Maneet FF- A Lifetime of Gratitude- 3 updt-pg 37 - Page 19

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome Geetu!!! Jaldi jaldi update kara karo yaar!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
That was awesome update as always.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
I loved it x
Awwww such a lucky baby hahaha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeeeee yaar
n geet office maan ko vicky ke bareme batane gayi thi na so y did she nt tell him
n maan is soooooo happy tht mehak is cming back
luved ittttttttt
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
Loved the geet and vicky scene
Aww maan and geet
So cute
Can't wait 4 da next part
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update.
Thank you so much.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys!
thanks for the comments...

anyone up for desert?
😆

maan and geet reach home and seeing vicky..

Geet-oho...im so silly
i forgot

Maan- kya hua?

Geet pulled maan behind a pillar..

Maan- well well..kuchh important hi bhool gayi hogi...main yaad kara deta hoon

and he came close to her...putting his hands on either side of her head and trapping her...

she turned her face sideways

and whispered his name

Geet- maan..please...

Maan heard her but ignored her plea and placed a slow soft kiss on her bare neck and behind her ear
eyes closed...she tried to focus and finally said in a stronger voice

Geet- maan..abhi nahi...it's very important

Maan- bolo na geet.

Geet told maan about Vicky and his confusion.

Maan smiled..
MAan- tum bhi na..always concerned about others...what do you want me to do?

Geet- i don't know...
Maan- acha...how about I talk to Rajji and find out what she wants?

Geet- yeah do that...but abhi....

Maan- hmm...Abhi Mrs Khurana...aap desert khayengi?

Geet-mmm....i think some chocolate mousse is in order...

Maan- hmm..I have something yummier for myself..

Geet blushed.. and gently slapped maan on the shoulder

Maan- whaat...?

Vicky- oh great there you guys are..come..for dinner.. :)

Maan- I'll go get fresh and call Rajji too

Vicky- oh she's not at home..has gone out for a study date. she promised she'll be back after 10. I'll go pick her up after dinner

Maan smiled faintly
Maan- you are very concerned..

Vicky- of course bhai...i wouldn't want her to be hassled for a ride home

They had dinner and Geet ordered desert

vicky left to pick up Rajji and Maan thought to go out for sometime

Maan- suno Geet...Do you want to go for a walk?
You would love the fresh air

Geet- hmm...mehek would love it too

Maan- my baby always loves freshness..

Geet-chalo chalo..aapko toh mauka chhaiye..hamesha mehek aapki team mein kyun?
She's mama's darling

Maan- Geet...I'm mama's darling

Geet-😆Maan..aap bhi na

They went out holding hands but before that..all of
Geet's dinner came out...
15 minutes later..Maan carried Geet to the garden swing...

Geet- hmm...

Maan put his hand on her cold forehead...sweating and yet cold

Maan- my bachha...are you any better now?

Geet- hmm..everything is just spinning...and my ears are ringing maan...but i want to sleep here in the open tonight...

Maan- okay baby...you close your eyes...we'll sleep here...I'll go get stuff from our room
Geet- maan stay here...please..tell nakul to go get stuff

Maan- Thik hai.

Maan tells nakul and then tucks geet in. Almost the entire night she sits with her feet on his thighs and nods off like that

At around 3 in the morning..Geet woke up with a growling stomach and found maan nodding off ..

Geet- oh my god..he must be feeling so so cold..

She gently tried to cover him up with the quilt but he woke with a start

Maan- Geet..you okay na?
Sab thik?

Geet- Maan..chaliye room mein chaliye...

Maan-hmmm...nahi....it's okay..
Geet- maan..C'mon get up..
nahi toh just lie down here...

Maan- but you..

Geet- I'll lie down too..

she made him lie down and covered him...

Then she left him and went upstairs to sleep..
She knew she can't move him and so it was best to let him sleep where he was..
He takes so much care sometimes it's just unbelievable.

While going upstairs Geet took some chocolate mousse for herself.
Nakul knew now to keep it in small katoris for geet if she woke up at night to eat something
There were all kinds of ice creams and chocolate bars and bruits dipped in chocolate(freshly made today) and of course the mousse..

she went upstairs, and sat eating happily..feeling full, she slept

when she woke up, maan had his arms around her....

rolling her eyes, geet smiled and hid into maan's chest

snuggling closer, they slept on

After some time,
maan woke up..to find Geet in his arms

He gently woke her up...Obviously, she didn't get up..
So he went to the bathroom and came back to see she was not there

So he just lay on the bed...was feeling lazy today..and he had no meetings..

Geet came back

Geet- good morning

Maan- hmmm..

Geet- aapko kya hua?

Maan- kuchh nahi..because of you my back is all stiff and hurting..

Geet- I didn't tell you to sleep on the swing maan..You really need to take more care of yourself

Maan pulled her on him gently

Maan- tum ho na...
Anyway..you slept well?

Geet- yes. And I'm fresh and happy now

Maan- hmmm....

He kissed her long and slow...caressed her arms till she was breathless and delirious with desire
Geet- maan..office...?

Maan- hmm..no office today geet...
Maan- DADI..

Geet- what?
Maan- Dadi ki flight...

Geet- MAAN u forgot!! c'mon get ready now!
Maan-😲
bol toh aise rahi hai jaise kuchh bhooli hi na ho...Anyway...

Maan was a bit annoyed at the break...so Geet pulled maan into the shower with him...
where they had shower...and took some more time than usual...
OF course they had to look good and Love always adds a glow..

As a result, maan came smiling widely and geet blushing out of the shower..they got dressed and in companionate silence left for the airport






Edited by geet.a - 14 years ago
TSharan thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update Geetu!!!! Loved it....the last part could have been more elaborate though😉😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Anshu_A

Awesome update Geetu!!!! Loved it....the last part could have been more elaborate though😉😉


anshu main likhte likhte bore ho gayi🤣

next time definitely...😳

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