Maneet FF- A Lifetime of Gratitude- 3 updt-pg 37 - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovelyyyyyyyyyyy, update the nxt soonnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
ya truly twists are not bad now hope geet gets to know soon
Edited by hinalshah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I'm back n so are u. Awesome.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorrryyyy for late update- but here it is- hope u like it
Thanks a lot for all the comments 😃

Geet had decided to talk to Vicky..because she knew Rajji won't say anything much.
IF anything- Rajji would talk to Maan.

So she went to Vicky as he was leaving for office..

Vicky- bhabhs..hello

He bent down and patted geet's tummy

Vicky- hello my princess
Geet smiled and told him to get up

Vicky- sab thik bhabhs?

Geet- Nahi Vicky..I want to talk to you about something very important otherwise I'll have to take a step

Vicky- Ji boliye na?

Geet- Vicky...Do you have feelings for my sister?

Vicky blushed to his roots but stared into Geet's eyes

Vicky- Bhabhi ...aap aayi..I want to tell you my side of the story..then you decide

Geet and Vicky went and sat in Maan's room and Vicky said this

Vicky- Bhabhs- I have always been lonely. I have had friends and people who fawn over me, people who envy me, etc etc. Maan bhai has been alone but admired. Always admired.
I used to feel slightly jealous...particularly when I met you. I mean- there you were- the most beautiful and wonderful person I have ever met and you loved bhai the way I had wanted to be loved.
We became close and I got a friend..but it wasn't enough.
When Rajji came- we stuck together. We hung out, became friends and then..i wanted more..I liked her initially because she was great company and she gave me her time; she liked me...and I liked her. But then...it wasn't enough- I wanted to spend time with her- because I loved the way she smiled and laughed at my jokes, how she used to roll her eyes, and smack me, how we used to go for lunch and dinner 'dates' and watch movies and have ice-cream.

Suddenly all of that became not for me- but for her- rather- for US.
And then she started studying too much and had no time for me so I reacted..but I soon realized there is no way I cannot be with her...
I don't know bhabhs what this is?

Geet put a hand on his shoulder and said

Geet- Vicky.. Give it time. IT will get sorted out.
Talk to Rajji.

Vicky- but bhabhs- if Im myself not clear about stuff- how can I talk to her? and confuse her too?

Geet- Vicky..How about both of you figure it out?

Meanwhile- she decided to talk to maan about this. She didn't want either of them to suffer.

for the time being she decided to go to office and start working on the school design

At the office

Geet- Hello guys :)
Adi,pinky- hey Geet..you're here..how are you?

Geet- I'm good guys. I think you should get back to work. I'll start working also.

Adi and Pinky go the other way while Geet enters Maan's cabin

Maan gets up imediately
maan- Geet tum?

Geet- hi maan :)

Maan- kya hua?

Geet- nothing I decided I should start designing the school

Maan smiled at her enthusiasm

MAan- Okay Geet you may work

Geet glared at him
Geet- Maan..Im not asking you. I'm telling you I'm working okay?

Maan smiled and kissed her

MAan- hmmm...kya bola tumne?
Geet- Maine kaha ki...

He kissed her again

Maan- shh...u know I don't like talking when we're...
Geet- You don't like talking anytime maan.
She was finding it difficult to breathe and her heart-beat raced... she entwined her fingers in his hair and pulled him even closer as there was a knock on the door

Maan- Ahh..Come in

Adi had come to give in some files..going really red in the face..he left quietly

Maan put his arms around Geet's waist and pulled her closer...and whispered into her ears like a caress

Maan- toh kaam kab se shuru kar rahi ho

Geet- abhi se..let me go to my cabin..

And she leaves him..😆

Geet starts working..ignoring the food she really needs...
till maan comes in and glares at her..
He pulls her gently by the arm and whisper-screams

Maan- Geet..tumne khana nahi khaya
itna kaam...yeh kya matlab hai..chalo abhi khaao

Geet- Main bhool gayi thi...and...
MAan- shh geet. ab baitho aur khao..

And he sat with her while she ate.

Geet- Chaliye now you go...and let me work in peace

Maan went away...grumbling to himself

yeh ladki bhi na...uff...lagta hai yeh maan singh khurana hai aur main iska secretary
khair- she's the only one who can tell me what to do...and I'll do it gladly...

But he was conscious of hr being there..and went to meet her in regular intervals so she doesn't overstress herself and so every hour was time for a kiss and a cool drink of water or juice for Geet😳

Maan in the meanwhile also got a call from Dadi
Dadi by the way had gone to Mumbai to her friends' house for some time and was coming back tomorrow.
Maan said okay and told her Geet was absolutely fine

Then he went to Geet and told her it was time to go home...he had to literally pluck her up and take her all the way to the car

Amused he told her once they were in the car

Maan- I had no idea you would love it so much
I'm glad ur happy

Geet smiled a tired contented smile

Geet- oh yeah maan thi swas soo much fun!!!
But do take a look once it's complete and tell me how you think it looks :)

MAan told her about Dadi and said they'll tell Dadi about Mehek tomorrow

Geet- Mehek?
MAan....

Maan stopped the car, turned to her and said

Maan- I promised her in my dreams that she will be back. I will bring her back.

geet put a hand to her tummy and smiled at maan with tear-filled eyes and maan put his hand on top of hers...bent his head and kissed her tummy

Maan- my princess in inside..growing and soon papa will bring her out

Geet put a hand to his head and gently ruffled his hair

and they went back home

To be continued....
Dinner and ahem 'desert'

Love to all



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Posted: 14 years ago
res I'm 1st
I'm 1st
I'm 1st
I'm 1st
Ok thats enough....................
awww loved vicky's way of explaining his dil ka haal - soooooooooooo well explained........ I nearly fell for him 😳
Awwww Rajji is more open with Maan
hahahah oooooooo Maan ke jaadu main Geet batana hi bhul gayi Vicky ke baare main - ot oh.......
Awwwww Loved the moment of Mehek and Papa n Mama - awwwww happy families
Thanks for the update hunny
Update sooonnnn
Nahi toh..............................nahi toh..............nahi toh.....erm........pata nai - but it wont be nyc😆
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
2nd one....bit sad..😔...bit happy...😊...at least u updated...
loved the way geet decided to take the matter in her own hands...
first talking to vicky n then going back to work...
vicky is still in a dilemma regarding his feelings towards rajji....loved the way he laid everything out in the open...
now its maan's turn to talk to rajji...i'm sure geet will tell him to (not ask😉)...
waiting for the next part ...n plz update soon...
Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part..
loved it.......
tanx 4r pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks guys!

I'll try n update tomorrow now :))
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update.....................
vicky opening up with geet and rajji more open with maan........................thats nice bondings...............
loved the maan take care of geet...............
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome awesome update loved it a lot asalways😆

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