MG FF:Prejudice Pt11 pg59 4 sept!( IMP.NOTE pg 63) - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome yar...................very nice...👍🏼👏
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hey priya,
why so short update? but u promise to make next one big... so cont soon as we are eagerly waiting for ur udpates.....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dhrashtee

hey priya,

why so short update? but u promise to make next one big... so cont soon as we are eagerly waiting for ur udpates.....


yeah dea i know... im really srry for that actually i was stuck up with cllge u know.. bt i'll be updating very soon...😊
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thnks priya for the pm ... nice update cont soon

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hey priya,
nice FF lady
continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome parts........... just read!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey priya just came across this ff.......😊
and truly...this is really nice.......lovely ff..😃
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part 7

Maan's monologue

I hav never seen more beautiful girl than the one standing infront of me. May be i am wrong abt the beauty of other girls.. i am not saying other girls are not beautiful but her beauty was some thing i noticed. She was so natural in everything-her innocense that added four moons to her beauty.

The color of the sari was adding beauty to her fair soft skin,or i m must say vice versa! I am standing here bewitched by her beauty! the anklets are making sound as she is approching me taking tiny steps. She is indeed looking heavenly!

"Maan chale?" she asked. Her voice was so soft that anyone could melt hearing it!

"Haan chalo", I said as we moved towards the car.

She sat in the passenger seat as dadi ma made herself comfortable in the back seat while i was in the trance seeing my beautiful would be wife! I smiled at the thought,then brused it off my lips hoping no body would have noticed it. It was not the shy smile but the naughty one!

Geet was the only person who can make me loose my self! The day from I met her till today I hav noticed many changes in myself. Though I never liked changes but today I think some changes are neccessary. My past was not so good and i think this is the only rason that made me so aloof from all the emotions. Emotions of love,friendship. I never gave preference to anyone but my Dadi. And today she is the scond person who is really to be valued!

She was sitting beside me as I was driving. Dadi ma presuried me to paly the music system. I never liked music or anything related to emotions but today i dont know why I couldn't say no to Dadi. the venue was still far. I played them radio, and the song that came along ," do dil mill rahe hain magar chupke chupke....". Dadi ma,radio and everything oday was conspiring to bring her close to me.

the song was just suitable and looked like it was just inspired by our relationship!

First time I am enjoying any song. Its lyrics are so soothing. It is really for Me and Geet.

do dill mill rahe hain magar chupke chupke (she was looking out side the window and her hairs were caressing her soft cheeks)

sabko ho rahi hai.. haan sabko ho rahi khabar chupke chupke (as my gaze travelled from her the the rear veiw mirror I noticed Dadi looking at me with mischevious grin, I cleared my throat and continued driving !)

do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke.... (she was looking lost)

Saanson Mein Badi Bekaraari....Aankhon Mein Kai Rat Jage..(now she was looking little shy. I couldn't help but smiled.)

Kahin Kabhi Lag Jaaye Dil To.....Kahin Phir Dil Na Lage...(it was just so true.. the day I saw her I am just thing abt her only!)

Apne Dil Mein Zara Thaam Loon....Jaadu Ka Main Isay Naam Doon...(I really didn't knew this feeling.. i was still confused about it!.. i should also give it the name "magic".)

Jaadu Kar Raha..Jaadu Kar Raha Hai Asar Chupke Chupke...(it was really true.. bcoz it was her magic only that is changing me!)

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain....Magar Chupke Chupke..(we both looked at each other .. I smiled to her and she to returned my smile)

Aise Bhole Bankar Hai Baithe...Jaise Koi Baat Nahin..Sab Kuchh Nazar Aa Raha Hai...Din Hai Ye Raat Nahin..(i am just thinking ..how can a song be so perfect on real life situation!...this song was just going with our present condition.. may be not for her.. but for me it was just apt!)

Kya Hai Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hai Agar..Honthon Pe Hai Khaamoshi Magar..Baatein Kar Rahi Hain..Baatein Kar Rahi Hain Nazar Chupke Chupke..( "kya sach much mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai? " I kept on asking this question to myself. there was actually no need ke hum baat kare.. she was sitting next to me silently and I was happy.. our eyes have always talked. It had been just 48 hrs since we met aur mai usse itne achh se samjhne laga hoon.. uski khamoshi padhne laga hoon!)

