Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated

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Posted: 14 years ago

#711

and oh yes how can i forget this beautiful expressions ....

"And how many marketing plans you think involve heart-to-heart confessions?" she countered. "One is enough to last through a life-time (thinking...) or may be more than a single life-time" 👏

standing ovation dear for this part which kept me in awe, 🤗

"""He now cupped her jaw and made her look at him as his thumb grazed her cheek. "Geet, kal apni baat batane se pehle tum itna pareshaan rahi... yeh sochti rahi ki main kya kahunga... aur yeh baat mujhe bilkul achchi nahi lagi. Geet tumhara yeh jaan na zaroori hai ki tum jab chaho, jo chaho, mujhse aakar keh sakti ho. (lifting her hand and placing it on his shoulder) tumhe kisi baat se darne ki zaroorat nahi hai... soch ne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Tum samajh rahi ho na meri baat?" Looking up at him she nodded in response.😳😍

"Ek baat kahun?" she asked slowly and he smiled, "tumhe puchne ki bhi zaroorat nahi hai. Bolo😳

and then there comes our lively Geet '""" "Aaj tak maine itna cute phantom kabhi nahi dekha""""" i was rolling 😆 🤣

lemme re-read it again and then i would comment more. 😉

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: .muskaan

Missed me😳... i am sure you did...😉

Hi di🤗

Ok... well i want to guess and i have a long one now that u have disclosed a lot but i have my boards in a week so i am online for just half an hour so no guessing business... 😭😳

Coming to the update... loved it...😳😃

I know short comment... sooooo not like me but i gotta study so bye di😳...

tc😃

Ofcourse I missed you sweetie pie😃

hmm... i knew ur brains will start processing things soon after this one😆... and i would love to read what's been cooking in there but i guess i can wait😃 for now i'll do with your shorter version of comment

Your borads are important for now... give it your best shot... all the best honey... the rest can wait👍🏼

Thanks a bunch for the comments😃

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#713

Originally posted by: heermeher
trust me sweety i really appreciated the part and u kept ur promise but will revolt if you take another 5 days to update.
As the no of readers are increasing i suggest you update once in 2- 3 days ( even if the parts are not very long is ok) so that the readers are glued to FF. Half of the time when i read other FF and the writers take more then one week many people tend to forget the story line and the excitement and the comments come down if you see lots of people just say loved it, awesome, they dont give constructive feedback becoz the excitement is missing.

Thats what my belief ( hope u don't mind)

Revolt😆... nice nice... the new update karo aandolan😉😆

Trust me hun i do try but u know na how work and personal commitments can get... and i completely agree with what you are trying to say... i also understand the kind of story line i m dealing with... i should be quicker coz of mystery and past relevations but then as i said work takes a toll and then there is travelling which eats up major chunk of time

And no i didn't mind what you said at all... i truly appreciate your concern😳

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Esha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#714

Oye Soniye...loved all the Maaneet teasings....well after their confession ye teasings aur sab toh expected tha hi but u wrote it beautifully....I loved Maan very much in this update....only the past tense waala ha,mind it!!Well the present waala Maan is still against Geet,he should learn something from his sister Anu,she has so much faith in her friend....thats why I always believed in the line "Friendship is more strong,powerful n beautiful than Love"....see the difference between true love n true friendship.... Love may doubt you even for a second but friendship,it will stand by u till eternity....I love u Anu....u r a true friend....ok enough of my friendship lectures now....back to work...

So Geet is Mohinder's sister's daughter...well it makes no difference,he still loved her more than his own....I liked Adi n family..how they stood beside Geet in her need....that too when she has no one to turn to,not even Maan....but still why so?Why can't she confide in Maan abt what happened?Actually what had happened in Hoshiyarpur that led her to the mess of marrying someone else in front of Maan...And yeah I'm glad to get confirmed that Geet isn't married to whomever that idiot is....Now see there are so many revelations for u to make n for us to read...so get on with them yaar....kab tak chupaaogi.....jaldi raaz kholo....I'm desparate now to know what's all this mess is about....

i liked the last bit of the update,the last Flash back....haha Daadi caught Maan in action that too kissing Geet....good for him that he's not kissing her elsewhere,u know....Daadi would have fainted for sure seeing that,ROFL 🤣....now Maan has some answers to give to his darling Daadi in the next update I guess...waiting to see his face when he gets caught red-handed infront of Daadi...and also for Geet's reactions abt coming to know that Anu n Maan are siblings....jaldi jaldi update kar na yaar...kyun bachchon ko tadpaathi rehthi hai...

And yeadh I'm giving my lappy for servicing tomorrow...still will try to keep in touch as said before....but can't pester u for an update now....but DON'T TAKE IT FORGRANTED....I'll be keeping an eye on u....😈...samjhi....love ya for the loooooong update....

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Esha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#715

Haila....itna bada comment 😲...it's been a while since I posted a comment this long 😆....I myself am shocked....😆

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#716

Originally posted by: Morning Star
just wow

bravo dear. an amazing , excellent and very touchy part filled with emotions , full of love, care and innocence, and yet there is tragedy, darkness, hollowness, and colorless life of Geet.

i was so touched when Geet was engulfed in the warmth, affectionate and caring arms of maan, her true lover, which is no less than a woman's paradise on earth.

I so dearly wish that you update very soon so we get the chance to dive again in dreamy world of Maneet.

