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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update yaar..loved it ....
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Nice reunion family..Geet knows that Maan is same person,.,or Maan knows she same Geet..
First read for your exam..we will wait for U..
Good Luck..
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awesome update.....
loved maneet's fight...
maan falling 4 geet, i wonder hw he wl react wen he wl know geet is d same girl he had insulted...
cont wenvr u cn.. wl wait 4 it..
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hey muskan...awesome update.... lolz i luved their fight....toooooooooo cute😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Sorry for the late update...


Part-12

Outside the Theater

Heer: Chutki why u always do this
Geet: Di..i dint do anything... It is all because of that looser When ever he is around me anything around me go wrong Di main bol rahi issey bol do mujh sey door rahe. Di aap mano yaa na maano ye meri life main snake kii thera beth gaya hain

Prem: Laughs . Ok ok Main boldunga Champ ko ok lets go nahi tho movie ka begning miss ho jaaye gi

Now they also proceeds towards the Theater

Geet: Vaise aap dono lad nahi rahe . Is everything is sought out between you two.

Heer: with smile yes...

Prem: also nodes his head...

Geet: then who will thank me ... this is all because of me... Jiju and u forget me

Prem: Thanks. Saali ji

Geet: Its ok .jiiju...

Heer: What do u mean.. all because of you...

Geet: Di this is all my plan to make sought problems between you two..

Heer to Prem: See this is my chutki ... Who is the perfect sister..

Geet: raise her eyebrows in proud

Prem yea lets go... take your seats...

(Actually Prem Seat is with Maan & Sameera, which is far from the seats of Geet & Heer)

As Geet is going towards her seat

Prem: Geet can you sit on my seat

Geet: ok. With a smile where is your seat he show her the ticket and its 5B and she take the and leaves from there (Geet dint know that her seat is with Maan)

Prem and Heer take their tickets start enjoying the movie They were going to see Golmaal 3

Geet also take her seat but she did not notice Maan.

Geet: is laughing thoroughly. In each and every scean and can't control herself

On the other hand Maan and Sameera are not watching the movie and just looking each other by enclose their hand in hand and geet laughing is disturbing Maan

Heer & Prem:

Heer: Where is geet gone...

Prem: To my seat...

Heer: Why...

Prem: Because I want to see this movie with u...i want to see u laughing... u looks more beautiful when u laughs...

Heer: Ok. Ok... By the way where is your seat...

Prem: Oh shit...

Heer: What happen

Prem: vo Geet kii saet pata hain kiskey saath hain...

Heer: oh don't say that... Maan Key saath...

Prem: Yes..

Both together oh shit yaar... ab kya hoga... yea dona phir shuru hoo jayenge...

Back to maan & Geet

Maan: hay can you make your volume low... & he turns... (Maan did not see her as her hands are on her face while laughing...)

Geet: yaa soory I'am trying but I cant the movie is really very funny (she can not see him as his back is towards her face Excuse me waise aap kyun nahi haans rahe hain . Aap normal tho hain.. then she tilt her head more and saw Sameera... and hit on the back of Maan and he turns

Both together tum...

Geet: in a crying tone hey bagwaan main kya karun yea phir aagaya...

Maan: main yahan phele aaya tha..

Geet: ok ok.. and change the topic waise tum yaahan kar kya rahe ho..

Maan: tum ko kya matlab hum kuch bhi karun

Geet: Ho.. now I got it... Chhii chii Tu dono yahan... Tum dono yahan Movie dekhne aaye ho yaa phi yea chi chi karne...

Maan: Oye miss pavitrata kii devi... Tum chup chap movie dekho...

Geet: Vohi tho kar rahi thi tum ney hi mujhe disturb kiy kitni mast movie chal rahi hain aur tum dono adult movie bana rahe hoo.. Chi Chi..

Maan: Tumko kya matlab hum kuch bhi kariney

Geet: mere saamney sey sab nahi chalega ok.

Sameera: whats ur problem.. y are u disturbing us

Geet: Vaise ek baath kahun tum bura mat maana .vaise bura maan bhi loogi tho mera kya bigadloogi.. tum jaise lidkiyaan hii ladkiyon kaa naam kharab kar rahe ho

Sameera: how dare u say this.. she shouts...

A man from the front seat turns and said.. if u people don't want to see the movie please leave atleast let us see...

Maan: Soory...

