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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello all, this is my Silver Jubilee coz here is my part 25, expecting some great words from you guys, as always, I will keep you entertaining. On this occasion, I would like to share that my on screen name Asha is my Mom's name and my name is SEJAL.

Part 25

chupana bhi nahin aata

jatana bhi nahin aata

humen tumse mohabbat hai

batana bhi nahi aata

hatheli par tumhara naam

likhte hai mitate hai

tumhi se pyaar karte hai

tumhi se phir kyon chupate hai

juban pe baat hain lekin sunana hi nahin aata

humen tumse .....

mohabbat kaise karte hai

koi to humko samjhaye

kahin aisa na ho ki

pyaar bin umra kat jaaye

tum se milne ka koi bahan bhi nahi aata

humen tumse mohabbat hai ...

chori chori chupke chupke

tumko dekha karte hai

haale dil sunane se

na jane kyon darte hai

kitna pagal dil hai mera manana bhi nahi aata

hume tumse ..

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fg9G1dacXjk

Initially Maan didn't know whose email was that? Who was Sameer? Hence he opened it and when he saw the invitation for Geet and Sameer engagement party, he got shocked, and he realized who Sameer was, he wasn't ready for this moment yet, in his mind, he was still taking time to absorb this engagement party news and he was prolonging this moment like he was trying to avoid this moment, he wanted to live in utopia where life would move as per his desire. He didn't want to believe the shocking reality, he wanted to freeze the time so that engagement party evening wouldn't knock on his door and he wouldn't have to face it, Sameer had cordially invited him, but Maan wasn't ready to face them together, Maan wouldn't be able to witness that moment, rather he wouldn't go to the party. His good side was telling him to go and his frustrated side was telling him not to go. He didn't want to torture himself by going there. Yes TORTURE which he didn't know how to deal with.

He had no idea what he would do if he would see them together and he wouldn't want to make any reckless movements. He knew himself if he would get angry and if he wouldn't be able to control his feelings; he would do something which he might regret later.

He could see his shadow in front of him, standing very stiff without any movements; he got disturbed by looking at his own image. His atrocious side was telling him: "What are you doing Maan? why are you stopping yourself? You have never accepted defeat in your life and you wouldn't accept this time as well, you should just go and tell your feelings to Geet and I am pretty sure she will understand, if not, then do anything which you can and stop Sameer from getting engaged to Geet, or abduct Geet if you need to, but you can't accept failure, no Maan, Stand up right away and do whatever you want to do."

He woke up from that sudden shadow, the evil shadow, which was holding him to do things which Maan would bemoan.

Maan screams: "How can I hurt Sameer or Geet, hurting Sameer means hurting Geet and I will never be able to see dejected Geet, what matters to me is Geet's happiness, Geet will be happy to see me in her engagement party, I should attend the party even though it will hurt me, I need to control my feelings, it was better when I didn't have these feelings, at least I didn't have to fight with it, I didn't have to control it, but now as I have it, I have to go through the pain which I never knew existed before, my each drop of blood is screaming for Geet and now I don't know how to deal with this broken heart. I wish I would have never loved Geet, yes, yes, LOVED GEET, today I have to accept that I love her, YES DAMN IT I LOVE HER, but nobody is here to listen to my feelings, Geet, you are also not here, I need you, how can I explain you that I need you? How? Tell, me How? How can I explain you that I love you? Tell me, How?"

His each nerve was demanding her, his eyes were filled with desire to see her eyes once and to get lost in it, his arms were stretched to capture her in his arms, his soul was clamoring for his soul mate, his heart was craving for the love which he never received, a new burning desire to see Geet as his wife was killing him. Maan felt that he died before living a life. His life felt like those flowers which got killed before blooming.

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Geet was savoring her happiness, the happiness which she accomplished for the first time in her life, the happiness which had filled her life with smile, the happiness which brought new desires in her heart, the happiness which she never thought she would get it.

She was looking at her ring, the ring which Sameer gave it to her, the ring which brought a new ray of light in her life. She wanted to cherish every moment of her happiness as long as it lasts.

Sameer gave a sari to Shasha for Geet, for engagement party. Geet didn't know about her engagement party, it was surprised party for Geet; it was Shasha and Pinkey's responsibility to embellish Geet for the party.