Thanks a bunch dearie😃

its so nice that you could feel all the emotions i tried to convey in the update... but such is life na dearies... and i have been mentioning, this darkness won't last for long... a little while though till Maan finds out the truth

A man like Maan is a dream of every woman and his arms certainly a paradise...

glad you liked those parts... and thanks for appreciating my writings... Honestly touched😳

will love to read more from you😃

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#717

Originally posted by: esha143
Haila....itna bada comment 😲...it's been a while since I posted a comment this long 😆....I myself am shocked....😆

i pat my back for this on your behalf... now i'll go back and read the oopar wala post😆

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#718

Originally posted by: esha143
Oye Soniye...loved all the Maaneet teasings....well after their confession ye teasings aur sab toh expected tha hi but u wrote it beautifully....I loved Maan very much in this update....only the past tense waala ha,mind it!!Well the present waala Maan is still against Geet,he should learn something from his sister Anu,she has so much faith in her friend....thats why I always believed in the line "Friendship is more strong,powerful n beautiful than Love"....see the difference between true love n true friendship.... Love may doubt you even for a second but friendship,it will stand by u till eternity....I love u Anu....u r a true friend....ok enough of my friendship lectures now....back to work...

So Geet is Mohinder's sister's daughter...well it makes no difference,he still loved her more than his own....I liked Adi n family..how they stood beside Geet in her need....that too when she has no one to turn to,not even Maan....but still why so?Why can't she confide in Maan abt what happened?Actually what had happened in Hoshiyarpur that led her to the mess of marrying someone else in front of Maan...And yeah I'm glad to get confirmed that Geet isn't married to whomever that idiot is....Now see there are so many revelations for u to make n for us to read...so get on with them yaar....kab tak chupaaogi.....jaldi raaz kholo....I'm desparate now to know what's all this mess is about....

i liked the last bit of the update,the last Flash back....haha Daadi caught Maan in action that too kissing Geet....good for him that he's not kissing her elsewhere,u know....Daadi would have fainted for sure seeing that,ROFL 🤣....now Maan has some answers to give to his darling Daadi in the next update I guess...waiting to see his face when he gets caught red-handed infront of Daadi...and also for Geet's reactions abt coming to know that Anu n Maan are siblings....jaldi jaldi update kar na yaar...kyun bachchon ko tadpaathi rehthi hai...

And yeadh I'm giving my lappy for servicing tomorrow...still will try to keep in touch as said before....but can't pester u for an update now....but DON'T TAKE IT FORGRANTED....I'll be keeping an eye on u....😈...samjhi....love ya for the loooooong update....

Esha i so agree with you on the friends wala part... isiliye i firmly believe that its most importnt for a couple to be friends before anything else... coz friendship brings tht ease, stabiitly and understanding in a relationship... that solidifies the relationship...

Maan is reeling from a heart break himself but its his ego tht is stopping him from seeing things that his heart knows... typically men... they really need spoon feeding not like woman who r more level-headed like Anu... even i like past wala Maan... i m gonna make Maan repent for his present wala behaviour

You know Maan is egoistic and there is one more reason why Geet is not turning to Maan... besides knwin him even she's aware that he won't listen to her... and ofcourse she's upset with him for not trusting her enough.... complications😆... so now the cat has started crawling out of the bag toh thoda time aur honey... and it will be out completely... thoda sa aur patience with the raaz

Maan kssing Geet elsewhere😲... sweetie did u forget they were in public😆 i know i know,,, Delhi Mumbai main sometimes log private/public bhool jate hai... reminds me of an incident.. but lets not get there😆... haan toh...Dadi toh kya aur bohut se log aas pass behosh ho jate... it was Maan Singh Khurana after all... however i just imagined dadi fainting for seeing Maan kissing Geet elsewhere

... wow would have been a sight😉😆

Bachche? look at the bachcha party giving dhamkis... meri itni himmat ki main tujhe granted loon😲... nah nah... i get tht point for the benefit of my own well-being i better get to work soon😆

Thanks a ton for the long and lovely comments... luv ya loads😳

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Esha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#719

Originally posted by: euphoric

Esha i so agree with you on the friends wala part... isiliye i firmly believe that its most importnt for a couple to be friends before anything else... coz friendship brings tht ease, stabiitly and understanding in a relationship... that solidifies the relationship..yeah,totally agree with u on that...

Maan is reeling from a heart break himself but its his ego tht is stopping him from seeing things that his heart knows... typically men... they really need spoon feeding not like woman who r more level-headed like Anu... even i like past wala Maan... i m gonna make Maan repent for his present wala behaviour..good good...do that,I'm with u in that matter,he should learn to trust his love...stupid khurana😡

You know Maan is egoistic and there is one more reason why Geet is not turning to Maan... besides knwin him even she's aware that he won't listen to her... and ofcourse she's upset with him for not trusting her enough.... complications😆... so now the cat has started crawling out of the bag toh thoda time aur honey... and it will be out completely... thoda sa aur patience with the raaz....well if u say so...I'll be patient,waise bhi suna hai intezaar ka phal meetha hotha hai 😆

Maan kssing Geet elsewhere😲... sweetie did u forget they were in public😆 i know i know,,, Delhi Mumbai main sometimes log private/public bhool jate hai... reminds me of an incident.. but lets not get there😆... haan toh...Dadi toh kya aur bohut se log aas pass behosh ho jate... it was Maan Singh Khurana after all... however i just imagined dadi fainting for seeing Maan kissing Geet elsewhere🤣... wow would have been a sight😉😆...hai na badiya....just imagine that..haaiiiii. dreamyyy😆

Bachche? look at the bachcha party giving dhamkis... meri itni himmat ki main tujhe granted loon😲... nah nah... i get tht point for the benefit of my own well-being i better get to work soon😆 Good girl....get down to work soon...thats why I love you...achchi bachchi...😆

Thanks a ton for the long and lovely comments... luv ya loads😳....me tooooo....❤️