Geet gets up from her seat and said Maan to get up...

Maan: Why did I get up...

Geet: Please get up once then I'll not disturb u...

Maan: Pomise...

Geet: yea god promise...

Maan: vaise tum itnei bhi buri nahi hoo...

Geet: mujhe pata hain

Maan gets up of his seat as he gets up off his seat Geet sits on his seat...

Maan: why u sit on my seat...

Geet: Maine bola tha naa maere samney yea sab nahi chalega

Sameera: Tum sach main kitni LS..ho ..

Geet: Hun so wats your problem...

Geet: ab doono chupchaap beth kar movie deko...

Maan: hey bagwan main iss ladki kaa kya karun.. yea mere zindagi main jab sey aayii hain ek bhi pal chain sey nahi beta huun

Geet: shhh just watch the movie...

Now They all starts enjoying movie... Geet is laughing and Giggling & looks very cute...maan saw her and his eyes stuccked on her ...he is not watching the movie but just watching her each and every reaction... The way she claps and laughing... while she is laughing... Her curls come on her face and the way she put it behind her ear he just watching her.. While laughing she put her hand on Maa's hand Maan is just enjoying her touch and as he putting his hand on her hand she takes back her hand continue laughing...

Now the movie ends and Maan is still watching Geet

And lights goes on...and Maan comes to the real world... And Geet is watching him .

Maan: Tum mujhe aise kyun dekh rahi ho...

Geet: Iam trying to read your mind...

Maan: what and he stands up

Sameera comes to him and said lets go Maan...

Geet is still thinking...

Maan ya lets go...

Geet I know what u are thinking...

Maan: good for you...

Geet:: don't hesitate .. u want to thank me naa

Maan: For what?

Geet: because of me u saw sach a good Movie' infact u both should thank me'it is because of me you watch such a good Movie you both are just wasting yor time & money but I make worth it for both of you

Maan: Shut up why we thank u .. Even u wasted our time. and leaves with Sameera..

Geet: How dare he. I wasted their time and goes out..

Heer & Prem are outside waiting for them...

Geet comes to them Maan & Sameera are also there...

Geet: What jiju u know naa that ur seat is with this looser then even u send me their...

Do u know what they are doing there...

Heer: What are they doing...

Maan: Kya kar rahe thhee movi dekh rahe thee aur kya...

Geet: Nahi dii yea...mujhe tho khene main bhi sharam aa rahi hain...

Dii: yea dono naa.. come near to her ear ... Chi chi kar rahe theee.

Heer: Laughs. What Chutki.. u know u are still a child...

Maan: Yea bachi nahi hain Yea Hitler hain

Geet: Di.. bol do iss looser sey maine iss looser sey baath nahi kar rahi hun

Geet di I am waiting for u in the car com-on come fast... And she leaves..

Heer: please Maan uski Baathon kaa bura mat maana Vo dil kii bahut saaf hain

Maan: smiles. And said ok...

Heer: I also have to go Chutki is waiting for me they said bye to each other and Heer also leaves

Maan: Bhi I'll come later u go Home

Prem: ok and enjoy

Now geet & Heer reached Home

Geet: Agar agli baar vo looser mujhe kahi mila naa tho main uska saar phood dungi

Heer: geet: Please calm down And lets go Maa & Paa are waiting for us for the dinner

They go inside

In a resturent

Maan & Sameera are together.. having dinner

After the dinner Maan propose Sameera..and She accepted

Next day

Geet is waked up early morning.. And also awaked her Paa for walking

Mr. Malhotra & geet Reached the joggers park...

Mr. Malhotra: beta phele tum ney mujhe subaha subha uthaaya Aur yaaha le aayi hoo.

Geet: Paa this is important for u you now naa you are a dibetic patients

Mr. Malhotra: but now my sugarlevel is normal

Geet:: Come-on Paa by this I also get company paa apko pata hain main aur Papa naa rooz subha Jogging par jaate thee. Aup aapko pata hain unko bhi dibeties hain..

Geet suddenly said oh shit. Paa

Mr. Malhotra: what happen Geet

Geet: Paa apko pata hain Papa kaa sugar level kitna jyada hain..Aur vo tho jooging par bhi nahi Jaa rahe honge I know..

