Maneet FF- A Lifetime of Gratitude- 3 updt-pg 37 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh wow you guys..thanks a lot for all your lovely comments :))
next update coming up :))
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Posted: 14 years ago

NOte- I'm showing a month leap :))
You'll know what's happened..😉

Maan felt Geet get up and go to the bathroom for the fifth time.

sigh...I guess I'll have no sleep tonight as well..
my poor bachha is so sick...

Maan sleepily fumbled around a bit and found some lemon...then saw that Geet had finished it already...
He got up and rubbed his eyes to go downstairs and get some more for her.

Geet came out-upset and irritated.

Maan- sweetheart..I'll be back in a second. bas ek second.

He went to her and made her sit down on the bed.

She leaned back and closed her eyes as maan dropped a kiss on her forehead

Maan rushed downstairs and crashed into Vicky

Vicky- OWW..bhai!

MAan- tum is waqt kya kar rahe ho?

Vicky went red- woh main..woh ..hum...movie dekh rahe the...and rajji wanted ice cream

Maan- 😲...

Vicky- ok bye bhai..

Maan rolled his eyes,picked up the lemon and a popsicle to give Geet a surprise and went upstairs again...

Geet-Maan...
she wasn't like this...but she felt her mood swinging left right and centre.
She couldn't bear to have anything warm anymore...and was perpetually suffering form cough...
And maan...poor maan- he suffered so much but she couldn't help it...
whoever said pregnancy was beautiful? is it really? till now-sickness.

MAan-Geet...yeh lo...tumhara lemon

she sucked at it gratefully and smiled at maan after a few moments.

Geet- thanks. Aap so jaayie..I don't think i feel like sleeping right now.

Maan climbed back into the bed and handed Geet the popsicle and had the pleasure of seeing her face light up

Maan- Geet you think I'll go to sleep when you are all alone..Let's talk

Geet laughed out at that
Geet- maan...hahahahaha...aap baatein karenge...woh bhi poori raat..hahahahaha
hmmm...haan..Geet...

MAan-GEET...😡

Geet- dekha..dekha😆 aap so jaayie

MAan suddenly closed the distance between them and tasted the popsicle from her lips...
He nibbled at her lower lip n kissed her jaw gently

Maan- sone ka mann toh nahi hai..but sachhi bohot neend aa rahi hai.
Finish this off and we'll sleep then,okay?

Geet- okay...

she began the task of finishing the popsicle while maan stared at her

Geet- mr maan singh khurana- mujhe ghoorna aapki favourite hobby hai na?

Maan- tumhe kaise pata chala?😆
Anyway- shh..mere paas ek khabar hai

Geet came closer to hear what maan wanted to whisper...

After hearing she got really excited and clapped her hands delightfully

Geet- maan..i have a plan..😳

Maan heard,smiled faintly and then strictly told her

MAan- chalo geet so jaayein..I have to go to office and you need to rest

Geet- hmm...

Maan lay down on the pillow and was about to change sides when

Geet- maan....

Maan- oops..sorry meri pari

He gave her his arm so she could sleep on it...
He smiled at her as she cuddled into his chest..

Geet - I love you maan
Maan- I love you too geet...
I hope we can finally sleep now..😛

2 hours later

Geet got up again as quietly as she could and ran to the bathroom..came back and sucked on the lemon...
She thought fresh air might do her good so she decided to go for a walk in the garden

She thought of peeking into Rajji's room once..she loved to see her sleep...Rajji looked like a kid while sleeping

So she peeked and saw Rajji and Vicky half-lying on the bed, their heads on each others'

Geet smiled and took a picture.
Rajji moved a bit and got more comfortable and Vicky pulled the comforter higher.

Geet went into the garden and just sat on the swing, smelling the roses and the dew drops..she felt drowsy and fell asleep there..a very peaceful sleep for a change and after a long time....

Maan woke up to find Geet not in the room or in the house...
ab kahan gayi? Oh God..I was not wrong- life is always such an intrigue with her..
now where is she?

He woke the entire household screaming geet,geet,geet..but of course...everyone except Geet heard it..

Maan got really worried and went into the garden towards the servant quarters

He finally saw Geet and his heart stopped beating for a second

Amidst the roses, was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen...
He never forgot to say thanks to Destiny and God to have given him Geet...and soon..he'll have a princess...He had decided she'd be named Mehek but was afraid to bring it up in front of Geet for now...

He smiled and touched her cold fingers..frowned, picked her up and she immediately resisted

Geet-uhmmm..nahi..yahin par...

Maan -but geet...
Geet- no....maan...please..i feel nice here....let me slee-

Maan nodded to himself and put a thick quilt and pillows around her so that she didn't feel cold.
Then he kissed her and went to get dressed
😳

Okay- that's it for today..maine kaha na- twists aren't always bad...

love to all


Edited by geet.a - 14 years ago
gangesegb thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update.....loved it....
do cont soon..
tamx 4r pm
rsroopali thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhhhhh wowwwwwwwwww
n agreed twist r nt bad always
zaara2212 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
so sweet...Maan is so caring....muwah muwahhhhhhh

tx for the update and pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
you got mehak back.... yipppieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... this twist is lovely.... awww she doesnt let him sleep... right on girl... thankx for the update....
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Posted: 14 years ago

yaar updates r...

i'm really.......
keep it up dear..👍🏼.
always wid u..🤗..
lov,❤️
Tama
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwww that was so cute......so loved it...
rajji and vicky story moving ahead
Edited by ansah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved this twist a lot👏but bechara maan 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Adorable and so cute Geetu!!!! I loved this little twist!!!

Thx for PM

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