One-Shot World: Adi~Pinky: Pg.1; Maan~Geet: Pg.4

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Amazin os! Was laughing like crazy

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hemvb

@hemvb

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

love this os yaar!!!!

wish you could continue it and make it into a small ff ;)

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vij10

@vij10

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Hey....Great effort ...I loved it...Very interesting ...Hope you will write many more ....me waiting eagerly....Cheers😊

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

awesome!...

very well written!

thnx 4 the pm!

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

You know what???? I absolutely LOVE IT!! You are a magician with words. I absolutely loved the plot, the scenes, the humour and everything. Specially the last line was wonderful.....

Placing a tender kiss on her forehead he said, "Because you love me, Geet. Because we belong together

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

It was so fab

I jus loved Manisha n Romeo here

They were mindblowing

Geet in talliness was telling all thgs

It was yaar

She agn won Maan's heart

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

awesome, fantastic one dear...............
just loved it.................
seeing Maan jealous was the cherry on top................
every scene was so lovely...................