Mr. Malhotra: Yea beta u are right if he is going for Jooging then he should also be here. This Joggers Park is very near from his house

Geet: Paa after the Jogging lets go to Papa house.. I have to talk to him

After the Jogging Mr. Malhotra & Geet reaches Mr. khurana's house.

Mrs. Khurana welcomes them Geet touches her feet and she blessed her

Geet: Aunty Papa kahan hain

Mrs. Khurana can see the anger on her face

Mrs. Khurana: What happen beta why are u so furious

Mr. Malhotra: Mrs. Khurana aaj tho Mr. Khurana ko koi nahi bacha sakta...

Geet again aunty Papa kahan hain

Mrs. Khurana: apne kamrey main soo rahe hain

Geet: What abhi tak

Mrs. Khurana: yes beta

Geet: Papa kaa room kahan hain:

Mrs. Khurana: beta go upstairs then go right. And the first room...

Geet went upstairs and went to Mr. khuran's room...

Geet: Papa get up...

Mr. Khurana in sleep mummers.. Hitler Ki awaz par vo yahan kaise hoo sakti hain... Zaroor bura sapna dekh raha hunga

Geet: again call him Papa wake up...

Mr. Khurana: Yea Hitler ney tho neend main bhi aana suru kar diya hain he said.. oye Hitler main tumsey nahi darta

Geet: now as always she takes the Jug of water and pore the whole water on him

Mr. Khurana: now wakes up.. and shouts kya biwiji Hitler nahi hain tho ab aap bhi Hitler kii thera mujhe jaga rahi and open his eyes and saw Geet standing their in a bad mood...

Mr. Khurana: Hitler tum yaahan...

Geet: Papa aap walk par kyun nahi gaye aur aap abhi tak soo rahe hain...

Mr. Khurana: Nahi beta main rooz walk par jaata hun bas aaj hii nahi gaya... vo kya hain naa Today I'm not feeling well so I thought to take rest today ...

Geet: you are lying.. I know u very well... This is all ur excuses
Mr. Khurana: Nahi beta I'm not lying...

Geet: Ok let me ask aunty... and she leaves from there... and scream aunty aunty

Mr. Khurana behind him beta there is no need to ask her...

Geet went downstairs and still screaming by her noise Maan also wakes up. And shouts who is shouting this early morning

Nobody answer him and Geet voice kept disturbing him

Maan also comes out of the room

Downstair Geet asked Mrs. Khurana

Geet: Aunty did Papa everyday goes for jogging

Mrs Khurana: saw Mr. Khurana who is gesticulating to say yes

Geet: Turns behind and said aunty please tell me the truth

Maan also came and standing upstair and saw geet shouting

Maan: Tabhi main boolun shuba shuba itna shoor... agar yea Hitler ho gii tho shoor hi hoooga

Geet: Aunty Papa kii baath mat sunaa you just tell me the truth

Mrs. Khurana: Yes beta, he is not going for jogging

Geet: Turns toward Mr. Khurana in anger and said I know Papa .. you always do this

How many times I told you please concern about your helth but no u always do this

When u will care and concern about your health.. Paa I told u naa he always make excuses about his health..

Maan is standing there and listening all this...

Geet: Your punishment for today is that you will not having. Tea now..

Mr. Khurana: But beta I'm not taking tea... you now naa tea is restricted for me

Geet to Mr. Malhotra & mrs. Khurana: See he is trying to fool me.. Papa I now that form the day u reached India you are having tea. so don't try to fool me..

Geet: Aunty now onwards Papa is not having tea.. and if he insist u just call me .. then I'll look after him

Mrs. Khurana: beta u are the only one who can bring him on the line

Maan: is just watching her that how easily he convience his Dad...And the way she rebuke on him and how carring she is Maan is just watching her and smiling

Mr. Malhotra comes to Mr. Khurana: By the way mr. Khurana you named her correct Hitler very much suits her & they smiles

Geet: Papa main jaa rahi hu par iska matlab yea nahi kii aap aunty par gussa kar ke Tea le lenge

Mr. Khurana: Just nodes his head in no..

Geet: Lets go Paa

As she is going she saw Maan upstairs she twitched her nose with an annoyed look towards him and leaves..

After they both leaves

Mr. Khurana: Iss ladki naey tho mera jeena haram kar diya hain

Mrs. Khurana: Aaap usey itna darthe hain?

Mr. Khurana: Main usey dartha vartha nahi huun vo bas bachhi hain isliye maine usey kuch nahi kahata..