Geet jumped on her feet when she looked at Sari, she wasn't able to control her joy. Sari was beautiful; it was red and white sari with golden border and light embroidery. In very small letter, within the design of her sari's pallu, Geet and Sameer -names were engulfed. She couldn't believe it, it was the amazing sari she had ever seen. She was over the moon.

Pinkey and Shasha were pulling Geet's legs all the time while ornamenting her.

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Sameer also got ready in his golden Jodhpuri style sherwani with red dupatta. His athletic body looked elegant in sherwani, he looked like a prince, he looked like each girl's dream, his majestic beauty was overwhelmed with sherwani.

He was already on cloud nine; his all dreams would be coming true so soon, his all desires were flourished at a faster rate. He made sure that all preparations were done perfectly; he couldn't afford a single mistake on his life's very important day. The hall was decorated beautifully, with white, pink and red flowers, with purple net, with nice chandeliers, with colorful lights, with golden drapes, and neatly organized tables and chairs for all guests. He didn't care about money as Geet was his life, he wanted to shower all his love on her. Sameer had only Dad in his family, his mom died when he was eight years old and he never had any siblings, his Dad would be flying from Mumbai for engagement party, his dad was also happy when Sameer told him about Geet, nothing could be more important than Sameer's happiness for his Dad, his dad was excited to meet Geet.

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Evening, 7 pm at Engagement Party Hall

Everybody was in the hall except Geet and Maan. Sameer was eagerly waiting for Geet to show up.

Maan had decided to go for party but he got little late as he kept himself busy with work and meetings.

Maan finally showed up in Calvin Klein black suit with purple tie on white shirt, he was looking dashing in his attire; he plastered his face with typical Maan Singh Khurana attitude, he was strongly holding his feelings, he started talking with various business men in the party as most people do know him very well.

The very important moment came finally.

Sameer came to meet Maan where Maan was talking with various other business men.

"Maan, I am Sameer, I have heard a lot about you from business tycoons, you have made this party special by your presence, thanks for coming and I am sure Geet would be delighted to see you in this party."Sameer said.

Maan was little surprised by looking at Sameer, he didn't want to believe but Sameer seemed handsome and nice guy. His shattered heart didn't want to face the reality; finally Sameer was standing in front of him, the same man who he killed in his mind hundreds of times, the same man who'd get married to Geet, yes to Geet who he had loved.

"Sameer, it is my pleasure, I have to be here as you have invited me and Geet has been my nice friend so I can't break her heart especially on this special day."Maan said.

Maan's heart got pierced when he referred Geet as a friend, he couldn't tolerate his helplessness. He closed his fists strongly to control his frenzy emotions.

The very image of Sameer reminded him Geet's words, when Geet said "She got engaged." He wasn't able to forget that moment yet. The words had killed Maan hundreds of times. The blow he got on that day in his heart which had pierced his heart completely. He wished that he would have never know Geet, he wished that he would have never felt anything for Geet, he wished that He would have never come across Geet after Hoshiarpur, he wished but of course destiny was not written by him.

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Posted: 14 years ago
WILL MG get together???? OH NO!
chsweety22 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
congrats 4 reaching silver jubilee...🥳
feeling really bad for maan...
will they ever be together??
looking forward to see how will u carry the story..
do continue soon
n thank u very much 4 pm..!!!
Edited by sai22789 - 14 years ago
preethia thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
congrats on 25th part...............but its a very painful part for me as i cant c maan going thro this pain............poor guy made up his mind and came there for her.......pls kuch karo yaar so that maaneet r back.........
kahkashansakina thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG feeling bad for Maan.
Geet forget Maan...
they will become together or not unfold.....
pls cont sooooon waitingggggggggg.
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Posted: 14 years ago
i don't know till when you plan to torture us with maan's pain. I am starting to have my doubts..lol. loved the update. u portrayed maan's pain very well. Update ASAP! thx.
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Posted: 14 years ago
congrats silver jubilee poor Maan my heart goes out for him but Geet is happy with Sameer dont want Geet to betray him but let see what yu i'll unfold the story wonderful update pls cont soonn sejal
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
i dont think its maaneet ff as after engagement nothing can be done and for geet to realise her love for maan sameer has to be portrayed bad in her eyes otherwise its difficult for her to leave saameer so hence i think in this ff maaneet would never be one but i want to be proved wrong
punjabi.princes thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
i feel a twist is coming up..
hope her and maan can be together
con't sooN!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lol @ he killed him in his mind a 100 times..i laughed....don't know what u are planning to do next....

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