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain...Magar Chupke Chupke..( ye jo bhi feeling hai I am liking it!..)

(Maan's monologue ends)

they reach the venue:-

(Maan opens the door for Dadi and geet and thn parks the car.)

As they move towards the party all the eyes gets fixed on them. All the people were dazed by both Maan-Geet. They were looking the most handsome couple there. Geet held his hand as they entered the hall. The hall was very big and tastefully decorated! It was looking like the very big business-social meet. Geet was scared coz she had never been to such business meetings before.

As they entered they were greeted by Mr. Chopra.

Maan: Geet Mr Chopra is very old client of Khurana Constructions.

Geet: hello (she elegantly shook hands with him)

(Dadi too was greeted by Mr. Chopra and later she went to meet her business frnds)

Mr. Chopra: so miss geet.. aap?

Maan: she is my secretary.

Geet looked at him questionably. But Maan did not looked at Geet he just kept on talking to Mr. Chopra. She wondered why Maan referred her as his secretary! She thought she would ask him this later.

Maan looked her and understood but just smiled and thought he would explain this to her later.

On other hand Geet was not happy abt how Maan introduced her to his clients and partners. She was pissed with what he did. She thought that she is not his type and he was feeling uncomfortable introducing her to them as his fianc. She became sad thinking about it. And went to Savitri Devi and stood by her.

When she was with Savitri Devi she saw a beautiful, stout girl came and hugged Maan! She had her jaw dropped. She never thought that some one could do that with anyone in front of so many people! But she is so pissed seeing that sight that she just turned opposite side so that no one could notice her expressions. Just then a man came with a drink in his hand.

Man: hey beautiful! Yahan akeli kya kr rahi ho? Come on join me.(he said with dirty smile)

(He was drunk. His voice told her so and she started going back where she left Savitri Devi)

Man: arre kaha ja rahi ho.. I guarantee u'll enjoy.

He kept on calling her but Geet went far away from him feeling disgusted!

She was really mad. First that girl with short dress hugging Maan..and now this rogue flirting with her. She again stood quietly with Savitri Devi.

Maan came with that girl holding her hand and smiling. Geet didn't liked it. The girl hugged Savitri Devi.

Dadi: arre Shivani beta aap yaha? Itne dino kahan thi aap? Humari yaad nahi aayi? Ek baar ghar pe milne aajati..

Shivani: nahi Dadi ma aisi koi baat nahi hai . aap to janti hai ke mai max. time US mein hi rehti hoon. Bass 5 din ke din hue hain aaye hue, mai ghar par jaldi hi aaungi.

Maan: toh shivi kab tak ho India mein?

Shivani: hmm'15 din ke liye. vo bhi office ke kaam se.

Maan (just smiled)

Shivani: vaise Man tumne shaadi nahi ki abhi tak? Mera intezaar kr rahe the kya?( she said smiling)

Maan: haan aur kya.. tum aayi hi nahi..(he said laughing)

Geet who was listening to there talk didn't liked anything. Firstly Maan did not introduced her as his fianc, secondly that rogue and his disgusting eyes, thirdly there talk.. her throat chocked. She didn't had any one to share her sadness. She sneaked out of the place without getting noticed by anyone and went out side to the garden there was no one just solitary couple moving.

She just stood by one of the fountain which was in the corner, away from all the crowded area. She was really sad. She thought she is just a girl who is not perfect for him. He was feeling shame in introducing her as his fianc. But she had never been told that she was so bad! But she thought that he was The Maan Singh Khurana. The biggest tycoon of country. And for him she is not suitable.

She was in this turmoil when a hand came around her bare slim waist. She just shivered but felt it was not Maan. She just turned in shock to find none other than that drunk rogue! She was frightened like hell. She just wanted to screem "Maan" when he closed her mouth! And every thing became silent! '''''..

part 8

Ok guyz that's it!..😆

I'll update not before Monday..

Hope u all liked this update!.....

pls ignore the mistakes if any..

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-priya

Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhhh!!!!!!! what will happen to her now????????
plzzzzzzzzzz..........update nxt part sooooooonnnnnnn..........

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