Maan comes down and said yes Dad vo tho hum sab ney dekha ki kun kisey kitna dartha hain.. And Mrs. Khurana & Maan smiles

Mr. Khurana: oK ok.. and leaves from there

In the evening in Malhotra Manssion..

Heer; & her Mother planning something Mr. Malhotra also joines them.

Mr. Malhotra: wooaw heer this a great plan.. but she din't like this we all know her very well..she don't like all this

Heer: Paa don't worry about that this time we do something she'll going to love that..

Mrs. Malhotra: are u sure Heer

Heer: Yes 100% sure...infact this idea is given me by Khurana uncle

Suddenly Geet comes there. .. and they just change their topic...

Mr. Malhotra: you Know what happened today... And he just narrate them the morning incident and they laughs...

Mr. Malhotra: you should see Mr. khurana face.. it was like a small bbaby..

Geet: You know Paa he always do this

Suddenly Heer Phone rings its Mr. Khurana

Heer excused herself and pick up the call..

Heer: hey heloo uncle is everything is done

Mr. Khurana: But we have to meet for this.

Heer: ok Uncle I am coming to your house

Mr. Khurana: Please get Mr. Malhotra also there

Heer: Ok uncle we are reaching in just a while

Mr. Khurana: ok just make it fast

Heer Paa I forget told you that there is small get to gether in Prem House so they invited us also

Mr. Malhotra: and u are telling this now..

Heer: I'm sorry Paa I tolally forget about that

Mrs. Malhotra.. What happed is happened no get ready fast they are waiting for us

Mrs Khurana: but why Chutki

Heer to herself (Thank god yea nahi aa rahi)

Geet: Di I don't want to come you go and enjoy

Heer: Maa if she don't want to come let her be naa

Mrs. Malhotra: ok beta we are going u properly have your dinner ok

Geet: yea sure Maa

Mr. Malhotra call Ramukaka. & instruct him to take care of Geet

Now all reach to Khurana Manssion

There Mr.& Mrs Juneja & prem is already presented

They welcome them

Niow they Talking about the Geet's Surprise Birthday Party

Mr. Malhotra: Mr. Khurana Heer told me you have planned something

Mr. Khurana: Yes as we all know that Hitler don't like to atted Parties and all that. You know even in London she always celebrate her birthday with me & Maaddy .and dances in Retro songs with me and Maddy even we also love that


So I Have plan for her 21st birthday... lets have a theme Party. And the Theme of the Party will be Retro Period...because Hitler loves Retro music. So what say..

Prem: Awasome Uncle.. Its Perfect.. loved you idea...

Maan also comes there and greet everyone and asked Pream hey Bhi what is all this happing What u people planning about

Heer: We are Planning about Chutki's Surprise birthday

Maan: you mean Hitler's Birthday

Mr. Khurana: Maan

Maan: ok soory no Hitler.. Chuti's birthday

Mr. Khurana: That's ok..

Maan: so what u guys planned

Prem: Uncle give us an idea of Retro Theme party

Maan: Soory Daad Par yea party apkey liye nahi hain. Retro is such a boring theme

Mrs. Malhotra: par beta she loves the retro songs and the period

Maan: us behenji Koo dekh kar hi lagta hain kii usey aaisey hi boring theme party pasand hogi

Heer: hey Maan don't u dare say this ..

Maan: I'm soory

Heer: You should be

They are made many plans and distributed the work to everyone. And is decided that party will be held in Mr. khurana's house as all set up they all have Dinner

In Malhotra Manssion:

Geet is in her room & suddenly lights goes off she is really scared and shouts Paa... Paa too nahi hain

Maa Maa bhi nahi hain

Di.. Dii bhi nahi hain

Aa le tu bhi kitni budhu hain Jo ghar main nahi hain unko aawaz laga rahi hain aur joo ghar main hain unko tho aawaj nahi de rahi hun

And she shouts Raukakaaa

Ramukaka dint hear her as he is outside the manssion

Then she calls Mr. Malhotra. But he dint pic up.

Then she called mr. Khurana and maa picked the call

Geet: heloo Papa please jaldi ghar aa jaao ghar main koi nahi hain aur light bhi nahi hain her heart beats farter and faster in fear. And she fall down

Maan: drops the pone and runs to his car. And reach Malhotra mansion.. in Geet's room.. He shouts Hitler. Hitler..

