel eachother.
it was more than 2 weeks since they felt each other. geet was quiet so was he.
they never spoke. their heart & soul did all that.


maan - sorry mujhe itna over react nahi karna chahiya tha
she was quiet. he kissed her lips very softly.
he slid next to her playing with her curls, caresing her cheeks with back of his
fingers, his legs pulling her closer around him.she turned into him & cuddled
feeling him, she had missed him terribly all these days.
maan - tumhari packing ho gaye
geet - do you really think I should go?
maan - I said I am sorry
geet - woh mera sawal ka jawab nahi tha?
maan - its your dream.. you should fulfill it
geet - aur hum?
maan - hum tho humesha saath hain na
geet - mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha
maan - just listen to me, cups her face. go for it.
she closes her eyes & hugs him tightly. still not able to understand anything.

she just had a 4 days to finish all her packing & other work
maan worked very closely with her helping her pack & shopping.
she was happy with all the support from maan, that what kept her going
2 days to go.
maan & geet met for dinner. maan looked really busy working on few files
she looked into it was shocked.
geet screamed - aap london jaa rahen ho
maan - tumhare jaane ke baad sweetheart
geet - how can you not even tell me?
maan - it just came up now, I was going to tell you
geet - u r going because I am going away..so you are doing tit-for-tat
maan - sweety its nothing like that
tears welled her eyes - how could you do this to me
maan - samjhne ki koshish karo, tumhare bina mera man nahi lagega
jab taak tum aavogi I will be back
geet - so you are going away for 6 months
maan - tum bhi tho 6 months ke liya jaa rahi ho
she gets upset..main sirf chennai ja rahin hoon & you are going to london
I hate you..I hate you

and leaves from there. she doesn't meet him before leaving to OTA.
he comes to drop her to the airport.
maan - geet u are going for 6 months atleast baat tho kar lo
she ignores him & leaves still very angry & upset
maan could not believe she left without saying a word to him

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GjUc4xCU90k[/YOUTUBE]]

precap
maan off to london
-NEXT PART 70-
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Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😭 i dont want to say first to comment.......i am sad.....hope they get to be together but geet should fulfill her dream.......fine maan can go to london too.....i want them again together soon........cant see them separate😭......its hurtfull.......atleast geet should have talked to him while going.........seriously she is nuts😡........anyways update soon jaan🤗

Edited by maanmishti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haila haila yeh kya hogaya??
Lol...But
Awesome Update
Loved it but sad..
Maaneet going away for 6 month?😭
Awww maan soooo possessive for geet..
He doesnt want her to go..neither me hehe
uff ab geet naraz hagyi
AB kya hoga?
Loved the update muskii
Cant wait..
Pls update soon
And khamoshi too cant wait for the update
Thanks!
Love ya🤗

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago

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