Then he saw Geet was on the floor and fainted He picked her up and layed her down on the bed as he laying her down he is very much close to her as he can hear her heartbeat very well and just starring. Her beauty then Ramukak came there and saw Maan there and shouts what happened & Maan told him everything then Ramukaka brings water and Maan sprinkle water on her face

Ramukaka gose to check the main Socket

Maan is still spinkling water on her face she gain some consciousness and again see the dakness and shouts and hold Maan's Hand tightly. And faints again

Maan pat on her face to wake her and just staring her

Suddenly Maan Phone Rings

Prem: Hello maan Maan: yes bhi

Prem: where are u?

Maan: Mr. malhotra's home

Prem: Why what r u doing there r u there to fight with my saali

Maan: No bhai and explain the whole sitution to him

Prem: What.. Ok u wait I'am coming there..

Prem inform everyone about... geet's condition

And everyone ran towards the home

Mr. Malhotra she is very afraid of darkness

Mr. Khurana: Yea I Know this also happens In London also

In Malhotra Manssion.

Maan's one hand is still holding by Geet's and other hand on the Geet's face and just satarring her. then suddenly light comes and he come to his senses but he is still lost in her beauty

And all comes in the room Maan leaves her hand and stand up

Mr. Malhotra, Mrs. Malhotra, Heer, Mr. Khurana & Prem come near her.

Mr. Malhota also tries to wake her up and then suddenly Geet gain her consiceness and she gets up and tightly hug Mr. Malhotra and cries.

Mr. Malhotra: Beta what happened

Geet: din't say any thing and just crying

Mr. Malhotra releases her from his embrace and cupped her face in his palms and say .

What happen beta why are u crrying

Mr. Malhotra: wipes her tears and said her to be relaxed.

Ramukaka also comes there

Geet: again hugs her paa and said. Paa apko pata hain main kitna dar gayi thi.. Paa.. don't leave me. She hugs him tightly

Mrs. Malhotra: Beta hum kahin nahi jaa rahe tum plese phele rona band karoo.

Mrs. Malhotra to Ramukaka: kaka kya isne Khana khaya

Ramukaka: No . maine bitiya ko bola tha par isney bola kii muhje book nahi hain

Mrs. Malhotra: what chutki u din't have your dinner

Geet: nodes her head in no

Mr. Khurana: she always did this She take care of others but din't take care of herself

Geet: because I know that u all are here to think about me. Aab kya sab kaam main hi karungi and smiles and all other people alo smiles

Maan is also smiles to see her smiling in this situation also

Heer: Tujhe abhi bhi Mazaak suujh raha hain. Iss halat main bhi chup nahi beath sakti and hugs her tujhe pata hain jab Prem ney humey bataya tho hamaari tho jaan hi nikal gayi thi tujhe pata hain naa tu hum sab k liye kitni important hain

Geet: haa vo tho main hunn.. In a self-important tone

Prem: so saali ji. Ab aap kaisi hain

Geet: Main theek hun ok Jiju tho phone par aap they. Thanks Jiju

Prem: for what

Geet: vo apney hi tho sakoo bataaya mere bare main

Prem: Thanks Mujhe nahi Champ koo boolo (Geet is surprised)kyunki vahi yaan sabsey phele pauchaa tha aur isiney mujhe bataya tha.. (Geet is very surprised and looked towards Maan with surprised look) Maan smiles

Geet din't thanks him and turn her face ..

Maan ho himself ek tho Maine iski help karii upper sey mujhe thanks bolney kii jagahe yea mujhe attitude dee rahi hain isskii jaisii ladki Maine kahi nahi deekhi

Heer: Chutki thanks bol champ koo..

Geet: Dint say anything

Heer: Chutki thanks bol

Geet: Di main nahi bolongii thanks vo bhi iss looser koo kabhi bhi nahi

Maan: Mujhe tumhare Thanks kii jaaroorath bhi nahi hain. You darpook.

Geet: Main darpook nahi hun . Maan hain mujhe pata hain ki tum kitni darpook hoo yaa nahi

Ramukaka comes with the food..

Mr. Khurana: ok u don't say thanks to him. And u are not a darpook ok Just have food.

Geet: ok.. Papa and give Maan an irritated looks

Mrs. Malhotra feeds her and Maan leaves from there..

PART-13

Edited by geeta.muskan - 13 years ago

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